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Reviews for Chronicles of the West

By : inuyoukai8
  • From ANON - Rawben on May 29, 2006
    omg! so sad!! ::cries:: that ...oh. wow. ::sniffle:: great job. great bad guy. ;)
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  • From ANON - fushigiyugifan on May 29, 2006
    I so luv your story and am VERY relieved you're still updating.. took me awhile to find the story again though.. the last couple chapters had me crying..poor taima that was so sad......please update soon... i want more.. i need more..i gotta know how it ends..
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  • From ANON - MerelyTruth on May 27, 2006
    YES ! It was great ! How did you be able to describe such actions and big battle not being annoying ? I wonder AND I'm amazed. Thank you.
    But... (sorry, but there is a "but" in my mind) didn't you wrote this a little too fast ? Incredible that Sesshoumaru did not forsee what would decide Tohru and Amaru at the castle, and didn't say to survey them a little more than that ! And for me, it lacked of an arguing between Sesshomaru and Kurama about the trap with Taisha as a poor lamb in the center... And where was Kurama during the battle ?? What gives me hope actually is that he reappears yet, to search the lost lamb ! Very interesting perspective...
    Ah ! Please, don't fall in the trap of the writer when, going near the end of the story, details are forgotten and words are "sliding" forward ! I would be glad if you write a lot of chapters in the chronicles !

    A bientôt,

    Merely Truth

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  • From ANON - Style on May 26, 2006
    Great chapters, but I feel sad and almost cry...especially when Inuyasha read his daughter's words. Update soon...can't wait what happen next...
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  • From ANON - anon on May 26, 2006
    I have a cold, i feel miserable and you made me cry, there better be a damn spectacularly happy ending! ;)
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  • From ANON - MerelyTruth on May 23, 2006
    Welcome !!! I'm verry happy you are able to continue this wonderful story. Poor Toga, always waiting.... arghhhh ! I'm very curious to see how the share of soul between Satoru and his sister will do something to save him, (to save them ?). What a suspense !!! thank you, I wait with confidence to read you again.

    For your upcoming book, I discovered the beginning with interest. I find that's a good idea to transplant the fabulous capacities of our favorite characters from Inuyasha to write a story : the watchers, very good. What you described give a good base for your story, I would say, and Elenciel has already charmed my mind... Such a nice name, like an angel. What has a little disturbed me are the words "Immortal unless killed," don't you think that it's not going together ? Nevertheless, I imagine how it'll be an interesting story, with a lot of wonderful characters. And if this story becomes as hot as your others, I swear I'll do something to read this book in France one day !!! Well, good bye, and please, update soon !

    Merci beaucoup et gros bisous...

    Merely Truth

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  • From ANON - anon on May 17, 2006
    hmm interesting novel idea, so is the basic premise of the story is about the fight between the watchers of earth and the astrians who don't think astrians and humans should mix? Who are the central characters, it didn't really define it in your summary. Liked the update by the way, so the bad guys know about the flower now, the battles looming, it would be really sad if any part the the house of the west died. when are you finally going to give toga a reprieve and let him hook up with aislin, i've been waiting pretty much 96 chapters lol
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  • From ANON - Style on May 17, 2006
    Great~~Great~~Great!! The story has been back. I love those chapters, especially the plot. Also, the relationships between male/femal, male/male that you have described are wonderful. I hope there will be more battle scenery...Well, poor Ayeka can't sleep without Sesshy....Just don't fully understand the power of Taima.....I hope Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha can win the coming fight.
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  • From ANON - anon on May 14, 2006
    oh frabjous day, caloo, callay, You updated, so your trying to get a book published thats awesome, what is it going to be about? Loved the update, hot silvana and ryu scene, poor toga still isn't getting any, that's okay he had his fun earlier in the story, I suppose he can wait awhile. So what is this good within evil that taima was talking about? Is taima going to die, that would be sad :(, Oh yeah I thought aislin had blonde hair? Maybe ill have to reread the first part of the story to make sure. Wow 91 chapters and the story is still going strong, and you haven't even had three of the couples hook up yet. I hope that is going to be coming soon though, what can I say I live for smut lol, well that and good plot. Well i certainly hope that updates aren't this slow in the future :), it about drove me crazy, but now im all happy again, YIPPI!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Serena on May 13, 2006
    Wow, the site finally allowed you to update. I almost gave up on this site, but this story has me so hooked I had to keep checking for updates. I love Tohru and Taima, they seem so different in comparison to the rest of their stoic gruff family. Their innocence projects an air of lightness and purity in the story that is sorely needed. I really appreciate the contrast of the Aislin/Toga, Ryu/Silvana, and Tohru/Amari relationships as well. While the first two are pure passion the last encompasses tenderness and is very endearing. Great job as always and hopefully you can update again soon:) I wish you much luck and success with your book as well. If it's any where as good as this story I'm sure you'll be a huge success!
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  • From ANON - Merely Truth on May 04, 2006
    Hello, Inuyoukai8 ! I'm a french mother of three daughters who love manga, and I found fanfiction in english very entertaining. When I discovered Accross the ages, it was wonderful. I can say that you write very well your stories, with a perfect mix between adventures, love and all the stuff that come with, and fantastic new characters...! So, thank you very much for all the pleasure I had by reading your fanfic.

    All I hope now is that, with the problems of Adultfanfiction these monthes, you had not been cut in your inspiration ! Sure, not to be able to update regurlarly as before, that had to be a cold shower on your imagination ! But I keep to say that you'll come again to lighten our lives. Still, thank you and ... plein de baisers de France...

    Merely Truth


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  • From ANON - Style on April 27, 2006
    Hello.......is someone at home?? Please update ~~
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  • From ANON - Style on April 20, 2006
    I miss this story so...........much.......Come back please. especially, I miss Sesshoumaru and his family.

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  • From ANON - Rawben on April 20, 2006
    yey! i'm glad it's back!! however... chapter 80 and 81 are the same... :(
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  • From ANON - Serena on April 19, 2006
    Yay! I've missed this story sooo much. This site took forever to come back up, and still has some major issues. I can't wait to see what happens next and I'm so happy I can get my Toga fix again:P
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