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Reviews for a womans heart

By : sexycutelilitaian
  • From ANON - king on January 18, 2006
    well its cool but add more detail and stop jumping around part to part and less talkin add more intersting fighting not he swung jumped and got hit but for a first time thats decent :)
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  • From ANON - BethieK on January 09, 2006
    this story is really getting good so please update soon ill be watching , BK

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  • From ANON - king on December 18, 2005
    Ok ill be nice with constructive critizem ok question how did he die? what cuased him to? and y he die just like that inuyasha is a beast he does not die ez i mean his bro stabbed his hand throgh his chest and wen he first met sango she stabbed a sword in his arm and he pulled it out no prob ....
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  • From ANON - InuyashaDreamGirl on December 12, 2005
    This is a good plot!! very very good like where it's going...BUT you have spelling and grammer errors. I advise you to use spell check and a beta. Well that's mostly it and i still HOPE YOU UPDATE
    A.S.A.P!!!!

    thanks
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  • From ANON - CousinVinnie on December 12, 2005
    Sounds like an interesting premise. A little hard to read...perhaps if you came back to it after you wrote and neatened it up a bit for style? Keep at it.
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  • From ANON - PUERTO RICAN CHICKA on December 12, 2005
    DUDE TAT STORY WAS GOOD, BESIDES ALL THE MISTAKES. O and if u want this story to be even better, write down the characters facial expressions, how there dressed, how they feel, and little by little tell the audience what the character is all about in your story. THEN IT'LL BE ONE ASS KICKING STORY. lol

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