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By : Avarwen
  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on March 29, 2018

    I have ENDURED 12 MORE CHAPTERS. I just want to say I LOATHE YOU. I am ONLY hanging around for the love of Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's "HAPPY ENDING" IDK IF they can even have a BELIEVABLE ONE AFTER ALL OF THIS HELL. YOU ARE A MISERABLE BITCH! I WILL NEVER READ ANYTHING WITH YOUR NAME ATTACHED EVER AGAIN. I HOPE you Get THERAPY. Instead of writing PUBLICLY. Your DISTURBED and NO ONE should be TRICKED into your SADISTIC WORLD EVER!!!! YOU MAKE ME WANT TO PUKE! END THIS ALREADY YOU EVIL BITCH!!!


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  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on March 29, 2018

    OMG... This chapter is just... TRASH! GARBAGE! You should SERIOUSLY just remove it! I've hung in"there for a FEW character misalignments... But THIS GARBAGE is thee WORST of them all! Not JUST character OCC'ness PEOPLE. HUMAN BEHAVIOUR wise it is NOT relatable AT ALL! SERIOUSLY AS a MOTHER myself... I can tell you ANY MOTHER could tell you that THIS "For several moments they sat like that, just enjoy the other�s presence, before Izayoi made the mistake of thinking again, and she found herself being drawn back into the present-- into the more serious problems than just the naming of their grandchildren." While your ONLY child is in the CLUTCHES OF THEIR REPEAT RAPIST WOULD BE THE FURTHEST THING FROM THEIR MINDS!!! IDGAF WHAT ERA they are in!!! Did you NOT at LEAST HAVE A MOTHER growing up??? I mean even if you aren't one yourself... You HAD to have one right???? If NOT WHY ATTEMPT to WRITE about a relationship you are truly CLUELESS about???? Ughhh!!!! This chapter was BEYOND disappointing!!! I HOPE it picks back up in the next... Or I'll just have to chock this one up to the biggest WASTE of TIME EVER!


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  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on March 19, 2018

    It really REALLY pisses me off, how "laid back" the SECURITY is around this castle after the PRINCE himself has been RAPED ON it's lands! WHY is the birthing process so "loose lipped" NO concern for the RAPIST SIBLING right barging in on NAKED BIRTHING INU PRINCE??? Magic exist... What if he has her BUGGED something??? I swear... Some of the things that happen in this world seems young and ignorant of REAL threats to the lives of our beloved hynue and his pups man!! Irritating!


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  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on March 19, 2018

    Wow! I have not even been logged in! Just spending night after night wrapped in my blanket and in this fantasy! Assuming writer and most others have long gone and here I straggle alone bearing my questions to no one. Usually my imagination just fills in the blanks, this one however can't manage it! I didn't even realize the subject had been avoided until this chapter! How are you working with and around age here? Usually people take Demon years and extend lifespans so much that Inuyasha and his Okasa could not possibly be having sex in the same home! By the time Inuyasha is of appropriate mating

    age his mother is either dead or seriously an "Obasan" so my imagination is having a difficult time enjoying the scene! Help? Thanks amadderhatter {at} protonmail com is my email address if you wish to answer at all! Thanks in advance!


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  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on February 24, 2018

    Geeeze! Now I am worried. You described the short story for the season as "dark, depressing" and said if we can't handle THAT then we probably won't be able to handle what is to come HERE!? THIS is why I prefer AO3... The tags are MUCH more thorough! If someone is gunna post a sadistic disturbing work of Angst and DISPAIR ONLY, there are tags for that so a reader doesn't WASTE there time 13 FKIN CHAPTERS IN to be doscouraged from reading by being thrown for such a MESSED up HINT! DAMN SHOULD I QUIT READING THIS NOW OR WHAT??? I do not NEED MORE depressing shit on my mind!!! LIFE IS DEPRESSING ENOUGH! I READ SHIT HERE TO ESCAPE DEPRESSING SHIT! WTF!??? amadderhatter protonmail dot com ... EMAIL the answer PLEASE ! Shit man!


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  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on February 21, 2018

    Oh MY!!! I HOPE the Author still logs on occasionally to get reviews even though it has been so many years. It is my first time reading your work! Please let me say, and I HOPE this reaches your heart ありがとございまつ or arigato gozaimasu! This is SO BEAUTIFUL. I was going to hold my review to the end, since chances are slim that the author is even around... But damn I was moved to speak up now! This part you wrote shows such beauty eloquent raw talent... Right here near the end you wrote "

    Let the worries of tomorrow wait until then, and all regrets remain obsolete until the rising of the sun, because right now he had what his youkai so craved for. He had his mate. And, as far as he was concerned, in this moment in time, that was all he needed.

    And let all the consequences be damned to hell where they belonged!

    He was here, with Inuyasha, kissing him, and Inuyasha was kissing back. And that was what mattered the most right now.

    So he Tightened his grip on his brother�s small body, deepening the kiss and silently praying to never have to let go." I almost CRIED at the end of that sentence! You just swooped in and wrapped my heart up on love and passion!  You are INCREDIBLE! I HOPE you still write today!! You were BORN to do this apparently! Wow!


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  • From ANON - Dean Winchester on April 09, 2015
    When I read the part in chapter 4 about how Sesshomaru had been so distracted an put his head into the wrong hole reminded me of when I was younger an would ware my Speed Racer shirt as a night shirt since its a guys an big, I would very easily at times when putting it on would put my head right through where the sleeve is at xp
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2012
    Inu taisho means dog general actually :)
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  • From Penelope on August 25, 2011
    You are very good writer and im sure you already know that.

    Your story though very good i cannot continue reading, mainly because i don't like truma. It's a very painful experience that even as good of a writer you are cannot fully explain or understand, no matter what you think.

    When i read i find myself experiencing almost everything the main character does and if said character undergoes a truma experience, it is very hard for me to continue reading.

    Anyway, it was good while it lasted though, i think you give inuyasha too little credit, inuyasha would never go down without at least hurting his attacker
    thanks


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  • From Shiauko on June 08, 2011
    I went back and read chapter 12 but ... I'm still not entirely sure what Rin did. She didn't tell him to run off into the forest. So, what DID she do?
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  • From Shiauko on April 17, 2010
    So this means no Kagome?

    I love you.
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  • From KuroYoukia on April 03, 2010
    Uh hi again, once more I love the drama of the story and dun dun Izaoyi means sixteenth night, meaning the night of the full moon which I think is weird but it's still a beautiful name
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  • From KuroYoukia on April 03, 2010
    I love the story, its fucking amazing> Oh and I wanted to tell you the actual name of inu no toshia is Leader of dogs, hehe. I looked it up on a inuyasha talk site
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  • From ANON - Bunnybop05 on October 16, 2009
    You are my fav new author
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  • From myperversities on July 04, 2008
    WOW!!! This was great!!! So where the HECK is the sequal you promised in 2006???? XD Hate to inform you dear but it's not 2008 lol!! Better get cracking. Are you still planning on finishing this or have you given up on your writing?? Well anyways it was great what's there and though I would love to see a sequel I guess for now I'll be forced to make my own ending where inu taishou is brought back with tensaiga, they find the baby and they fix sessh's arm and inu's mind/body and remove the collar. WoW that's a lot to cover lol. Well anyways I hope you haven't abbandoned this as it would be much easier to read this stuff in a new story than to have to come up with it myself. ;)
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