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By : mshutts
  • From ANON - SP777 on February 27, 2009
    about #58...

    Lol & Lol'ing again louder!!! :-D

    Well, I have to admit my head did get a little swirly trying to wrap my head around
    that/those explanations, but I think I got it. :-)

    You're doing good for what it's worth...don't think you are not, besides folks
    will let you know. *wink* ;-)
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  • From ANON - Ana on February 23, 2009
    I just started reading this and I am hooked! Best story I've read so far!
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  • From ANON - mcdgoddess on February 22, 2009
    Thank you so much for the update! I've been waiting forever to know what would happen next. Your idea of the time stream is very interesting and it makes sense. I had to sit and think about it, but I was able to get the concept. I really hope that its not too long before there is another update.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on February 21, 2009
    Hooray for updates! You have no idea how happy I was to see a new chapter of this story. I was starting to worry that it had been abandoned. Still, I take an enormous amount of time to update my stories and I don't have kids, so I guess I just need to be more patient, lol.

    Loved this chapter...good to see Kagome (who I really don't like) in a barely-conscious and confused position, good to see Shippo happy again, and still good to see no-beads Inuyasha. The whole time's flow thing made sense, especially with the mysterious demon-killing presence thingy on the move.

    I wonder if Koga will show up at some point. I've wanted to see him get a whipping ever since his first appearance (which involved kidnapping and murder, which Kagome seems to forget), and regardless of which brother does it, it'd be hilarious...

    Hope the next chapter comes soon! :-D
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  • From maegerakawaii on February 21, 2009
    I honestly thought this was dropped. I am sooo glad that it wasn't. I think this chapter just served to make me even more curious. Also, now I'm even antsier to find out what is happening with Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru, because I didn't see them at all last chapter. I can't wait for your next update.
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  • From KIKI441 on February 21, 2009
    HURRAY!!! you've updated. i was so excited when i saw the alert,( i have an account on two other sites and i have you
    on my story alert) anyway, i understood your explanation. but i have to say that considering sango is a demon slayer, she
    knows nothing about demons. i guess the only thing she knows is how to kill them. i say that because i find it interesting
    that she did not know that demons can mate with a sibling. it's obvious she either skipped a few lessons or her village
    was poorly educated also. but other than that the story is great and i just can't wait until the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on February 21, 2009
    Oooh, nifty twisty with having Sesshoumaru created for Inuyasha. I understood the time flow just fine. It's very intriguing. I can hardly wait until the next chapter!

    Oh yeah, the munchkins always know when mommy wants some personal time. Not happenin'! LOL Plus, yours are so young that they require constant care and looking after.

    Regardless of how long it might take, I'll be waiting for your next chapter. ^_^
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  • From knightkat on February 20, 2009
    I didn't find it confusing at all. It makes it seem like Inuyasha has a goal to accomplish and the world/fate has been preparing for him, and one of the ways was...A proper mate. Glad your back, can;t wait for next chapter. Love this story!
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on February 20, 2009
    that was kinda confusing but it actually made a lot of sense...in a weird kinda way
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  • From ANON - B on February 14, 2009
    I love this story, please continue it, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 14, 2009
    Oh man, #54 & 55 ...it's been a while since I've enjoyed a chapter where you were
    sympathising[?] with the lead character...and chanting ''Kill the Bitch!!! Just kill
    her!!! Then bring her back with Tenseiga.''

    But, when Sesshomaru started thinking of the best way to maim Kagome, that was TOO
    funny! :-]

    Now, what I don't get is between the 2 mates, I'm surprised it's Inuyasha who doesn't
    understand how his mate thinks, you'd THINK he would have it figured out DESPITE his
    insecurities of being a hanyou mated to a full demon. You'd think the human side of
    him would be intuitive.

    Will he express himself anytime soon?
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  • From ANON - cindy on November 29, 2008
    pls pls pls do update soon!! i'm dying from the cliffie.
    and i do so hope u intend to finish this story, its really good: sensible grammar, accurate spelling, reasonable characters, logical plotlines, interesting twists .. the list is endless, in short this story has me hooked. keep 'em coming!!
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  • From ANON - Kan on October 27, 2008
    i read this fic about a year ago and I've just reread it and I was so pleased to find some updates. I still looove it as much as I did the first time. the tension and the viewpoints all add interesting twists to the whole thing. I love how well set out everything is, and how everything is done quite slowly. I really hope Sesshomaru realises he needs to appease Inuyasha's human feelings as well. He's just not thinking with his heart!

    Hope you update sooon!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on September 27, 2008
    I normally try not to do this, but...

    UPDATE PLEASE

    It's been soooo long since the last (awesome) one. There are still people eagerly checking this story every day, I assure you...
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  • From myperversities on September 18, 2008
    This is SOOOOO good !! I LOVE it!! But there is one thin g I must say and that is...PLEASE give Sesshoumaru his arm back!!! I've been picturing him with it all along but still it would make it so much better to see him get it back. He's just not as impressive without it. I must say. I love him but just can't picture him lacking an arm with out cringing. So itf you could posssibly find some way to let himn retrieve his or grow one back via magic or his own powers etc that would be so much better. Oh and one more thing...I think what you are going for with the witches name is Tsubaki ( the tsu makes a sound like zoo with a the z having a sound a cross between the z and t) It's just that I have never seen anything japanese spelt like that XD. I could be wrong and sorry if I am but I think this is what your aiming for. Anyways hope to hear more from you soon (can't be soon enough as far as I'm concerned *wink*) and congrats on the baby and the move.
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