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By : Marrioner

From ANON - Tryst on March 15, 2006
This is your conscious calling. Where the heck did you store the updates? Huh? Post something soon, cause I want to read more.

PS: Where are the waffles? Oh, wait. Thats not you. Sorry.

Tryst.
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From ANON - sikalimppu on January 23, 2006
Promising start:) I really wished you'd write a bit longer chapters, though.
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From ANON - Psycho's R Us on January 19, 2006
Well, it's nice to know that you prefer mental anguish over physical. Makes a reader proud. Though I have a question. What would really cause an agonizing moment for these two? I'll tell ya, tie them together. If one should try to hurt the other they themselves hurt. Or something like that. Anyway, I'm sure you know what your doing. Though in my honest opinion, don't try to force yourself, but do try to get your chapters written. You have talent. Don't waste it.
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From ANON - Albino Runt on January 08, 2006
UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!
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From ANON - nona on January 06, 2006
maybe add a little bit of yaoi? please? and update soon :D
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From ANON - SP777 on January 06, 2006
Better late than never...

Sorry about your Dad, I know exactly how stress can affect you, been there, DON'T want to go there again. Luckily the only thing for me now is....I can't REMEMBER crap half the time anymore!!! Is that sad or what?

..and I'm only in my mid 30's. *sigh* Must get more rest.

Anyway, to review...okay call me crazy BUT for some reason for a split second when I saw this Marrionette. That's what this woman was. An empty shell who housed a mere ghost I thought you were doing a review in the middle of the story. I was like 'why a review in the middle???' Then it hit me, 'OH! Marionette! Duh!!! but that was a mistake for JUST a second. :-)

Well, looking for the next chapter.
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From ANON - Go Elsewhere on January 04, 2006
Well, if the more compliments we feed you the bigger your ego gets, and the bigger it gets the more feeding it needs, we'll just have to work harder to accomodate it won't we?

Lol, I love this chapter.

I loved the little bit of interaction between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru at the end-- you had them so well in character there it surprised me.

I can't wait for the next update, you're doing fan-fucking-tastic!
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From ANON - Rawben on January 03, 2006
yey!! great chapter! are they going to sess's home?? i hope so ;)
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From ANON - anon on January 03, 2006
It's amazing how there is more response to reviews than there is story. The length between updates and the short chapters are making this story hard to follow and unappealing to do so.

This is not a flame, btw. Just helpful criticism.
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From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2005
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(You better update, cause I can go on like this forever!)
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From ANON - Go Elsewhere on December 26, 2005
This is such an incredibly story! You really are a great author!
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From ANON - anon on December 24, 2005
Good story but...way way way WAY too short.
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From ANON - Rawben on December 24, 2005
ouch. now they're both screwed! hurt... out in the middle of the forest.. damn. lol, nice chapter! but short!
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From ANON - djl on December 23, 2005
the graceful sesshomaru tripping and falling... what is happening there?...anyway good chapter... so what is going to happen next to Inuyasha?
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From ANON - I Love Twins! on December 23, 2005
I know exactly what you mean. That's why I never damn well bothered to get an account on here.

Anyway, this story is awesome-- are you really gonna make us wait till fucking monday to update? *pouts*

^_^^_^ - (I Love Twins!)
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