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Reviews for Chronicles of the West

By : inuyoukai8
  • From OriginalSinner on July 10, 2006
    Ohssss..... Toga is such a gallant, chivalrous gentleman *swoons*... His character is developing nicely. What a lucky girl Aislin is to have him as her protector *swoons again* I loved how you put it at the end of chapter four how in his fathers kingdom, children were allowed to be children. To grow up at the pace they're meant to... *sighs wistfully* It'd be nice wouldn't it?

    Peace inuyoukai8

    The Sinner ~_^
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  • From OriginalSinner on July 10, 2006
    Where have I been? I'm so happy to have found this story once again... I remember being confused when I first started reading this, cos I couldn't work out if Toga was Sesshoumaru's dad or son in this story... As it was, I ended up losing track of it when I gave my computer to my idiot ex, so I am really glad to have found it again ^_~... Nuh-uh... after reading the lemon for the second time in Chapter 3, I think it's safe to say that glad is an UNDERSTATEMENT. These naughty puppies... geez I don't know *squirms in seat, crossing and uncrossing legs profusely* Lucky wolf.... What can I say? Top lemon my hentai'd friend and I'm sure that there's a stack more *grins deviously* And I do like the way this story is flowing. I love how you've got Toga such a hard nut with a soft spot. Kind of reminds me of Sesshoumaru almost. And his little blind ward... that was cool. I can't wait to see what part she plays in all of this. Wows... it's been quite some time since I've actually got sucked into a story like this one. I also like how you've got it that Toga's mum was Irish (yay the Irish being an Irish Australian myself ^_^)... It makes for a very interesting story. K... I'm hooked. Hopefully I'll be able to park my arse in front of the computer a bit more than I have been able to lately and actually READ IT! What a happy lil vegemite am I to see that I've got a stack of chapters yet to go... Must find my way to a cold shower now me thinks... the man of my life ain't due home for another 30 minutes *Mental Note to me: Do not read your lemons unless the outlet for my lemon induced frustration is HOME!*

    Peace Sweetpea,

    The Sinner ~_^
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  • From ANON - fushigiyugifan on June 28, 2006
    Oh yay I am glad to see the updates. I loved them. Was cool that taisha became a thief.. even for a short time.. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - MerelyTruth on June 25, 2006
    Marvelous ! So romantic, I love that a lot ! Two alphas together, big challenge !!! Very good idea. Please, develop the thought of Taisha during her "submission" to Kurama and their lovemaking : she murmured something, felt something, she cried, and that's all. (my hentai side was a little desappointed...)

    And thank you very much : you think of us, poor waiting readers ...!!! Sure, I imagined horrible things in your life making you unable to update. Arghhhh ! Give us some news, please.

    Being french, I assure you I don't find a lot of mistakes in your writing, only some. In all the fics I read on AFF, there are always the same mistakes that appear : confusion between its and it's (a lot !!!), between here, hear and her (once ! ) or they're and their (raahhhh !, even to and too (pffff.....!), and some lack of subject in the sentence... The fault of the computer automatic correction, surely...... Just one point here : the last sentence : "and that his crown he had willing lay at her feet." I'm puzzled, would had writed : "and that he had willingly laid his crown at her feet." What do you thing about ???

    But as I said, I'm French and can't be too affirmative in a foreign language...
    Nevertheless, I assure you that it's a true pleasure to read your fantastic, wonderful, entertaining, gut clenching (did I say wonderful ?) story as it is ! Don't loose courage !
    Bravo, à bientôt !

    Merely Truth

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  • From OriginalSinner on June 24, 2006
    Oh my... *falls off chair ~_^* How could i forget this story?!! Obviously spent too much time off AFF and lost track of this scrumptious little number... Give us a sec to recollect myself... *hot, hot, hot* K... must go cool off now... be back soon for more.

    Peace

    Sinner
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  • From ANON - Style on June 21, 2006
    Wait for long time......update update soon.....plz
    I miss all of them
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  • From ANON - anon on June 16, 2006
    hey what happened? where did you go, what happened to the consistent little updater i know and love :(, i need an update fix like a crack addict needs crack, GIMME GIMME GIMME!!!!
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  • From ANON - anon on June 04, 2006
    Hooray Hooray, we should have a parade, this moment has taken approximately 109 chapters for toga and aislin to get it on and become mates. Toga was so sweet , awww , me loves toga bunches and bunches lol. Poor kurama though hopefully taisha will wise up before she has to go do the chasing. Hey are madu and the wolfess going to get their moment too? Update Update :), does this story still have a lot more ahead :), or is it coming to a close :(. If it is, whats your next project going to be? cause im anxiously awaiting lol :)
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  • From ANON - wickitraven on June 02, 2006
    Hi
    I just finshed your story , and it was just wounderful you have an incrediable talent.
    I hope you don't leave us hanging to long on what happens with Kurama.
    And what is the name of your book and when and where can i get it, thanks alot for giving us something so good to read wickitraven
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  • From ANON - fushigiyugifan on June 02, 2006
    That was great.. i luved the last two chapters (u posted 107 twice) the wedding/mating was wonderful and i laughed how when she blurted it out... also there was one spelling error i did catch "keening dry." ...i'm guessing you meant cry.. no biggie...just thought u might like to know..i want to know when you're bringing taima back huh? update soon
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  • From ANON - DPM on June 01, 2006
    Technical merit - top notch.

    Creative merit - I was a little disappointed with this chapter. After all the wait for this emotional as well as physical consummation to take place, it felt a little anti-climatic.

    No, I don't dwell much about the physical side of things, (we all know you are very imaginative and very descriptively thorough in that department with the other couples).

    It was just that I thought there would have been more emotions, more feelings expressed at the sacredness of this union, at their joy of finally being able to be together. For goodness sakes, it was a marriage witnessed by the upper crust of the demon clan and more importantly, they had gone through too much to be so shortchanged.

    It was as if you ran out of things to say when it came to this part. I felt it was kind of ...(I'm sorry...) ...flat....I thought this chapter did them an injustice to their character depth.


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  • From ANON - MerelyTruth on June 01, 2006
    I find amazing how you're able to renew your descriptions of lovemaking, feelings, sex... Soooo gooood !!!!!
    BRAVO !

    Merely Truth

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  • From ANON - anon on May 30, 2006
    well taima might not be as dead as once thought, thats good and im over my cold yippi. Its pretty funny that kurama suffers the same woman troubles as sesshoumaru once did, divine justice. OMG the funniest part was amari and shessh youngest daughter cutting his hair, and the things that inuyasha and sessh thougt was going on lol. Amari's great, i wasn't really that fascinated by his character when he first appeared but he has defintely grown on me with his sweetness. And finally ippiku makes an appearance again. update update hurry hurry, oh and by the way are you going to finish your hellsing fic or have you abandoned it? I actually went out and bought the first hellsing dvd that has the first 3 episodes. A little to violent for my taste but I definitely see the alucard attraction :)
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  • From ANON - fushigiyugifan on May 29, 2006
    Yey for the updates.. and does this mean taimas coming back.. i hope so. and i like how kurama made the same blunder as sesshy...quite funny..but i hope everything works out. i luv the story so much.. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Style on May 29, 2006
    I am glad that you update the story quickly this time and it is growing. Just wondering if Taima can rebirth, then how about Reny or Josin? Rebirth again along with Taima's new life?? Poor and stupid Kurama.....he shold realize after all Taisha is similar to her mother, cannot be taken in such way.
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