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By : jfrazi

From ANON - JadedFear on January 27, 2006
You gotta keep going! I can't believe you just stopped right there!
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From ANON - Denara on January 27, 2006
That was a very awesome chapter.... and Kagome should know already that she belongs to Sesshomaru and not Hojo... I really hope that you update soon
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From ANON - sam on January 27, 2006
*cackles* dundundunnnnnnn
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From ANON - Moon on January 26, 2006
Please update soon! It's cruel and unusual punishment to leave us hanging like that! Well...please update soon...I've been checking every five minutes! T.T
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From ANON - Faye on January 26, 2006
it'll be great to see Hojo walk in on Sesshoumaru completely dominating Kagome! Great chapter (and story over all) update sooonnn! Now sesshoumaru can force kagome to marry him! hahahha
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From Risa on January 26, 2006
UNBELIEVABLY HOT!!! I have so many questions, but where do I begin?
For now, it will be: Why was Sesshoumaru married and cheating on his wife? Was it a business deal? End of questions.
Now that she is pregnant (by the way, NICE MOVE)-I just hope it's a full demon. Their sex is so hot-I don't know how they are NOT a couple nor mated already.
This story is just fun to read. Pure Evil my ass (pun intended =)..it's PURE Sess & Kagome. Great job! I must be a closet pervert.

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From ANON - sweetkijo on January 26, 2006
Ok, wow. Pure Evil just barely describes it. Kagome is just as evil as Sesshomaru in this. You have put her in quite the perdicament. Hee Hee! I love a good story. Pure hentai! This is a very good story and you write rather well. I look forward to your next chapter. Review ya later!
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From ANON - amhor65 on January 26, 2006
Wow! Unbelivable! I seriously love your story. This is exactly what I was looking for. I gotta tell you, I've been searching for a good story to read and I think I found it. Your story is brilliant. I loved all the juicy lemons and limes. They were very descriptive. The plot is what gets me giddy. Hojo and Sesshoumaru. Two VERY different men. I have a distinct feeling that are not all what they seem. I think Kagome loves them both. Anyways I cant wait for the next chapter. I do hope you can update soon.
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From ANON - tanesha on January 26, 2006
poor kagome what is she going to do?

sesshomaru doesn't even care for her and all he wants is her body.

what more does he want? what more can he take that he hasn't taken already?

he took her virginity,used her body and now she is supposed to be getting married and he's ruined that because of her rape and all of her injuries and brusies. she can't even have children if she's lucky enough to even marry hojo. sesshomaru has taken everything away from her. she can't even have normal sex.

now sesshomaru is a wodower,so what will he do? will he accually start to have feelings for kagome that are more then lust or if he already has feelings for kagome will he start to show them and tell kagome how he feels for her.

i was thinking that kagome could get up the stregnth to tell sesshomaru to leave her alone and to never come back and to get out. he will try to have sex with her again but kagome will be cold and unresponsive to him completely. this will anger sesshomaru but he will have to accept it. remember he doesn't want to hurt her in the first place.

he'll leave and go home to deal with his wife's funeral and kagome will heal with no scars thank kami.

kagome and hojo will be nearing there wedding day and kagome finally starts to get her life back and she starts to smile and feel genuinly happy for the first time in a long time then sesshomaru comes back wanting kagome and he gets into her loft and she finds him there and she's ready to purifiy him but he tells her to wait and that he loves her and wants her to marry him.

kagome will be completely surprised and florred. she'll tell sesshomaru that she's marrying hojo and that she's happy finally.

sesshomaru will say that "are you really happy kagome"? kagome will say "yes,i'm happy"

sesshomaru will say"what can i do to convince you that i'm seriouse and sincere about this"?

kagome"nothing""you hurt me and used me and abused me and you raped me as well." "how can i forgive you for all of that?""you've taken everything away from me and now i have nothing left but the thought and possibility of marrying hojo" "what mroe do you want?" do you want my life but then you've already taken it"

sesshomaru winces at her words because all that she said was and is true. he did abuse and use her and he did rape her and she sustained injuries because of it all. kagome was right in saying that he has taken everything from her and her life as well and that she had nothing left but the thought and poossibility of marrying hojo.

then sesshomaru leaves and when its time for the wedding kagome calls if all off because she can't go through with it. it was like it was all a lie and nothing was real or true.

she went to work avoiding hojo and sango tried to comfort her while not understanding why kagome called of the wedding in the first place.

sesshomaru returns to kagome's loft where he is waiting for her to congratulate her on her wedding and to give her a gift.

kagome comes in and takes off her shoes and coat and puts her brier case down and she looks up to see sesshomaru and she is slightly paniced because she changed her locks and door after he left and no one had the key accept ofr her.

she asks"what are you doing here sesshomaru and what is it that you want?"

sesshomaru"i came here only to give you your wedding present kagome"

kagome"i didn't get married to hojo sesshomaru"

sesshomaru looks at her a bit surprised"your not married?"

kagome"no i'm not,so if there's nothing else i think that you should go"

sesshomaru"kagome?"

"yes"

sesshomaru kisses her and tells her "i love you kagome"

"i hate so you so much" she starts crying in his embrace

sesshomaru"say it kagome"

"i love you sesshomaru"

he kisses her again but with a deeper passion and love

while sesshomaru was away from kagome he made preperations for having her as his wife because he was prepared to wait forever for her. after his wife's funeral he tossed and turned in bed having erotic dreams of kagome and unfulfilled passions. he called kagura over and tried to have some sort of release but when he saw her he barked at her to leave. he wanted no ones touch but kagomes and wanted no one by his side other then her. he burned his bed sheets and got rid of everything and completely redecorated his loft and got a room ready for a baby even because he knew that he and kagome were going to have kids.

he redecorated there bed room and even got new furniture and a bed and matress too. along with sheets and lots of new pillows too.

every night he would dream of kagome. sometimes the dreams were intense and erotic and sometimes they were nightmares of what he did to her. then the newest ones were of him coming home and having son and daughter run to him and yell otou-san your home. kagome with a gentle and loving smile on her face. his children showing off what they learned about there powers.

both were full demons.

the childrens names tensaimaru and katara

kagome would always ask him how was his day and plant a firm but loving kiss on her husbands lips. then he would always wake up. he wasn't getting any sleep and by now kagome was already happilly married to hojo and wanted nothing to do with ever again. she would probably purifiy him if she saw him again but he had to see her and so he made to leave and took along the escuse that he had a wedding present for her wich it was. he bought her pearl locket made out of real fresh water pearls and inside the two circles were encrusted with diamonds. the locket was an inch and a half wide and in legnth as well. he thought it a perfect gift and one that would complement kagome.

he goes to her loft and frowns when he sees a new door and lock but that doesn't stop him and he quickly picks the lock hating it that he looks like a common thief. he enters her loft and waits for kagome to return.

that's what happens while he's not with kagome.

this is just my opinion and fantasy

good story so far btw

onegai update soon

see ya round

ja ne
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From ANON - Olive Oil on January 26, 2006
Good god. What an amazing story. I couldn't have asked for a better sex filled story. I find it amazing and I truly cannot wait for the next part.
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From ANON - Luvspanky on January 26, 2006
I love this story! Its all my sick little mind could ask for! Could you put in a spanking scene for your next lemon?
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From ANON - Koroko on January 26, 2006
Well done! I've become so attached to this story now! Please update soon!
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From ANON - Kags21 on January 26, 2006
That is one sexy story , so now he's a widower what does that mean for Kagome?
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From ANON - sassy on January 26, 2006
great up date soon.
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From ANON - Rinseternalsoul on January 26, 2006
Good God. A woman after my own heart. I am so loving this dirty little fic of yours. Sesshomaru the nympho. It's a concept that I could grow to adore. Damn. Now I need another shower. Catch you on the update~

Rinseternalsoul
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