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By : mshutts
  • From ANON - PurinsuArashi on October 19, 2006
    Freaking sweet! You came back! Goddess, I have missed you!
    Great chapter, highly impressed. I'v been waiting for a while here for ya, ill be herer till the very end. =3
    I hope things are going well for you. Keep up the great work!

    Thank so much for your update!

    Storm
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on October 18, 2006
    Thank you very much for updating. I await your next and congradulate you on your writing so far.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on October 18, 2006
    Yes! Another chappie! Oh wow! *fangirly squeal* Inuyasha is finally feeling secure and loved! It was absolutely heartwarming when Sesshoumaru asked for Inuyasha's help and the affection that he showed. He seems to be learning rather quickly. Was it everything that Inuyasha told him while they were in Inuyasha's head? I was glad to see Sesshoumaru being so well behaved. Inuyasha's reaction was simply precious. *warm fuzzies and hugs self* Inuyasha's worry over his friends was very believable and you expressed it very well. He was very much in character. Excellent!

    Oh! Inuyasha never passes out when Kagome sits him! Nice cliffie! I love action and cliffies and that was just what was needed. Some people hate them, but I like not knowing what is going to happen next. It makes for a much more interesting story.

    Also, a chapter this length is perfectly fine if it has this much progression and means quicker updates. ^_^

    Snow
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  • From ANON - Sekre on October 18, 2006
    Eep, Kagome better run :3
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  • From ANON - DemonGoddess061 on October 18, 2006
    Dang it! Too short too short too short!!!

    hehe

    Well, I think that Sess will not kill her. At least not yet....if ever....^-^.

    ..errrmmm... Sturaki to the rescue maybe in next chapter? After all, she has much to teach Inu about his newly forming powers. Not to mention she seemed more than a little annoyed (but understanding at the same time) at some of Kagome's behavior while they were travelling together.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 01, 2006
    Ohhh this story is wonderful!!! Can't wait for another chapter, so update!!!!!
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  • From ANON - heather on September 29, 2006
    This is one of the best stories ive read on this website. I really like how you write this story and how you bring out your main carectors to seem so real and their personalitys to be very strong, emotionally moving (to me), and very real. I really hope that you finish this story and update as soon as you can. :)
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  • From ANON - Bluesake on September 26, 2006
    I love this story. It has to be one of the best in this fandom that I have read. Please do continue it!!!! b
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  • From ANON - chibifae on September 19, 2006
    wow. that pretty much sums it up lol. i love what u've done. update update update. well...... what are waiting for?
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  • From ANON - Shirohane on September 19, 2006
    Hi, nice to meet you. My name is Shirohane and I wanted to tell you how much pleasure I received from reading your story. Truth be told, I'm not a big fan of Inu Yasha and I do not have a deep background information on the original work itself, nor know much about the characters. But even with my limited knowledge it was amazing how in character everyone was, and how a lot of the storyline itself seemed to reflect the original story. You do an especially lovely job with the two main characters, Inu Yasha and Sesshoumaru. It's interesting how they are both rough and have trouble with expressing their feelings outside, but inside they are kinder and sweeter than anyone else.
    I liked how you developed the story as well. You did not rush their relationship, and slowly wove the tale of how their feelings for each other grew over time. It was believable and extremely well-written. I could truly absorb myself into the story without feeling, well, someone rushing me along when I'm not ready to move yet. I liked how you used multiple points of view to express one situation; e.g., I could see the story in Inu's point of view, then in Sesshou's point of view. That cleared up quite few things and their respective emotions were well-coveyed.
    The entire idea of demon/halfling demon mating is overused, but you wrote it so that it seems fresh and completely new. Not only is this a story about Inu and Sesshou's developing relationship, but also about how people around them react to the two and there is a bigger picture encompassing everything--what is Inu Yasha's true powers, and what will the two's relationship result in the long run? How will Inu and Sesshou handle the new troubles that are overshadowing their lives?
    Overall I am completely enchanted with this story and I hope to see a litter of beautiful puppies soon. (Ganbare, Sesshou-chan. *warai*) I drew an illustration for you. Take a deep breath and approach with caution, because I do not have an ounce of talent and what you see may rot your eyes. (Hahaha;;)
    http://s5.photobucket.com/albums/y175/hiirowing/IY_Prophecy.jpg
    If this site somehow does not allow html codes to be displayed in reviews, please e-mail me or visit my website for the picture. (http colon double slash shirohane dot co dot nr ) Thank you for the lovely story. :D
    P.S. I agree with you whole-heartedly on one issue. If no one would write the kind of story you want to read, you have no choice but to write it yourself... TvT;;;;
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  • From ANON - BirdieBlythe on September 18, 2006
    Oh yeah so nicceee! Update again soon! Please!!
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  • From ANON - Yaoisa on September 16, 2006
    Nice, verrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyy nice job. I enjoyed this chapter eminsily. I look forward to the next update whenever it may be. Don't forget your readers on MM.org k? Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 15, 2006
    I love this story so much, it's the only reason I'm into inuyasha fanfiction. And this chapter turned out just how I thought it would, I'm so happy! Great work!!
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on September 14, 2006
    hurray! you updated. it was once again
    a wonderfully done chapter. i want to
    see what the others will do also when
    they find out. oh yeah, you never
    explained the significane of the
    tree as sesshomaru's mating mark. why
    did he have that mark. i can understand
    the mark on inuyasha's back. but the one
    on sesshomaru's back is a mystery. will you
    explain that later on in the story?

    oh well, nothing i can do now except
    wait with bated breath until the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - DarkLadyNyara on September 14, 2006
    Aww... I like. This was a good chapter. I especially like how Myoga decided not to interfere. Somehow I don't think the rest of the gang is gonna be so understanding.
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