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Reviews for Devil's Beauty

By : Rocky
  • From ANON - Polka dot on July 19, 2006
    I'm not sure where I read the beginnning of this but I'm glad it's past the unpleasant part.
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  • From ANON - nette on June 05, 2006
    luv it lik it must finish. please new chapter. :) hurry need more sessh/inu time
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  • From ANON - sess-koi on May 09, 2006
    Oh poor Inuyasha. :*( And that bastard Naraku. This story has a great beginning. It might be the fact that I read it at 3 in the morning, but the dialogue seemed rush. I’m not a writer so I can’t offer and real criticism there. I just hope you update soon. I want to see how Inuyasha deals with Kagome and the gang’s ‘betrayal’. (I quote it because I got the impression that Naraku treated the gang into leaving) And also I would like to see more from that flashback. It seems that, that might have been one of the instances where the brothers realized their feels for each other. Yeah, I think you should explain that a little more. Sess and Inu don’t seem the type to just start wanting to claim each for no reason. So I guess my only true criticism of your story is more back-story about the development of their feelings for one another. Other than that I look forward to reading more. Update soon. Happy Writing!
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  • From ANON - inu's slave on January 15, 2006
    oye. update?
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  • From ANON - kenya on January 09, 2006
    this is great. i am intrigued, please continue.
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  • From ANON - inufangirl007 on January 09, 2006
    very sexy! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - inufangirl007 on January 03, 2006
    i can imagne how inu looks there! *drool* great chapter! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Akela on January 03, 2006
    learn to spell, and i might consider reading this.
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  • From ANON - jem89 on January 01, 2006
    Great story! I love Sess/Inu pairings! Please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2006
    great start! please update soon! P.S. inu/sess is my fav yaoi paring in the world!
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  • From ANON - _ on December 30, 2005
    Oh How cool!

    I can't wait for the next chapter!

    There is gonna be another chapter... right? 0_0
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2005
    Since it's your first fic I'll play nice.

    You need to brush up your writing a bit (ever considered maybe getting a beta or editor?) but otherwise you have an interesting plot.

    I can't imagine Inuyasha ever promising (even if only to himself) to become Sesshomaru's concubine though.
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