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Reviews for Demon Slayer Sango

By : PinkRoseBouquet
  • From ANON - inuyoukai8 on December 14, 2005
    OMFG!!!!! update pleeeeaaaassseeee! i love this story
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  • From ANON - LtSonya on December 14, 2005
    Your story has been entertaining so far; it's not often that I find a fic that takes the relationship between Sesshomaru and Sango seriously. I can see how hard you're trying to keep the character's in balance. For Sesshomaru he's the arrogant demon lord but you also go to great lengths to show the softer side of him. The same goes for Sango showing that vulnerable part of herself. For the most part you do a good job with this, though Sango's reaction to Sesshomaru taking a mate (and an already decided one) I didn't quite believe the way she acted. Of course she's hurt and a part of her knew this would happen, but she's completely surprised. The way she calls him a monster, it just came off as childish and over-the-top. If you toned the scene down a bit and focused more on how hurt she's in - that internal conflict which I felt was lacking. Sesshomaru's last words were great though. It fit him well.

    - LtSonya
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  • From ANON - gina on December 13, 2005
    =( i dont think i like sesshomaru any more I LOVE THE STORY!!!! but he's a mr. jerky pants!!! =)
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  • From ANON - A face on December 13, 2005
    Damn....chapter 11 was harsh...Sessy could be so cold at times...but I love it all the say...Keep up the good writing.
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  • From ANON - your biggest fan on December 12, 2005
    OMG! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Luna on December 12, 2005
    I can't believe you're not getting many reviews for this fic... It's really well planned out, and it's not just lemon crap in the first chapter like I see in most sess/sang stories. I appreciate the fact that you took the time to think out a good plot and the angst in chap.11 adds a nice touch - can't wait to see what happens next! Please keep writing - I'm sure more people will show up and read your story!
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  • From ANON - liz on December 12, 2005
    wow is all i got to say about that chapter
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  • From ANON - phoenix23 on December 12, 2005
    OH MY GOD! I loved this chapter!! It was fantastic!! Poor Sango!! That bastard Sess for sticking to his unrealistic pride...I love this story!! You writing is great, I love the pace of this fic and also the plot. Please continue!!

    ~Sonya
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  • From ANON - EatAPeach on December 12, 2005
    I really like what you have going so far. It's rare to find a well-written Sango/Sessh pairing, and I'm glad to have found this one. Great work! Please, update soon!
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  • From ANON - bronhi on December 12, 2005
    Oh snap. A Sango/Sesshoumaru fic with a plot! We want more! This is a really interesting story.
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  • From ANON - Face on December 11, 2005
    Okay...me again... I thought I gave you that advice to move your fic here but I must have told somebody else that and not you....my bad I get stories mix up...but I still love this one. Get job.
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  • From ANON - Just another face on December 11, 2005
    I love this fic...at first I thought I lost you when you move the story under InuYasha but I see that you took my advice inorder to gain more reviews...well good luck in that. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - gina on December 10, 2005
    great chapter!! i really liked it alot!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Liz on December 10, 2005
    once again, another great chapter! I hope more people will read and review it, it is a great story thus far
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  • From ANON - Devoted Reader on December 09, 2005
    Very, very good story. It is amazing how you are able to keep Sesshomaru in character at the sametime make him do something that is very out of character (like falling in love with Sango). You are an amazing writer to be able to pull of something like this, the be able to make Sesshomaru fall in love with Sango in his very unique way. I personally find it quite enjoyable that Sesshomaru did not try to romanticize Sango or to charm her like many other authors have attempted to do in their stories, but rather in your story Sesshomaru had a rather detacted and methodical approach to it. Reflicting perfectly his youkai (inhuman) nature. I certainly hope that you enjoyed writing this story as much as I enjoyed reading it. Good luck on your next chapter.
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