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By : BlackberryPatch
  • From ANON - Snowfall on August 25, 2006
    Chapter four:

    I really enjoyed this chapter. Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru hesitantly expressed their love for one another, the lemon was great, Kagome made a great stand in their defense when Kikyou showed up and then the awful event at the end that had Inuyasha swept away. At least Sesshoumaru was able to save Kagome. What an eventful chapter! The action whore in me is very satisfied. Oh yeah!

    Snow

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  • From ANON - Snowfall on August 25, 2006
    Chapter three:

    This put a grin on my face: Kagome’s tending to involve creatures known as aliens and things called government conspiracies. Your presentation of Sango’s acceptance was very smooth and less of a ‘telling’ since it was done as a thought. Good job there. It didn’t feel dry. None of your story does. Very impressive.

    Having Sesshoumaru drifting through the shadows as an observer was very visual. His answer to Sango that they all stunk was pretty funny. Oh, my heart fluttered when he told her that he loved Inuyasha. Finally, an admission. And I could see Sango as the one brave enough to ask.

    Oh wow! When Kagome caught up to Inuyasha in the clearing, their kiss and Inuyasha saying that he loved Kagome kind of threw me for a loop. Plus, he enjoyed the kiss. I was wondering where it was going. I was just as confused as Kagome. But it turned out so sweet.

    The section with Sango, Sesshoumaru and Miroku was very interesting. One conversation very serious and the other, easing a heavy subject. Sesshoumaru and Sango seemed to have bonded a bit.

    You left Inuyasha and Kagome in the same relationship that they seemed to have before, but with Kagome more accepting of their circumstances.

    Again, great job.

    Snow

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  • From ANON - Snowfall on August 25, 2006
    The whole section with Miroku and Rin was so sweet and not neglecting Rin's need to accept the circumstances was very thoughtful of you. Poor Miroku, first he has to deal with the fear instilled in him when Sesshoumaru catches Rin sleeping in his lap and then he has to endure Sango's threats. I really did feel sorry for the guy. You really handled the telling of Inuyasha's secret quite well. I could see it happening exactly like that. And of course, it is in character that Kagome would run after him.

    You really do have the feel of the characters and events down quite well and are doing an excellent job with balancing everything out. I like that you leave the reader feeling like something important has occurred in each chapter instead of leaving the reader wanting and starving.

    Great job,

    Snow
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on August 25, 2006
    Chapter One:

    I like that you have made Kagome a three dimensional character. Coming out of the well, she seemed to have the same countenance as in the series. She always seemed to be more lighthearted when she came back to the past. It was so funny when she fell on her butt because Sesshoumaru was the first person that she saw. I almost laughed.

    It was a nice touch that you had Sesshoumaru greet her by saying her name. He was assessing her intelligence…lol. That was another bit of humor. I like that you have these little spots of humor. Kagome imagining Sesshoumaru with nonchalance informing her that he had slaughtered her friends was another smiley. And then we get the proverbial ‘sit’. The end of that section was very sweet. Who would have thought that Sesshoumaru would carry her backpack for her?

    You really capture the character’s behaviors and personalities well. Inuyasha scratching his head was so IC. Sesshoumaru’s behavior has changed, but that is due to his new circumstances and what he learned while being held prisoner. Plus, he is trying to ‘gain favor’ with Inuyasha’s friends. He knows how much they mean to Inuyasha. And I don’t doubt that Inuyasha would stand against Sesshoumaru in order to protect Kagome. That’s how their first encounter in the series began after all.

    That little piece of information about Izayoi allowed us to see another side of Sesshoumaru…and I enjoyed it.

    I may get in a review on the other chapters. Not sure, but I’ll try. They may be much shorter.

    A very well written series. And I am anxious to see chapter seven.

    Snowfall

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  • From ANON - Divina14 on August 24, 2006
    Awsome story!!!!!!!! I love it!!!! I've always appriciated long stories like yours, it gives the reader a lot to read. You are a very talented writer, I could never write anything this good!!! I hope to read the next chapter quite soon.
    -Until then,
    Divina Hale *^-^*
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  • From ANON - fib on August 11, 2006
    AN UPDATE!! *flails around*
    I love Sesshomaru's mood/behaviour in this chapter.
    And I especially liked Inuyasha's reflective moment as he was comforting Rin.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 10, 2006
    Good Grief! Someone picture me shocked!!! :-o I didn't think there would be an update.

    But this was a good one it kept up with the drama & intensity that an Inuyasha story
    should have.

    I liked the Monster of the Week.
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  • From ANON - Demitria Miriam on August 10, 2006
    Oh god. An update! Please please please say you're having a great day and want to write another chapter and post it tomorrow!? lol Great! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Ceres on July 11, 2006
    Moooore~! *___*!!
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  • From ANON - adry on May 27, 2006
    please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Go Elsewhere on February 02, 2006
    Woah, didn't see that coming.

    I'm glad Kagome's being reasonable about this-- usually she just goes pyscho bitch on everyone, and that's really not fair-- After all, that IS Kikyo's job, isn't it?
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  • From ANON - Demitria Miriam on February 02, 2006
    WAHH! Inuyasha!!! I just wanted to say that this was brilliant and that you shouldn't listen to any stoopid-heads! Your writing is like Inuyasha and Sesshomaru making love (omg that sound weird); it's beautiful!! Ooo! And what's with the water?! Did Kikyou do it! I never saw that coming, Kikyou, I mean. Very good! Kikyou IS a frigid bitch. Hrmph! Keep the good stuff coming!!

    -DM
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  • From ANON - Geroto! :) on February 01, 2006
    I was gonna review with a great review and praise for you,... but then it hit me. I've read this before. Inu and Sesshy go into the forest eventually have sexx and kagome watches - sesshy notices her so does inu and inu is frozen in shock and frightened that itll sicken her but it doesn't. sesshomaru smells her arousal and prestou shes invited into a nice little thre-some. thats jest ew. this is a friggin sess/inu section not a sess/inu/kagome section!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2006
    no not kagome XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2006
    kagome is so sneaky
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