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Reviews for The Final Fight

By : SlopingRabbit
  • From ANON - InuyashaDreamGirl on January 25, 2006
    This chpt was really good. I can't wait until the lemon.
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  • From ANON - Kawaii Yashie on January 25, 2006
    oh my i love this story i'm glad that you wrote it. i think it was about time kikyo died in someone's fic.
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  • From ANON - Riana on January 23, 2006
    WOW...ALSOME...SWEET...COOL and GRATE!!!! You can really tell that this story will ''KNOCK YOU OFF YOUR FEET'' (for real too!) I really hope that Kagome will kick Kikoy's ASS!!! and also hope there will be MUCH more to come.


    P.S,
    This will be really FUNNY if it happen in the show, I will be rolling my head off!!!
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  • From ANON - cridic on January 22, 2006
    continue
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  • From ANON - SESSHYWIFE on January 20, 2006
    AM RIGHT ALONG WITH KAGOME I'LL KICK KIKYO ASS TOO DO YOU HEAR ME
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  • From ANON - Twilight on January 17, 2006
    That's a good question "how do you kill something that's already dead" Well I don't know but I can't wait to find out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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  • From ANON - joy on January 17, 2006
    wonderful as usual... yayyyyyyyyyyyyy more plz
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  • From ANON - chanda (nsi) on January 17, 2006
    Yes, I think you handled that review with maturity. This chapter was a nice filler, I cannot help but enjoy someone else's imagination, and this was indeed different.

    And yes I do know the difference between fiction and nonfiction...but that's not going to stop me reviewing, isn't that what people are supposed to do is review. We take the time out of our life to write stories, for your enjoyment, so yes reviews are helpful, and don't leave a nasty note to insult other authors/ess reading this story, that's not right. To each is own.


    Chanda
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  • From ANON - pat on January 17, 2006
    cool plz contine i want to see them fight again
    kagome kick her ass good
    lol
    plz update
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  • From ANON - Cory on January 17, 2006
    Your story is fabulous. I am a professional writer myself, and I like your thinking. You think outside the box, and that is something a lot of people don't do. They criticize others for doing so. The chapters only have been getting better and better. Keep up the good work! Maybe we can talk, and I'll set you up a meeting with my publisher.
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  • From ANON - IrritatedFan on January 15, 2006
    Wow...so this is what the Inuyasha fandom has come to...shotty stories with slapstick plot, OOC characterizations, and absolutely no forethought put into each chapter. It's not that I didn't try to give your story the benefit of the doubt; to be honest the summary completely turned me off. But then I read the reviews and thought I'd give you a chance..., which probably wasn't the best idea. What sickens me even more is that stories like this one are getting so many reviews when other, much more talented, inventive authors who put hours and/or days into their work get zero...almost no reviews. No wonder most people are turned off by this fandom. The actual, talented authors, most not all though, aren't getting the appreciation they definitely deserve for their original works while authors' like you who do merely 'fanservice' to the apparently 'huge' legions of fans who'd love to bash in Kikyou's face if they could (she's not real people, it's unhealthy to hold so much hatred for a fictive character) are being told that your 'supposed' comedy/masterpiece/whatever you're calling your story is actually funny or possesses an ounce of comedy in it. I'm not saying your horrible writer; you're probably somewhat decent, could even work yourself up to be better than most writers here, but just try to put some effort (some actual thinking were neurons start firing off and brainwave activity can be measured on an EEG) into your work where 'shameless' and highly underserved flattery like the reviews your receiving actually motivate you to write even better, hopefully in character and enjoyable pieces of fiction. Take it for a flame if you will, I know I'm harsh, but trust me the criticism is more than deserved and will hopefully influence you to actually take a deeper look into what you write.
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  • From ANON - joy on January 15, 2006
    KILL KIKYO KILL HER kill that bitch wweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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  • From ANON - oOInuGirlOo on January 15, 2006
    YAY!! Evil clay bitch gets her head bashed in like the slutty bitch that she is! DIE EVIL WALKING ASHTRAY!! i reeeeeally want her to die! pweeeeeeeze? lol
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  • From ANON - chanda on January 14, 2006
    Yeah!!! Good cat fight so far, I think death would be the answer she would be out of the way for good, and not be able to come back for revenge...or you could go the other way... broken and bloody with promise of retribution.

    look forward until the next Kag and Kik beating...

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - nessie on January 14, 2006
    hell ya!
    make clay potty die!!! MWUHAHAHA!!! ....okays im turning evil.....
    anywayz, more kik bashings and inuyasha will be awake to join the fight!
    perfect, and kagz is gnna be sooo tough and strong and just beat the s***
    out of dead gurl!
    GO KAGZ!!!!
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