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Reviews for Chronicles of the West

By : inuyoukai8
  • From ANON - Rawben on January 11, 2006
    ohhh too cute! yey for the homecoming!!

    oh, and the line "Halls of knowledge and not an answer in sight." ...is the single best sentence in all of inuyasha fanficdom. ...and i've read most of it. so i'd know.
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  • From ANON - Serena on January 10, 2006
    I think the funniest thing that you have written thus far had to have been Ippiku being chucked over the wall. I don't think I've laughed so hard lately. Each of your characters have their own very distinct personality and it utterly amazes me that you have been able to flawlessly continue them from chapter to chapter. Greatness as always. Looking forward to their return to Japan.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2006
    hey i know, you can hook diashi up with kogas son, that would get him off taishas back lol, aww i wonder what happened with saturos lover, did saturo accidentally kill him when he was trying alchemy and his powers became unstable? Anyways can wait for all the mysteries and problems to be solved and some lemon in between lol.
    -cherrycolachick
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  • From ANON - Rawben on January 10, 2006
    satoru and Kurama have done it before!! hands in the hair? oh yeah.

    ...satoru/victor? ...yaoi? ...pweeeease?
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  • From ANON - Serena on January 10, 2006
    I loved these chapters. I nearly died when Toga said "because she is Aislin", oh my god if only I had me a Toga. Ryu is beyond sweet, the essense of Inuyasha. But poor Daishi, I know someone will come to her rescue (I'm looking to Shippo here?) I only hope they do so before someone gets hurt. And what happened to Satoru's first love? Can't wait to see what happens next. Perfection as always:)
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  • From ANON - Style on January 08, 2006
    Hihi, I was not here few days, many news.... Sesshy and Ayeka were back, hope their children will be back to visit them soon.... Such a big family.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2006
    yeah! great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Rawben on January 08, 2006
    "review soon"? aww! aren't you adorable! *pinches your button nose*
    and yey!!!!! what's in the box??????!!!!!!
    "One day maybe you will be the bashful one"- that's a challenge if i've ever heard one!! :O
    great chapter!! i always look for your update!
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  • From ANON - Serena on January 07, 2006
    Awww, thanks for the well wishes. I'm a bit better but extemely bored and while getting stuck in the bathroom is indeed funny the first couple of times it does get kinda old, lol. This was a very sweet chapter and I'm looking forward to the ladies meeting the family (especially Sesshomaru). And I totally forgot about the box! What the heck could it be? Good stuff my friend:)
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  • From ANON - Ladyhwk on January 06, 2006
    I like Ryu - He reminds me of Inuyasha, with that, 'I know what I want, but I'm going to confuse the hell outta ya until you figure it out' kinda thing going on.
    Kurama and Taisha....can't wait to see out that pans out!

    Since I had the nerve to point out an 'opps', please let me redeem myself by pointing out an absolutely BEAUTIFUL paragraph from this last chapter..

    *He blinked down at her, had his little human wife taught him a lesson. "What were you thinking when I put it on you?" she asked him. He kept her eyes prisoner as he spoke, "I thought my heart might break. I thought that you had lost trust in me, faith in me to resort to that. I thought I wanted to yell at you until your ears bled" he said, his hand moving up to trace the curve of her cheek, "And then I thought….. There is nothing that I would not do, would not give, to keep you content. That I loved you enough to be what you wanted" *

    You have a gift my friend, and I am enjoying benefitting from it!
    :)

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  • From ANON - Rawben on January 05, 2006
    niiiiice! but what's in the box???? :O inquiring minds want to know!
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  • From ANON - Serena on January 05, 2006
    That was a cute 'filler' chapter (as I like to call them). It didn't seem to really advance the story but it provided everyone with some simple character interaction and a bit of a break in the action. Made my poor post surgerical painful arm and blurry mind smile a bit:) Thanks:)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2006
    aww i was kinda hoping the beads would be real lol its okay though, ayeka doesnt need beads to keep sessh in place lol :P
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  • From ANON - inuyoukai8 on January 05, 2006
    no, the he's and she's aren't mixed up. I probably didn't write that scene really well. Sorry.
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  • From ANON - Ladyhawk on January 05, 2006
    Okay, I apoligize ahead of time for being dumb....but this paragraph is confusing. Are the 'He' and 'Shes' mixed up?


    ""He drew back and she panted for breath, the blush on her cheeks, making him smile. She noted the wicked gleam in his eyes and swallowed. "Do you understand what I mean?" she asked. He nodded, "You want to let me wait until I am certain that you truly desire to be with me". She nodded, a smile appearing on her face. He pulled her closer again, ...........""


    By the way, the story is still very wonderful..........It's my daily fix!
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