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Reviews for The Trials and Tribulations of Parenthood

By : Takhisiss

From Mirokusdoll on January 01, 2011
I love how the story is progressing. The story line and characters are very interesting. I hope to get to read more chapters soon.
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From chrystalhearts on May 03, 2010
I enjoyed this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
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From madmiko on August 12, 2008
Chapter 8 was hilarious! What a great way to have Yusuke in the story. He got to enlighten Hiei about Youko's rotten advice and then he escorted Kurama's mother to his apartment, and sat down to watch the show. The poor woman didn't have a clue about her son and Yukina. Married? And then Hiei and Kagome show up to beat Youko. LOL!! I just about choked when Hiei was telling Yusuke what he done with the lotion and rolling her nipples. And Yusuke with his "Quack Quack Waddle Waddle" comment. He should have known she would hear him. They always hear the things you don't want them to. ^_^ Kagome's little strike against Hiei being a jerk was funny. That boy needs to start doing his fair share around that house. Great chapter!
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From madmiko on August 12, 2008
Don't listen to Youko! LOL!! Oh, they are going to get in so much trouble. I loved the way this chapter started off. Hiei has done a 180 and now instead of running away, he's dogging her footsteps. What is that poor girl to do? I cackled when he told her he doesn't follow her to the bathroom, he just waits outside it. And all I've got to say, is if he, Kurama, and Youko are all talking about "round" females when they're just three months pregnant, they all need to be snacked. Twice. Hard. LOL!! Hiei had better get a clue from Hojo, who said he couldn't even tell Kagome was pregnant, instead of from Youko, who was telling them "no means yes." LOL!! Too, too funny! I can't wait to see how this plays out. ^_^
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From madmiko on August 11, 2008
Oh, no! You remind me of another favorite author of mine who delights in tormenting my beloved Kagome. ^_~ I can't believe she lost her powers! And Yukina DIDN'T. Not only that, but sweet, mild-mannered, never-been-in-a-fight Yukina managed to fight the thing off. And Kagome's got the jewel? Wouldn't that give her 10 times her normal strength/agility/what-have-you? Of course, I guess that may be the only reason she managed to last as long as she did there with those two demon youngsters messing with her.

I loved it when Youko kicked Hiei when he was down and mentioned that IF HE HAD MARKED HER, HE WOULD KNOW. He could have communicated with her and would have known her health, condition, and whereabouts. That boy is getting one hell of a lesson that dragging his feet can lead to fatal consequences. The sad thing is that it's Kagome who is paying the price the price over and over. (I'm going to hold him down so she can kick him. ^_^)

I was intrigued that Kurama wanted Kuwabara to watch Yukina. That poor boy might not be over her yet. Poor Kazuma. I like him. ^_^

You're doing a great job of injecting hilarious spots of humor into this. ^_^
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From madmiko on August 11, 2008
Hiei is afraid to commit. LOL! He seems very human in this. I'm wondering how long he and Kagome have been together? It seems like it's probably been a while. And when she turns up pregnant, after however long of taking care of him and his heats, he blames her for it and leaves, giving birth to her fears. And even after her attempted suicide, he thinks a puppy is good enough to fix things without him having to take responsibility or even assure her of his feelings. His dead mother visits him in a dream to tell him that she would bless him marking her because she approves of her and he still goes winging it outside. That boy has some serious commitment/loyalty problems. *kicks his butt because I haven't done it for a few minutes* LOL! Kurama, on the other hand, invited Yukina to dinner last night, had sex with her, marked her as his mate, found out he's going to be a daddy and is whistling Dixie. I can't believe Kagome went home with him. And less than 12 hours after she tried to kill herself, with nothing having changed, he left her to take a run and think? Well, she didn't try to kill herself again, but I almost had to say it serves him right that she seems to be in danger. But that means more problems for Kagome. *sigh* That poor girl. I never thought Inuyasha would look so good ... LOL!!!
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From madmiko on August 11, 2008
I keep going back and forth between feeling sorry for Hiei and feeling like he needs his butt kicked. ^_^ The bit with the puppy was cute, and I loved it that the mutt messed up Kurama's garden and Kurama told him he hoped he planned to help fix it since it was HIS puppy. So, he goes home, without the flowers and decides to use the dog as his apology. No Kagome. HA! I just about peed my own pants when Hiei got mad at the dog and it cowered in the corner and peed in submission. LOL!! Then Yukina comes waltzing in at Kurama's all ready to give him the big news and Koenma and Hiei come barging in and steal her thunder. Poor girl. "I wanted to tell."

BUT, I really hate it when Kagome is written as being suicidal. I just can't see her ever being like that. She is eternally optimistic--always buoying everyone else's spirits and confidence when things look darkest. It's one of the things I love about her. Of course, I can see that you're using it to knock Hiei in the head. I loved that you wrote out the ritual, though, right down to her tying her legs. You did a great job on that. I was interested that her unborn child called out to Youko. That makes me think Shippou. But again, the fact that she would kill herself, which would mean killing her child really seemed OOC. And did I understand that she is having two? I thought it would be 1 of the Inu gang for her and 1 for Yukina. I'll have to read on to find out, won't I? ^_^
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From madmiko on August 11, 2008
Chapter Two, otherwise known as the one where Hiei is an ass. LOL! I can't believe he said that! Kagome should have zapped him one. And now she and Yukina are going to visit Genkai. It will serve him right to come home and find her gone. Kurama was so sweet to tell Yukina he would take care of her and any little ones they might have. *kicks Hiei's little butt* He'd better straighten up and fly right or I'm not writing him a lemon in my next chapter. And I loved the bit in the Reikai with the Inu gang coming up for reincarnation. I'm almost afraid to guess which two got picked. Inu and Kouga? Sango and Miroku? (You know, the thought of Inu or Kouga as Kagome's baby is kid ogf strange. LOL!)
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From madmiko on August 11, 2008
AAAuuuggghh! I was writing out my review and it all disappeared. Darn it. Anyway, I just finished the first chapter and I'm already feeling sorry for poor Hiei. Sitting outside Kurama's apartment for two hours while he and Yukina have dinner. "Who takes two hours to eat?" Then when the light goes on in the bedroom, he panics, then convinces himself Kurama just went in there for his jacket. He did, too. But when Yukina followed him ... Oh, those innocent ones get you in trouble every time. ^_~ And when Kagome comes over, Kurama spills the beans about her being pregnant and tells Hiei he should stop complaining about HIM marking Yukina and take care of his own woman, whom he HASN'T marked. good point, Kurama. Kagome, let him eat that KY jelly sandwich next time. Hmph! *grumble rottenmalesnevertakingresponsibility grumble* He'd better get his act together and do right by her! ^_^
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From cowgirlkitten2000 on May 02, 2007
omg i love this story very much. heh i remember telling my own husband no sex for 6 weeks and i swear he starting crying. please update this again soon, i cant wait to read about when they meet kagome's mom.
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From ptbear on March 17, 2007
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to read how Hiei acts through out the rest of the pregancy.
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From ANON - MIAmax(nsi) on December 02, 2006
I hope to see more of this story soon thank you.
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From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 04, 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2006
please write more
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From ANON - badkitty on February 06, 2006
I would hate to be Kagome's doctor, Hiei would have me fearing for my life. I don't know who I feel worse for the doctor or Kagome. If my husband had said to me what Hiei said to Kagome during the movie he woulda had a hand mark permanetly tatooed on his face. What a jerk, but a funny cute lil jerk. Update again soon.
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