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Reviews for The Final Fight

By : SlopingRabbit
  • From LadyNaught on September 14, 2008
    Phantom story much! How exactly did you get your story published here without having it in your profile? Well anyway very good story although I think you made Kagome have anger issues, and I did not like the ending, three sentence finish is not good. Well JA NE
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  • From weyrdkat on December 13, 2007
    Sorry Inu6,

    But the last chapter sucked. . .it didn't fit with the story and it was just a hard to read jumble. Although there were a few type-os and a bit of bad formatting in the first chapters, they had a congruent theme and it was really funny to read as Kikyo got her ass handed to her and in the end was killed by the very thing she prided herself on.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 03, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - dd on November 17, 2006
    cool
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  • From ANON - Rauko Arisha on July 10, 2006
    This story kicked @$$!!!!!! i loved it . it kicks. please update and if you could let me know. thanks
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  • From ANON - Little Jack 2 on June 09, 2006
    Please add the lemon and ending soon,that was totally wicked how Kagome kicked that skanky kinky hoe's ass.
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  • From ANON - Angelphire on February 05, 2006
    AWSOME!!!! The crazy whore is dead!
    I loved this one. You are right, it was Kagome's right to fight her. She was awsome at it to. I really hope that you get the next chapter up some time soon. I loved it and I would love for you to finish it! =D
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  • From ANON - alysia on January 31, 2006
    love it
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  • From ANON - Silver Hanyou on January 30, 2006
    hey!! i read all 5 chapters so far and the story is fregin awesome!! i love that kikyo ho is finally dead ead!!! ^.^ great story, plus inuyashas got both caring and his usual big mouth style 2 him which is awesome!! ^_^ i love the story and don't really want it 2 end...but hope the lemons awesome!! i can tell u can definatly whip ^ a good 1 hehe.
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  • From ANON - inufreak10210 on January 27, 2006
    that was awesome ive been waittin fofr that crazy whore to die for like forever and i think you did the fighting very well it was awesome cant wait till the next chapter comes out
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  • From ANON - King on January 26, 2006
    Dog your story is soo cool so far this is one of my favorites please dont make it end soon this story MAKES ME SIT DOWN TURN LIGHTS OUT AND CHILL i like it THAT much dog i even have a freakin song playin to match( BTW im not wimpy...) the story its pimped out DONT STOP Kagome owns asss
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  • From ANON - anon on January 26, 2006
    Hey in the second chapter that ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ is so long it messes up the formatting of the chapter and makes it hard to read. Think you could fix that so it is easier to read. I like the story BTW and look forward to the next chapters
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  • From ANON - bettychan on January 25, 2006
    This is a cute story. I love the thought of Kagome killing Kikyo. The only piece of advice I have is learn the difference between "except" and "accept". You like a lot of others use "except" when you should use "accept".
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  • From ANON - joy on January 25, 2006
    OMG YES THE ****ER OF LIL GIRLIES IS DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!! WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO omg i cant wait for more!!! make more violent stories besides this plz weeeeeeeeeeeee
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  • From ANON - pat on January 25, 2006
    wow shes dead
    i want to know what happened to kagome
    and i also want to read the rest of this storie
    plz contine
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