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By : nightshade41230
  • From angel23 on October 05, 2014
    PLEASE UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - angel23 on September 30, 2013
    Please update.
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  • From DesertFire on November 26, 2010
    This story sounds good, please finish it, HAPPY THANKSGIVING>
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  • From nightshade41230 on December 05, 2008
    ,,,,,If anyone wants to read this story I will finish it in this name,I don't remember the password nor the emal adress this story is in The dream)will me writtent in this name nightshade41230,its my story,,who every reads this review
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  • From nightshade41230 on June 02, 2008
    vdcz
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  • From ANON - chicke on November 21, 2006
    great so far can not wait until you update
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  • From ANON - Sakuya on June 11, 2006
    I really like your story, and i hope you continue to write. Please update soon. A little advice though... get a beta reader to review ur work before u post so it looks better, and is easier to read..but other than that..very impressive.
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  • From ANON - TIAN on February 02, 2006
    YOU ARE VERY GOOD. KEEP IT UP!
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  • From ANON - Jinx on January 30, 2006
    Hey,
    I really like ur story, though i have to say it doesnt sound exactly like sesshoumaru.And that its hard to read when all of it is together.Otherwise its an awesome story and i cant wait to read the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - tanesha on January 29, 2006
    please update soon onegai
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  • From ANON - tanesha on January 29, 2006
    please update soon

    i've got to know what happens to kagome and sesshomaru and what is kagome's reaction to all that has happend?

    what will sesshomaru do now that kagome is not only his mate and marked by him even though he didn't do it but she is now with pup? his pup.

    what is going to happen? will kagome turn into a inuyoukai demoness because she's mated to sesshomaru?

    will kouga show up and say "what's going and where's my woman?" what will sesshomaru do? will he be protective of kagome and say that "she is not your woman ookami" posessivly holding kagome in his arms(yes arms)"she is mine wolf can you not smell my mark on her?"he growls

    kagome will be like "what's going on?""ans what are you talking about?""what mark?"

    huh ugh now i'm just day dreaming again

    please onegai onegai onegai onegai update soon

    see ya round

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2006
    you need to put more detail into the chapters. its gets odd when you see sesshoumaru said inuyasha said kagome said. try something like sesshoumaru and inuyasha looked at kagome while she was talking. something like that. its not a bad story but i think that you should get someone to help you just a little. Look at some other fics to that might help some.
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  • From MysteryladyTx on January 22, 2006
    ok...interesting...LOL...Great chapter...hehehe...oh man, THANKS:D can't wait for the next chapter:D
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  • From MysteryladyTx on January 22, 2006
    interseting so Kagome was bitten by Sessh..or something...LOL...interesting beginning:D
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  • From ANON - Lea on January 22, 2006
    This would be good if you added more detail to it. Seriously, I feel nothing of this fic. You have an OK, start so far; but have you considered going further than OK? I don't know if i'm making any sense though. HM, but yeah. Well, "White outfit" won't do. I'm referring to how you described Sesshou's clothing. I'm a full on SEsshoumaru/Kagome fan, and I'm totally with these types of stories. But I like very, detailed fictions. I'll come and check up on this fic, and if you need a beta; you could e-mail me. I'd be happy enough to go over your work. =)
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