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Reviews for The Sun and the Moon

By : GrayWolf
  • From ANON - seto'swifey on November 07, 2006
    I like the boy name Kyo. It's got like a wild and untamed type of kick in it. I cant wait until they are born.
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on November 07, 2006
    Good chapter. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - JewlzGem on October 03, 2006
    OMG!!!! how can you leave me hanging like this.. I am dying here with wanting to know what is going to happen... I love this story, you , your writing style... PLEASE add another chapter.


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  • From ANON - angel on October 02, 2006
    ~lol~ that was great i love it ... hmm so how manny will they have .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Sally on October 02, 2006
    Just one thing: Exclamation points are bad. They are not your friend anywhere outside of dialect unless you want to yell at your readers.
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  • From afromice on August 20, 2006
    OMG! Thisfic is so amazing and I'm only on chapter 2. You rock. Major props to you!
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  • From ANON - BeAuTy on August 20, 2006
    wow,what can i say. Naraku just needs to leave the happy couple alone!!! Finally...kagome is out of the way . woot-woot!!Please hurry with another chapter i wanna see what the pups'll be like!!!
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  • From ANON - LuversInu on August 16, 2006
    Maybe they shouldn't have pups yet. . . it would kinda throw off the whole Naraku part of the story wouldn't it. I like them not having pups but Naraku thinking that Inu and Sessy are having them somehow and then trying to use that to his advantage then the ending of the fic could have them have two pups each. . . Just a wild suggestion. Loves the fic anyways.
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  • From ANON - nette on August 16, 2006
    i'm glad to see you have updated. i like this chapter, it was funny and had alot of inu/sessh moments that i felt needed to be there. their father is hilarious and inu's mom is just so sweet. can't wait to read more. :)
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  • From ANON - nette on August 09, 2006
    this chapter was hot. darn that naraku, i wish sessh left him unconscious or something. oh well i'm glad they finally got a chance to express their feelings for one another if you get my drift. cant wait to read more so update soon and keep the good writing coming.
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  • From ANON - nette on August 02, 2006
    nice chapter, it was funny though having inu wear the helmet and having stick his head out the car window. i would have luved to seen that. cant wait to read the next chapter and hope there's a lemon? maybe? ok anyway update soon and keep it up. :D
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  • From ANON - Roro on August 01, 2006
    I know it's wrong but every time you'd metion the helmet I'd burst in to laughter.
    Ah, anyways, I love this story and can't wait for you to update!
    SO DO IT NOW!
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  • From ANON - nette on July 28, 2006
    you have to finish this story. its getting good and damn that naraku, always screwing with others. i hope they find and kill him soon. and i think its nice how you have them both healing with one another so when the time comes they will understand the other a bit more. can't wait to read more. also i liked the fact you had buyo form a sort of bond with the demons, it was cute. :D
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  • From ANON - evilchild (not signed in) on July 01, 2006
    I like the story so far (starting to read chap 9) but in chapter 8 you had the problem of Erectile Dysfunction wrong. It's when the penis doesn't stay hard not the erection won't go down (whoever this happens to really needs to go the hospital. Oh, it's dysfuntionally but that's not the definition of Erectile Dysfunction. I don't know what's that problem called). Thought I should point that out.
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  • From jenny on April 29, 2006
    Hey lol yah i know i do need to lengthen the chapters i usually write it down on paper and its really long then i say that should be good for a chapter and type it up but i always ends up smaller so i'll try to work on it lol and i try to describe a lot to but i also want to get the actions right so i'll work on and i like your story too its one o f my favourites keep up the good work. i hope you can add more chapters here now instead of fanfiction.net cause i cant review on that site it wont recognize me e-mail so meh. lol. read the next chapter lol its up and runnin. and i hope to update a lot more and make them better.
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