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Reviews for The effects of sex

By : CelestialGoddess
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 07, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - ??? on February 13, 2006
    hey make mor parts dirty
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  • From ANON - Riana on January 23, 2006
    Wow... It sounds like it will make a great stoy, you just need to finsh it.

    P.S
    good being,and keep writing!

    Form Your Girl,
    Riana.J
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  • From ANON - vam on January 20, 2006
    hey i like it, just keep the chapters updated
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  • From ANON - elie on January 19, 2006
    liked the first chappie update soon ttyl
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  • From ANON - noone on January 19, 2006
    kul
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  • From CelestialGoddess on January 18, 2006
    hey thx yall for the comments i love them and im sorry ill stop with the short forms its just im new at this and ill get better from practice! THX so much for reviews and as soon as somthing pops into ma mind ill finish wat i started and obviously there will be a nice steamy little sex scene coming up! well see yall later.
    X0XCelsetialGoddessX0X
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  • From ANON - nameless on January 18, 2006
    umm ok
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  • From ANON - Twilight on January 17, 2006
    I wounder were this is going?
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  • From ANON - noone on January 17, 2006
    this is an awesome story
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  • From ANON - EverlastingSerenity on January 17, 2006
    Okay, there are a few things that I think you should know about your story...
    1. Great storyline, but it needs alot of work. You need to edit, revise, and you need to use correct puncuiation(sp).
    2. Use more paragraphs. Nobody wants to read one big paragraph, thats a huge turn off for the reader, so is using incorrect spelling.
    3. Add more detail, there is little to no detail in this story.

    I would add more, but since it is so short, there isn't really much to add. This story has good potential, and if you want, I could edit it for you, if you email it to me, that would be great. But like i said before, it does need alot of work. Keep up the good work!
    Keep trying, the other rude reviewers can kiss your ass, they should just use constructive critism, not be mean. But if you do want some help, I'm here to help you! ^__^
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  • From ANON - "fan of kagome" (now) cute mica on January 17, 2006
    inufan and Anon are boneheads u shouldnt
    listen to them keep wrighting *gives u thumbs-up* :-)

    TTFN;
    megan
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  • From ANON - "fan of kagome" (now) cute mica on January 17, 2006
    sounds vary promising :-)
    i would luve it if u put inus P.O.V. ;-)
    plzz update soon.

    TTFN;
    megan
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  • From ANON - Wabel on January 17, 2006
    Please use proper spelling an punctuation.
    The use of more prargraphs is recommended, and read it again before posting there are some words missing.

    Currently I can't say anything about the quality of the story, the sample was too short for a judgement, but sofar it appears somewhat rushed.
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  • From ANON - not anon :P on January 17, 2006
    good storyline, but shorthand+fics=nono
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