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Reviews for The Prophecy

By : mshutts
  • From ANON - TMD on January 14, 2006
    I love this story. It's really good, it's really well-writen. I will comment on one thing, the lemon(I realize it's your first one) is really extremely short. But then again it a dream and all. Just commenting. Anyway, I can't wait for an update.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on January 14, 2006
    *sob* Poor Inu puppy. That was such a tear jerker. Too bad that Sesshoumaru was only a dream. Well done. Well done, indeed. I've very tired or I would give you a much better review. Perhaps later.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - Go Elsewhere on January 14, 2006
    Awesome. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - dah on January 14, 2006
    Sesshy angst! How sweet.. :P I really loved this chappie too, so please, update soon. :D
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  • From ANON - Rawben on January 14, 2006
    whoa! shouldn't sess get him some help!!?? damn! great chapter! again! ;)
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  • From ANON - Just a Fan again on January 14, 2006
    Aaah, just read chapter thirteen and, Inuyasha's body is changing in order to accomodate the ability to carry children, but he's not pregnant. Okay. I think I get it. So, anyhey. Sorry for jumping into conclusions hehe. ^^ Okay, onto the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Just a Fan on January 14, 2006
    Hmm....say, if Inuyasha IS pregnant, wouldn't all those sits affect the baby?
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on January 13, 2006
    Okay, I'm almost crying now. Poor Inuyasha, his demon side fighting with the human side in order to transform. It's probably too late to find a female inu and most likely is not in your plot. Plot bunnies...Ah! I'll give this one to Inuyasha for dinner! LOL Great chapter. Oh, I wonder if Kaede could help. Probably not since it's never happened before. Oh well. I'm glad that we got to see into Sesshoumaru's mind. Ooooooh, maybe Inu could stay full demon most of the time once he transforms, without the mindlessness of course. I'm sure that you hate me by now. It's just that I get excited when there are endless possibilities. I hate it when I know what is in store. I could think of more outcomes, but I've done enough damage. You are doing a great job. I look forward to the next chappie.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - whit on January 13, 2006
    Truly a wonderful story. I cain't wiat till your next update.
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  • From drcomalfy on January 12, 2006
    Hooray! You updated! And I really liked how Sesshomaru's battling it out with his youki! LOL! It's so fucking hilarious! I especially love this paragraph:

    Remembering what his brother had said about the stomach aches and rabbits, he decided to go catch one now before waking Inuyasha, telling himself that he was only doing it so that they could get moving faster. The desire to assist his intended mate in any way possible while he was in a weakened state had nothing to do with it.

    BWUAHA!! GREAT job! You've GOT to update!


    -DM
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  • From ANON - bunnicle on January 12, 2006
    Oh, what's wrong with Inuyasha?! Oh, I truely hope you will not leave it at this for too long! I cannot wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! PLEASE! TToTT poor inuyasha. what's with the bunny's though? is it because bunnies are thought to be the symbol of fertility in Folk Lore?
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  • From ANON - fib on January 12, 2006
    Excellent excellent excellent.
    I've enjoyed every chapter, and thank you for updating so often! You're spoiling us!
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  • From Ichigosan on January 12, 2006
    Well I would like to say that I have been truly enjoying your story. I appreciate the fact that for one, your story is well thought out. I also am so very happy that you have not made Inuyasha a bumbling idiot. I’m not sure if this has something to do with sub vs dub for the anime, but really, the number of people that make him into a total idiot is ridiculous. Plus I commend your writing of the scene in which Sesshoumaru rationalizes getting drunk. I couldn’t help but chuckle over the matter. At any rate, I’ve only managed to read the first 6 chapters, so I still have a ways to go. Yet I wanted to mention something about the end of chapter six, with the fight scene. My assumption is that Sesshoumaru is one armed? So how is it that he managed to strike Inuyasha with his claws, if he is still holding on to tokijin? Just something I noticed from the scene.
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  • From ANON - I Love Twins! on January 12, 2006
    Really great!

    ^_^^_^ - (I Love Twins!)
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  • From ANON - einld on January 11, 2006
    Review chapter 2:

    Okay so far, from reading i have come to the conclusion that i am an idiot. How COULD I have skipped this fic?? [cough, must have been those oneshot of lemon scenes that I wanted to see ^_^]

    Yes I love this fic so far, I'm still reading it . . . . but sadly I dont have internet access [being a student i have to be a stingy ass since money is scarce].

    um I dont have much to say but that i really really REALLY love this fic!!

    you know just as something stupid to type, have you ever gotten an review that said something like "i never liked yaoi before but yours is an exception"? Seriously, I find that funny [and rather ludicrous], it doesn't seem like much of difference to me.

    anyway.....cheera!

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