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Reviews for Naraku.....Stalker

By : Sango0596
  • From ANON - I_Naraku on December 13, 2005
    I Naraku would never RAP my Lady love Sango.... now Kagome is a ass but my dick would rote off if i did her...
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  • From ANON - Sango on December 13, 2005
    Okay, I agree with Anon. You need to put a disclaimer. Also, your story needs work. I'd suggest getting a beta to help you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2005
    ok i read it, it looked almost just like Sango's new fic. Even the small almost noextistant rape scene was almost the same. Figures, she reviewed your other post seeing a story just like hers. I'll give you this much yours was a little better but you need to stretch it out and make it alot longer, give more details please. It was too rushed, just go back over the chapter and add more detail and give us some background. OHH and I didn't see a disclaimer, might want to add one.
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