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Reviews for The Price of Freedom

By : fluffy802005
  • From ANON - Faye Megan on January 04, 2006
    yay!! I'm so glad you posted another chapter, your lemon was good, and you're sucha great writer already, I know you will only improve! I can't wait for the next update! Great job!!!
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  • From ANON - mia on January 04, 2006
    beautiful. ♥
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  • From ANON - inufan625 on January 04, 2006
    I like it so far and thought that your first lemon was pretty good.

    Maybe it's just me but I also specifially remember you writing that the girls told Narkau they were older so that he wouldn't be interested in them as sex slaves and so he just had them clenaing and such... Anyway keep working and ignore the flames.
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  • From ANON - the cridic on January 04, 2006
    finish
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  • From ANON - lemon_ice on January 04, 2006
    ok, heres my problem with your story: the way that kagoame, sango, and rin are acting, is not correct. i do not mean that they are acting out of character, but acting incorrectly had they indeed been held captive and such, as you have it. they would not be this....happy, i do not believe, and they would not be so welcoming to all this male attention, considering everyting that they have seen and been through. i do not htink you have written that acuratley. however, your story is not bad, i just think that it needs some work.
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  • From ANON - chubbers on January 04, 2006
    some one really complained about you using tobacco and beer? wow that thats sad its lot like you made it into an orgy beer fest or something....and this IS adult fan fiction so i hope the readers here will be mature enough to not whine about something so stupid..... i loooooove this story so far, and i hope you describe what each girl's gowns look lke when you get to the party! i know ill sound like a perv fro saying this, but i hope theres a lemon in the next chapter or so, cause i can only stand so much of the guys acting so damn mushy without getting any.... cant wait for the update!
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  • From ANON - Faye Megan on January 04, 2006
    yay, I can't wait to read more, I hope you can get your computer fixed soon. I work at a PC, but my desk space is limited so I have a "mini" keyboard, exactly like you would find on a laptop, so when i do use a regular keyboard on other computers, I get confused and start pressing wrong bottons! anyways. Good luck, and keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2006
    i noticed this chapter didnt say anything about rin and sess but it was still good. update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2005
    Love this chapter. Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - mia on December 29, 2005
    great!!! (as usual!) keep those updates coming!!! cant wait for the next chappy!!
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  • From ANON - TheLadyRin on December 29, 2005
    SOOOO good!!! please keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - Bookreader9999 on December 29, 2005
    I like it. Can't wait to see Miroku and Inuyasha 'convince' the girls to stay with them.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2005
    PLZ UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Ren on December 23, 2005
    Wow..what a cliffy o.o Tee hee hee. Update again sometimes ne? ^_^
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on December 23, 2005
    “Keep your fucking voice down. They’re demon’s remember, they have like super fucking hearing and shit.”

    OMG, I laughed so damn hard!!! You're doing so well with this.
    I love it. You give everyone equal time & the storyline is so
    well done. Wow. You're doing fantastic!! I didn't realize i'd
    missed so many updates, so it was a real joy to have so much
    to read! I look forward to the next chapter. Again, great job!
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