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Reviews for Joker's Dice

By : Marrioner
  • From ANON - Kiara on December 23, 2005
    " 'Besides, if I die who's going to be around to knock Sesshomaru off his high horse when his ego gets the better of him?' Obviously dying was not an option."

    Hehehehehe! I really think it's as good as any reason as to why Rumiko Takahashi invented this particular pair of brothers! I couldn't stop laughing for whole ten minutes. I loved Inuyasha's monologue in this chapter, it shows more humour than angst (sorry for that, seeing you are aiming for an angst type of fiction) but please don't change it (puppy dog eyes) because I think you managed to bring out angst but with a twisted kind of humour that makes people laugh, happy and enjoy themselves. Also, thanks for one on one reply for the review and please keep up the humour in the fiction because it really makes it more enjoyable. It's really rare to find a humorous fiction in this site. So long, until next time, have a wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year!
    P.S. Please, update soon (hopefully before New Year)!

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  • From ANON - anon on December 23, 2005
    oo!! update soon please! I love this so far. And I like your writing syle.
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  • From ANON - inufangirl007 on December 22, 2005
    great start! please continue!
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  • From ANON - I Love Twins! on December 22, 2005
    Awesome.

    Are you sure you've never written anything before?

    ^_^^_^ - (I Love Twins!)
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  • From ANON - Albino Runt on December 22, 2005
    aww, Sesshomaru should have slashed her!

    (as you can see, I really don't like Kagome!)

    Anyway, other than that part (can't SOMEBODY kill her already?) I really LOVED this chapter!
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  • From ANON - Go Elsewhere on December 22, 2005
    I know what you mean. It's the same with me, and if I can't find anything wrong with it at first glance, I'll scoure through it until I do! It's a bad little habit of mine, but it seems to keep whatever force in me that's so desperate for imperfection within myself at bay, so...

    Anyway, I loved this chapter too, and it's great that you updated so quickly (and that you responded individually-- most authors don't do that...) I hope you can pound another one out sometime soon cause this is truly great!
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  • From PolkaDot on December 22, 2005
    Sesshy's just a big softy ain't he. sigh. I love cruelty, it's fun to read all the blood and guts.
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  • From ANON - Kiara on December 22, 2005
    Good job on Sesshoumaru's character! I think Inuyasha's comment on his brother while out was amusing. I am really looking forward to the next chapters, so please update soon. Happy Holidays!
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  • From ANON - Kobanya on December 22, 2005
    LOL. A staring contest between Sesshy and Kagome? Waay funny!
    I can see it chibified...XD
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  • From ANON - SP777 on December 22, 2005
    o-o-okay, so far so good.

    Good start & good title, I loves a good title.
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  • From ANON - Rawben on December 22, 2005
    great pairing, i wonder how you will deal w/ kagome... ;) yey for updates!
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  • From ANON - Kiara on December 21, 2005
    Hehehe, nice name! I don't know why but it makes me laugh! Anyway, I like the beginning so please continue and update soon! Happy Holidays!
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  • From ANON - Go Elsewhere on December 21, 2005
    For a first time author you're doing amazingly well. Heck, for a second time author you're doing amazingly well! This is really good writing-- you've got a good amount of detail, but not too much either. You seem to be portraying both Inuyasha and Sesshomaru quite well and already have me hooked.

    I can't wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - I Love Twins on December 21, 2005
    This is really cool! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

    ^_^^_^! - (I Love Twins!)
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  • From ANON - Alibino Runt on December 21, 2005
    Wickedly awsome fic! You damn well better update this soon!
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