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Reviews for What did i do this time?

By : bigdon2005
  • From DL69 on January 24, 2007
    ^_^ that was good keep it up ^_^
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  • From DL69 on December 14, 2006
    Yay! ^_^ ur back ^_^ ~waves~
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  • From ANON - crs_seq on December 14, 2006
    Good fic, Can't wait to see what happens next, real interesting fic.
    update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2006
    DBZ is for babies.

    woulda been better if it was Howl.
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  • From ANON - CRICKET!!!! the mini tracker hehe on December 14, 2006
    Yeah, um, this was slightly what I would say NICELY to be ... A train wreck.
    Your idea's are all over the place and I am getting a sense of Redundancy from these
    'chapters' you have posted. The way you are portraying the characters is kind of an
    insult to be quite honest. I would love to give you a positive review but... i just cannot think of
    a plausable reason to do such a thing. I'm quite terrified to know how your lemon
    will be portrayed... I dearly hope that you have some experience with that subject personally...
    Because if you do not... It will probably be a train wreck with vulgar words.

    I seriously feel like I wasted my time by even looking at this let alone reviewing.

    What are you 10? your profile says 18 but... damn.

    DBZ is such a child thing... my son watches it and hes 7
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  • From ANON - Gangstatwurp on December 14, 2006
    Bitxh... dis storay is da fuckin bomb fo shiczzle. I did saw dat you gots two of dem autors nutes dough.
    fshhh rite sum more da storay and put some poon in dis shiitz.

    PEAZE!


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  • From ANON - Musing on December 14, 2006
    PLEASE Don't write a lemon.

    I hate this story so MUCH!

    gahhhhhhhh

    FLAME!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2006
    you know, you really can't seem to get your ideas out without them sounding overly... forced and rushed.

    If i were you ... I would take the time to read something by Doggieearlover, Inufan625, or XxSangoxX.

    They know how to write....
    Just a suggestion.
    I get irritated beyond words when people who THNK they can write try to and actually believe that they have literate fans. FYI, you have so many spelling and grammar errors I wanted to cry. And I don't even know if i can mention how OOC this is. DBZ? you've gotta be joking. This hasn't been done before because well... its just stupid.
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  • From ANON - BastardOmega on September 09, 2006
    YEEEEEEES. now that's a story i want to have more of. but thanks for the cliffy, asshole, we didn't get a reaction of the kiss. u better update soon.

    Peace & Love BastardOmega
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  • From AngelicPixie on February 05, 2006
    Hey, sorry I have to go this route. Just letting you know i replied to your comment on my page. Story: Alisha.

    By the way I love your stories, they are almost as addictive as Alisha !!! Keep it up... erm once March 1st rolls around.

    Ciao

    ~Pixie Dust~
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  • From DL69 on January 26, 2006
    see i can review see see see :P
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  • From DL69 on January 26, 2006
    AWWW they kissed...or inu kissed her...he can be so sweet when he wants to be hurry up and update
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  • From ANON - Ferral on January 22, 2006
    woot and the plot thickens dun dun dun! Keep going this is so interesting! ^_^
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  • From ANON - meh on January 21, 2006
    This story is so awesome!!! Please update asap
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  • From ANON - inu5 on January 21, 2006
    update
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