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Reviews for Taking Control

By : tinak142
  • From ANON - Mert the Angel of Darkness (NSI) on January 20, 2006
    Not bad so far. Hiei is a little OOC, but it's your fic, so there's no harm done. In fact I think it's cute. I really like it. Update soon, ne?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2006
    Sorry but it sucks. Why donīt you start over with a real plot? Do you know how many stories are there with the same old -Kagome sees Inu with Kikyou and plans to kill her to give his dead lover her soul back- ? No? More than enough. Itīs out of character for all three of them and just plain stupid. Try to write more realistic: Kikyou is not a bitch, Kagome is not a ninny and Inuyasha is not an asshole, just an idiot but he loves both women. If he could choose he would take Kagome. It would have been more believable if Kagome would be tired of waiting for Inu and starts to fall in love with someone else- and here comes Hiei.

    Something like that would have been nice.
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  • From ANON - Thorn Mellikos on January 19, 2006
    Hey Sis,
    Again chapter two and three, they're good. Real good. Can't wait to read more.
    Ttyl.
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  • From ANON - Thorn Mellikos on January 19, 2006
    Hey Sis,

    Nice story. A few errors in spelling. But all in all, it's actually pretty great for the first chapter. Can't wait to read more. Ttyl..
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