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Reviews for The Prophecy

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  • From ANON - inufangirl007 on December 13, 2005
    the ending was so funny! please update soon!
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  • From GrayWolf on December 13, 2005
    Lol nice chapter, funny how they get drunk. I like them sorta stories XD
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  • From GrayWolf on December 13, 2005
    Aww... this chapter is sooooooooo cute! XD I love how you wrote Sesshomaru's personality!
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  • From ANON - Go Elsewhere on December 13, 2005
    Hm.

    Okay, give me a second...

    Okay! I've gotten my head wrapped around the idea of Sesshomaru getting drunk (though it was a little difficult) and, after careful reassessment of the chapter, I think it's pretty good! I hope you update it soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2005
    It was... okay. Not nearly as good as the other chapters.

    It's just too damn hard to picture Sesshomaru allowing himself to get drunk, and THEN imagining him laughing, relaxed, andor skittish. I hope the next chapter is better.
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on December 13, 2005
    Nice chapter, although it shocked me to find Sesshoumaru drunk!
    I would have never dreamt of a drunken(and oblivious Sesshy).However, if,during mating season, someone was that nice to let me a drunken Sesshy inmybedroom, I willcertainly not complain.
    Bye!
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  • From ANON - Go Elsewhere on December 12, 2005
    I Agree with VenusOfHeaven. Sesshomaru is a very complex character (even though for the most part he's cold and indifferent, that only makes it more difficult to write what he's feeling inside or thinking about) and you, as I said, do him quite well.

    I hope you don't let bad comments discourage you (those people have no idea what they are talking about and would not know good writing if it came up and kicked their ass!) and hopefully you'll update soon.
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on December 12, 2005
    I think this if is great as it is, you should not be concerned about what others think. I believe each one has his/her own way of vieweing the story and, furthermore, if a author gives a backgroung is something I always appreciate. It makes the fic more complex, and it encourages the readers to keep on reading the story.
    Another thing you should not worry about is making peolple, especially Sesshoumaru, in character. You do it quite well. And, besides that, Sesshoumaru is a very complex character who, even in the anime, has his weird moments, as such when he admits he's afraid of full-demon Inuyasha, or gives the flowers that would save Jaken's life, after rescuing Rin. And, all of these moments he's treatening someone only because 'don't dare to kill Inuyasha, he's mine to kill' and all that.
    More comments in next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Cyrstal Honey on December 11, 2005
    nice
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  • From ANON - Go Elsewhere on December 11, 2005
    Awsome chapter! You write Sesshomaru very well! I hope you continue with this story! You seem to be updating it fairly quickly, so I hope you continue to do that too!
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  • From ANON - Kiara on December 11, 2005
    Hmmm. The story is progressing very nicely. I don't know why anyone else wouldn't like it. I mean it's really hard to find a story that actually gives any background without jumping into the whole mating thing. Also, I think by using the past events and flashbacks, you are actually building up a nice case as to why the two most unlikely characters would end up together. So, yeah I like the whole idea and please update when you can (hopefully soon). Bye!
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  • From ANON - inufangirl007 on December 11, 2005
    good chapter please continue
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  • From ANON - fib on December 10, 2005
    Excellent "teaser" chapters... I can't wait for this to unfold!
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  • From ANON - Polka Dot on December 10, 2005
    Well it's the tale of two inu, one can't get a mate at all and the other's just too picky. Yeah they definitely deserve each other.
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  • From caliadragon on December 10, 2005
    This seems to be a very interesting concept and I can not wait to see what happens when Sess realizes that the little brother he has been trying to kill is in fact his mate.


    Thanks
    Calia
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