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Reviews for The Prophecy

By : mshutts
  • From ANON - Polka dot on January 31, 2006
    I'm glad we're off shippo's pov. I think that Sessy's being quite civil, perhaps Inuyasha shouldn't bait the tiger.
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  • From ANON - inufangirl007 on January 31, 2006
    yay! i love sess pov's! great chapter! i like it when sess is trying to figth his youki, it makes him realize that he really does care about inu! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on January 31, 2006
    Chapter 25:

    Good job keeping Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru in character. Sesshuomaru
    being concerned for Inuyasha's emotional well-being was a nice touch.
    And Inuyasha being so dejected was really sad. His feminine hormones
    must be really starting to take effect. What could be worse than being
    rejected by his mate? A horrible thought. Mmm, given his condition,
    he probably shouldn't stray too far from Sesshoumaru. The change
    may not be complete and there may be strong demons out there
    drawn to mate him. I can see that you had problems, as you said.
    There seemed to be less then usual action in this chapter. I think that
    perhaps Sesshoumaru should have more stress put on him by being
    forced to protect Inuyasha from some danger. Maybe that would be
    a good direction to go?

    Snowfall

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2006
    Your story is very good! Hope you keep it up, I really want to know what's going to happen next.
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  • From ANON - bunnicle on January 26, 2006
    that was so cutie! I think Sesshoumaru is in way denial! He needs to get over the fact that Inuyasha is his mate and just do the dirty deed!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2006
    u have got to update soon i love all the chacterization. keep up the good work. :D
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  • From ANON - dah on January 26, 2006
    lol. That's all I need to say. This was perfeckt. I'm waiting for more to come soon. :P
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  • From ANON - Rawben on January 26, 2006
    love it.
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  • From ANON - Demitria Miriam on January 25, 2006
    Ooooooooooh! Kawaii!! Please continue! I can't wait to see what happens next!! ^.^

    -DM
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  • From ANON - inufangirl007 on January 25, 2006
    Shippo has a way at jumping to conclusions rather quickly! great chapter, too bad inu got dropped from the tree. Iut would have been sweet if he had stayed cuddling with sessy a while longer! great chatpter! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tryst on January 25, 2006
    That was funny. *big smile* It made me laugh. But now, I want to read more. Hope to it, author. Guess, I should get to work on a piece of my own. HEHEHE. Hmmm. You going to add a lemon scene soon or not? Just curious.
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  • From ANON - Go Elsewhere on January 25, 2006
    Really cool!

    I can't believe how quickly and regularly you update, as well as keep the story and plot so good AND keep the characters in character.

    You're really good!
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  • From ANON - Jade Dragon on January 24, 2006
    lol I think you should do the chapter in a mix of both shippo and sesshomaru, though shippo first, the poor boy has got to be soooo confused. Will sesshomaru start treating him like a son too?
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  • From ANON - avid fan on January 24, 2006
    Well, Inuyasha seems pretty much resigned to fate now. I'm gonna be surprised if Shippo doesn't have a coronary from that last bit of info (no matter how young he is). ^_^

    Can't wait for the nest installment of "The Prophecy." Good stories such as this one is much appreciated. It's getting harder to find really good fanfics nowadays. Thanks!
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  • From ladygizarme on January 24, 2006
    wow, this story is so good!! i don't read much yaoi in the Inuyasha section, but Sess/Inu is one of my favs when i do.. and then the fact that it's Mpreg.. and what seems to be an actually WELL WRITTEN Mpreg, i simply had to read this when i saw it!! well written Mpreg is one of my new obsessions.. where it's not just "yeah, i had two guys have sex and decided they need a family or some extra drama so, guess what, Mpreg!!", you're actually taking time to intelligently explain why and how, and build up to everything/explore their relationship..

    i liked getting the back story too, and think it gave better insight into their feelings.. the fact that Inuyasha really wants his brother's love and acceptance, and is okay with his body's change because of emotions stemming from growing up without a family, all makes a lot of sense to me.. so, yeah, thank you for writing this! your writing style is intelligent but still easy to read, and i love how the story's shaping up.. i can't wait to read more!! and i wonder what both Shippou and Sesshoumaru's reactions to Inuyasha's declaration will be lol

    ~lg
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