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By : mshutts

From ANON - Snowfall on July 29, 2006
So, there was turmoil taking place elsewhere in the palace, eh? Inuyasha's friends must be making quite a stir. I hope that you make them three dimensional in their actions, thoughts, speech...and stuff; as opposed to what is often stereotypical in fics. Sesshoumaru's behavior was quite sweet. I do hope that he actually learned something and is able to truly change his behavior toward Inuyasha. And there is still that damn rosary to think about. I really do wonder what is draining Inuyasha's youkai. I have a guess, but I'm probably way off. I'm really anxious to see how his friends respond. Oooh, and that boogie man is still out there. So many things going on that Inuyasha is completely unaware of. Will the human half of him gain the mark now? Or will they have to have some other ritual? Just thoughts running through my head.

Well, I anxiously await your next chapter.

Snowfall
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From ANON - Melissa on July 28, 2006
Please right more. This is the best InuYasha fanfic I have read so far and BELIEVE ME that is saying something. You have done an amasing job with this story. I love it. Please Please (by the way this it the first review i have ever made because i couldn't find a story to deem worthy enough until now) Please write more.
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From ANON - wendyghost on July 16, 2006
yep, i forgot all about them! sessy and inu are just to sexy together!
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From ANON - VDHerry on July 11, 2006
I'm really liking this story.
It's not like the other Inu/Sess mating stories I've read.
And I love how you have Shippo think of Inuyasha as his father.
I can't wait to see how Kagome and them react.

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From ANON - D/H on July 06, 2006
How can one forgot that bitch!!!

Anyway, the ONE thing i hate about Inu/Sess stories are how hateful and annoying Kagome is..ALL
authors and when i say ALL, i mean, ALL the authors protray her that way, always getting what she wants and
always 'sitting' Inuyasha and him not being able to do a damn thing about it..I see your story is the same thing and
that's oone of the reasons why i STOPPED reading this story of yours, a year ago..I just hate the fact that authors protray her
that way but don't solve the problem, like, fucking have Inu or Sess, freaking tell her off, or just damn right KILL her off!!

I just hate her soo much and you're also not doing a damn thing about her, and it seems as thou you're also avoid it, don't know why.
Why is all the stories like that, having her sit him, and stuff like that, just becuz the bitch couldn't have her way..I only read 1, where Inu
actually almost choked her becuz of it and that felt GREAT too read..Well, he was older and stuff with kids but that was a great story, still is, but
not finished, and i doubt it'll ever be finished..

Why are you and MANY authors avoiding this problem(Kagome) and her stupid 'sitting' thing???If you think it makes it more intersting or
whatever, it's just not good reading and is making me want to stop reading this fic,..

So, lasting, what you going to do about it???

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From ANON - Lamia on June 30, 2006
Bless you for writing such a gorgeous fic and for sharing it with all the readers. Also thank you a million times for putting so much effort into the characterization. Too many of the "Inucest" stories involve sudden realizations of love and dewy eyes all around, you know? It's hardly plausible given what we know about the characters and their situations. But you delve deeply into the characters' psyches and examination their motivations and thought processes and every single word of it is totally believable. In one of the earlier chapters I laughed so hard at Sesshoumaru's rationalizations and in another (though I don't recall which) Inuyasha made a statement that was so HIM, it just bowled me over. This story is a gem in the category (and on the whole site, at that), and I'm very much looking forward to reading more. I rarely leave reviews (lazy!!! -.-;;), but I just had to tell you what a fantastic piece this is. It's so long, too! Extra gold stars for that, and even more for the lack of grammatical errors! It's just beautifully moving to see such a professionally executed and impeccably written fanfic.

I think I've rambled on long enough, but just a final note (though I realize you've probably already been informed of or somehow or other discovered the information for yourself) is that what you call Sesshoumaru's "fur accompaniment" (which I think is a terrific term for it) was referred to by Takahashi Rumiko in an interview (or some such thing) as "mokomoko-sama". I can definitely see why you wouldn't use that name for it, though, as it's highly doubtful any of the characters (except for perhaps Jaken and Rin) would ever refer to it as such.

Anyway, thanks again for the superb read. I'm eagerly anticipating the next installment. Best wishes!
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From ANON - myloveforyou on June 21, 2006
Your story is really good. The writing is good and the plot is too. I like the fact that it it a story and not just smut, you don't get much of those. My favorit character is deffinatly the witch, you did a great job with her. I can't wait for those beads to go, haha. Thanx for writing this and sharing it!
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From ANON - Karen on June 21, 2006
Well, what do you expect? Inuyasha and Sess were too yummy to be thinking of anyone else! Damn, this is starting to get like a drug for me. I haven't had any in a bit, and i'm getting restless. Loving it, bw. So keep going!
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From ANON - Burning Plague on June 20, 2006

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From ANON - Burning Plague on June 20, 2006
I've been reading this story for two days now and haven't been able to get enough of it. I don't really write reviews very much, so just bear with me cause i'm not all that good at them. I'll try to give you the best constructive critisism that I possibly can (please ignore the spelling too,
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From ANON - SP777 on June 11, 2006
Mshutts does it again!

Man I didn't realize I missed so many chapters when the site was down..over 18 chapters. Well I'm caught up now...and I have to admit you haven't lost your stride/pacing telling this story.

To answer that question at the end of #46, yeah I DID forget about Kagome & Co., but I'm glad 'Yasha is awake.

Now for the fun part, disappointment 'Kagome' style...sometimes that character annoys me, probably the way people wirte about her, but I know for a fact I'm sick of the way she uses those damn beads to win an argument over Inuyasha.

Speaking of beads, you wouldn't any chance feel like writing that 'Sesshoumaru snapped the beads off Inuyasha's neck, because he wouldn't allow such disrespect.' Just a thought...

anyway..nuff' said.
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From ANON - NoName on June 10, 2006
I usually don't get into stories like this, with the incest :P I come to amuse myself... but this story is REALLY well written. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Made me sad to find that it stopped at this one :(. MORE MORE I WANT MORE! :D
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From ANON - Tsukiko on June 09, 2006
Wow I really love the way you write. This whole story makes perfect sense to me, Please continue with it.

-Tsuki-
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From ANON - Will on June 08, 2006
Don't worry abou the mushy stuff. At this point Inuyasha desevse a little mush. Hell. Alot of mush, he has after all, had a fairly unmushy life, especialy where Sesh is concerned. So bring on the mush!! They'd make a cute couple if Sesh could just pull his head out of his ass, which he seems to be starting to do. YAY .... and don't worry about colloquial anachronisms in their speech, the show does it all the time, and if it gets your point across adequatly, then who cares, not me, I'm loving it more and more each update. YAY Keep up the excellent work. Can't wait to see what happens with Kagome when she finds out, I kinda expect the S**T to hit the fan. In my secret heart I want Sesh to see her sit Inu and get truly pissed and threaten to kill her if she doesn't remove the rosary. I have this image in my head of Kagome taking the rosary off Inu with Sesh standing behind her, hand wrapped around her neck, claws leaking poison. And Inu not saying anything about her being in danger because, heh heh, she's finally taking that DAMN thing off his neck. Or maybe that's just me, anyway, if there's anything I can do to help just let me know, I love your work.
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From ANON - nette on June 08, 2006
its still good and i liked it. :)
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