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Reviews for After the Mortals

By : Shadowedanimeartist
  • From ValheruYaoi on February 08, 2008
    Nice story so far. Hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - More on February 07, 2006
    Ok update and try and make the chapters longer! And Inu/Sippo action right.......
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  • From ANON - BD on December 20, 2005
    This story is good so far as I only read to chap 2, and I'll keep reading.

    By the way the dragon youkai's name is Ryukotsusei. Just thought you oughtta know
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on December 18, 2005
    Thanks for explaining better what powers do have Shippo.
    Now I think Sesshoumaru is surprised by the efficiency and speed of thought (sorry, don't know how to say it in English, 'rapidez de pensamiento') of both Inuyasha and Shippo.
    I liked this chapter too.

    Bye!
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  • From Onyxlight on December 17, 2005
    OH I can not wait until you update this!!

    This is the most original INU/SHIP fic I have ever come across!!

    Love it Love it Love it!
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  • From ANON - sesshyisafluffygod on December 17, 2005
    oi, i wasn't to pleased with the length or topic of the last chappy but it seems like u've got a good foundation settled for later chapters.
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  • From ANON - xblack_firex on December 16, 2005
    awesome story. I love it, although I do wish the chapters were longer quality is better then quanity(sp?). Please continue ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anna on December 16, 2005
    I like the story, even if it is a little fast developing and might be a litte confusing because of it
    inu is mature (sqeeeelll) but why is shippo so shy? and i like nice shesso, but why war? poor kirara, will she be all alone now?
    will shesso have a mate too or stay single in the story?
    hope the next chapter will come out soon, by by and bood luck with your muse

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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on December 16, 2005
    OK, I like the story. Perhaps you should explaina bit what powrers have exactly developed Shippo. I suppose that transforning in a cute big flying ball will not be very useful in battle. And, since you said he was a master. It would be nice if he had increased his magical skills.
    Sorry for the pathetic English, and I want to make clearthat I certainly believe this story to be great, I only wanted to ask you for a little more information. Hope you don't be mad at me, I like the way you describe things, it is clear and not confusing for a non-English speaker as me.

    Thanks for your attention.

    VenusOfHeaven
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  • From ANON - star101 on December 15, 2005
    I'm really excited to know the rest so please continue. Everything else you have written so far has kept me on edge. MORE!MORE!MORE!
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