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Reviews for The Price of Freedom

By : fluffy802005
  • From ANON - DeronsDemonGurl on February 03, 2006
    I really enjoyed this story alot. I hope that everything works out for you and your husband. Anyways this is a really great story. XD
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  • From ANON - Portia on January 31, 2006
    I love your story it so well writen! I t has a great plot too...I'm sorry that things aren't going well for you right now but im sure it will work out...it always does if you just trust that the universe will provide..corny sounding i know but it works...I just wanted to wish you luck and let you know that you'll be in my thoughts,
    Portia
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  • From ANON - Judo Creature on January 31, 2006
    Man that sucks! XP! I love ish your story! And I ish person 'Junko Adachi' Yep! Thats me! I thanks you for reviewing my story! Ish appreciates it muchly! Hope you can update soon, and all your problems with bills and crap work out. I am havign similar problems...bills icky! *frowns* Well, about it! Bye person! --Judo
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on January 24, 2006
    I know just what you're dealing with & i wish you all
    the luck in the world. Before i started my own business
    shit was just hectic and it's so damn hard out there!
    I hope the opening pans out & things fall back into
    place for you. Th story is absolutely fab & i'll be here
    when you update!

    All the best,
    InuGrrrl
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  • From ANON - chanda on January 24, 2006
    Okay you are forgiven with not updating a chapter, but hey I do hope you get the job... gl...

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Ren on January 13, 2006
    Great work, I've been busy so I haven't reviewed in a while, forgive for that. ^-^; and well, it was great work, ne? Just keep it up! I'll be around at times to review, that I promise! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Junko Adachi on January 12, 2006
    OMG! This is an awesome story! I would have reviewed for other chaps but I couldn't stop reading. I have to say, your second lemon was WAY better than your first. ^.^! poor Shippo-chan! bad Naraku killed his parents! Time to get out the butcher knives!!!!! *sharpens knives* It's huntin time! I loved the part when Rin decked Kagura. I would have done the same too if I was in her position... I hate Kagura/Sesshomaru pairings... *shudders* well, update soon onegai! --Junko
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  • From ANON - the cridic on January 12, 2006
    continue
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  • From ANON - mia on January 12, 2006
    wow!!! naraku is really going in deep and dirty to got to this family. i CANT wait for the next chapter!!!!
    ♥ mia
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on January 12, 2006
    Awesome chap! Cute lemon & very funny.
    Continue! Continue!
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  • From ANON - u on January 08, 2006
    iu
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  • From ANON - chanda on January 07, 2006
    Not bad for your first lemon... Loved the chapter.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on January 05, 2006
    Wonderful fic! Funny & very entertaining.
    Nice lemony goodness too ^_^
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on January 05, 2006
    Wow,nice chapter,and I loved that Sessh and Rin got together first.The water fall scene was perfect .For it being your first it was very good and shows alot of promise.I'm glad you let them have thier moment together with out any evil influance to mess it up.
    Can't wait for the next chapter,hope its soon
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  • From ANON - Zelix (not signed in) on January 04, 2006
    So that was your first lemon? Hmm, for a first timer, it was quite good, it just needs more details and a bit more depth, and you have a high class lemon in your hands!

    I remember when i wrote my first lemon, i never published it because it was written in Finnish... but, the very first lemons that i published on this site, though the story no longer exists, was quite good. Now, i have written about... 5 lemons so far, and from the reviews i've received, they are pretty hot too.

    If you want to read my lemons, either check my profile or email me.

    Anyway, back to the review at hand:
    (Sorry about what i wrote, i apologise if you found this... 'advertisement', offensive in any way.)


    So, even though this was your first lemon, i can see promise in it, just brush up your skills, add details and depth, and you have a promisin future ahead of you. The story itself is also very good, and as for the behaviour of the characters, this is AU and your first fic, so you have all the rights to do as you please. If the story is AU, you can describe the characters as you wish, anyone who complains about it, they can just go F*** themselves because AU means "Alternate Universe", meaning it is not related to the original story, so the authors can describe characters as they please, AU is like a stamp that gives 100% freedom for authors to do as they please, if you don't like it, then just keep quiet.

    Anyway, sorry about that ranting, hope to hear from you someday again!
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