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By : mshutts

From ANON - Ohsnap on April 03, 2007
Update already please hurry jeez not trying to be pushy, but this is taking to long.
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From Limericks on March 29, 2007
Just wanted to let you know I'm like an addict waiting for her crack:) No pressure though. I'm sure when you find the time you will turn out something phenomenol. I can just barely wait. Thank You for writing this story. There aren't enough good Inuyasha/Sesshomaru stories out there. Most writers stop after a couple of chapters even when the story is going good. I'm so thrilled that you've even taken this story this far. Hope all is well with you and your family and eagerly awaiting the next installment:D
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From Stormborn Apostle on March 25, 2007
Hey, I hope you update this soon...I love the story and can't wait to see another chapter! ^_^
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From Shinimegamihime on February 15, 2007
Wow!! I haven't been able to stop reading! This is really well thought out and organized. All of your rationalizations quell all the questions very well, at leats to me. I like how your going about the characters personalities; while still trying, and succeding, in staying true to how rumiko discribes them!! It is always enjoyable to read somthing that has had this much thought put into it! I can't wait for the next chapter, but please take your time. No matter how much I want to read what happens next I want you to be able to put as much consideration in to it as you have for ever preceeding chapter.
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From on February 07, 2007
Please don't tell me that's all. It's been almost a month since you've updated. It almost makes me wonder if your not going to finish this story. I know that Shippo's perspective is hard to write and I commend you for doing such an AWESOME job at it. You really seemed to get inside his head really well. But I gotta wonder what's gonna happen now that Shippo's fears have been abolished will the rest of InuYasha'a pack accept the fact that he's mated to Sesshoumaru and that he now has the ability to bear children. I am waiting for the B*tches reaction to that. Sorry. I don't really like Kagome all that much even if she is the first friend that Inuyasha's ever had. I don't think that Sango would have that much of a problem considering everything she knows about Yokai customs and behaviors. I don't think that Miroku would have a problem either. He seems to accept the fact that love is a good thing even if they are males and the rest of the world isen't that accepting. Well I for one am hoping that you do indeed update soon. I wish you luck with the next chapter and I was sorry to hear about your girls. I hope that they don't get that sick, for your sake. Ja Ne.
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From Susinko on January 28, 2007
I really love this story. I've been following it off and on for some time. I love the way you have done this entire story. Everyone seems so real. I love the way that you are doing things. The transformation from a normal male youkai (or hanyou in this case) to one that can bear children is just cool.

I also love the way you point out that poor Shippo really isn't getting trained in any way while he was with Kagome and company. One thing I've always wondered was how come we see Shippo transform into all kinds of things, but he never transforms into his youkai fox form. We know that he should be able to; his poor Dad was in his true form when he was killed. I personally wonder if he worries what Kagome would think of him if he did. Ah well.

I really look forward to your next update!
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From Limericks on January 22, 2007
I LOVE this fanfiction! I think the characterization is great. Sesshomaru is still himself and you don't have Inuyash acting like a 2 year old which happens in a lot of fanfictions. I love the whole storyline and I cannot wait to see what happens next. I've read this story like 3 times in one week and am now officially obsessed. THANKS so much for writing this story.
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From ANON - peeps on January 11, 2007
I am truly enjoying this story. Please continue
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From ANON - Tricia on January 09, 2007
I was so happy ro read an update-I love the story-plz continue! Hope Inu and Sess have a girl!!!!
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From ANON - gen on January 02, 2007
i was re-reading your fic last night. like i said, yours is one of the few
in my favorite list...

i realized i was curious as to what happened to the rabbits Sesshoumaru caught
When he returned to give his youki a chance - i am supposing he simply dropped them.
i have such a long review but the internet -for review is choppy....
so i should draft it first and paste......i'll check your email of website if i can reach you there
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From ANON - Snowfall on December 31, 2006
I was right! I had to let the chappie rest for awhile and come back to it in order to see it for the first time. You made my eyes tear up twice. *sniffle* Poor Shippou. The horror of finding out that your life has been snatched away and having no idea what is to come. A terrible thing for a child. No one could have truly felt what he was feeling. I'm sure that Inuyasha had some clue since he had been bereft of his parents. And, in youkai terms, humans would not be around very long for Shippou. I felt so very bad for his dilemma. It was a nice addition that Sturaki did notice and attempted to help Shippou. I just love her. I've been hooked since her first appearance.

Observations from Shippou's point of view are very refreshing. He notices things that people don't give him credit for. I found it heartwarming that he felt that he should have remembered and warned the others of mating season. He seems to take some responsibility for the care of the group. I could feel his poor little heart sinking as Inuyasha listed his short-comings. Knowing that it was Sesshoumaru's final decision that would decide his living arrangement was very intelligent. There is so much from Shippou's POV that it his difficult to comment on them all. And one thing that this did bring to mind is that Shippou always attempted to help out in battle, even in the worst ones. Yeah, he was obviously scared, but he did his best to pull his own weight. It reminded me of the episode with the band of seven when he successfully kept the fire away from the others while they were poisoned. And then his bawling when that wasn't enough to save them and he thought that they were dead. He did keep the fire at bay. No, Shippou did his best to pull his own weight. He is underestimated. I'm glad that you have made him an integral part of this.

You managed to keep Inuyasha in character, even as he tried to comfort Shippou. I believe that Inuyasha's intelligence is also underestimated. He might not be all lovey-dovey, but he does care a great deal about everyone in his pack and plans ahead, though they don't realize it. You've made a few good points about those things in your fic without getting the characters OOC.

OMG! Sesshoumaru! You did such an awesome job with keeping him in character! He didn't just accept Shippou because of Shippou's relationship with Inuyasha. He made Shippou agree to a pact, made Shippou behave responsibly. Sesshoumaru made it clear that he would be no pushover. He immediately asserted his role as alpha. Great job! LOve it!

Oh, my. What does it mean that Sesshoumaru walked into the room and shut the door. I can't wait to see what that is all about. What will happen with Inuyasha's group? I don't remember whether or not Naraku has been vanquished yet, but if not, what will happen to the hunt? I need to go and do some backtracking. So many questions that I won't list them all!

I can hardly wait to see the next chapter. My apologies on such a late review, but I needed to step back and read it over.

Chapter two of Centennial Hunger was beta'd and I added a bit to it. I'm sure that it was an eyesore if you read it before. Sorry, I won't do it again. Promise. ^_^

Snow

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From ANON - nell on December 30, 2006
:) I was so happy when I saw this was updated. And it was as good as ever.
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From ANON - Glomping-Kawaii FF.net on December 29, 2006
Whew 33 chapters and Finally Lemon! hmm could of been better I say but hey Finally. Hope hes not a jerk in the nxt ch. Well Ty I feel like writeing now ^^
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From ANON - Aresy on December 27, 2006
Oh i know u hear this quite a lot but i hope u up date realy soon..u left me hangin there lol. I also wonder if, even though it was done a billion times, (i still luv it) if u will show inuyasha in his human form at one point? hehe I always luv how Sesshoumaru reacts to it. :P Anyways, this is one of my favorite stories. keep up the great work, but i know u have a life outside of it hehe.
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From ANON - Aresy on December 27, 2006
First of all, i just like to say that you have kept both the brothers in character as much as they would be if they were in this type of situation hehe. I'm enjoying, especially your take on sesshoumaru. Great job really. He is IC and i love him. ^_^ I also love the idea of the human and demon side of inuyasha. I have thought of this myself, although relating it to my own mind lol. I always feel i have 3 people in me lol. Anyways, i like how sesshoumaru obviously would not fully understand his brother until he really went into his mind. It is interesting that inuyasha wouldn't remember anything. Its also interesting how you let us look in to his thoughts a bit deeper. He has really been put down a lot, especially by his older brother. I agree with the human side of inuyasha a lot lol. His demon side is a bit scary and also annoying because he is so submissive lol. (which is a great contrast^^) I also like that you didn't right way write that inuyasha is preg. I feel that has been done a lot and its good that u made a great reason for why inuy. should and is able to have pups. This is a great fanfic because you really see the two characters grow and they finally are able to understand each other better as the story progresses. Its also fun to see that they both have totally logical points to their way of thinking, but also, Inuyasha's human side kinda of speaks the mind almost of the *reader* (at least i see it that way). I can see why its mad because submission is not totally something a human has ever in mind when it comes to having a healthy relationship with another. This really shows the difference between humans and demons and the conflict of having both of them present in the mind of Inuyasha. ^^
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