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By : Koday
  • From ANON - Sacred_Sagittarius on January 09, 2007
    Great chapter Koday, I likey. Hah! I can't wait to see exactly how Kikyo will exactly attempt to get rid of Al, I'm sure it's gonna be explosive in a very entertaining way. I was wondering how long it was gonna take Max to put 2 and 2 together about when they were LOL Mental thoughts on how a public bathroom would smell to an inu-demon...blech! Just sick and wrong. BTW When I read your comment about being a lil shy flashing your fanboy-ness around on your deviant site I had an outside mental picture of what Mitsuki and I looked like raving and ranting about the creep factor level for a Naraku possessed Souta in front of my co-worker Alysia, and kinda gulped remembering that she only smiled on in this politely confused way. Damn, another opportunity to convert the masses missed! :P
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  • From kookookitty on January 08, 2007
    >=D

    great chapter... amusing, intelligent.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on January 08, 2007
    Okay, I don't have much time so...I loved the ending. still laughing about it. looking forward to more. oh, and as usual, kikyou's gotta be put down, preferrably hard and painfully
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  • From ANON - MetsukiKaraTen on December 31, 2006
    Oooo big fat and creepy plans... hasn't Kikyo suffered enough?? :P I love it that you are exploring the inner sanctum of her mind! The reactions of Max and Al to her were priceless!! Boy are they in for an education, I can see it now... very much looking forward to your next installment. (if Max thought Naraku in Tokyo was creepy, he's not seen anything yet!)
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  • From kookookitty on December 30, 2006
    so far this was excelent! very well written entertaining and intelligent... quite a bit of humor as well. i am eagerly anticipating more of this unique story.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - Sacred_Sagittarius on December 29, 2006
    BTW I have to agree with szaugglaughs about Max's very inventive exclamations. They work even better because they are his internal dialog and just paint a great picture of the kind of guy he is, for some reason I read it in my brother's voice LOL Things I think he would probably pop off with perhaps.
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  • From ANON - Sacred_Sagittarius on December 29, 2006
    I'm really liking the addition of Kikyo. I think that your portrayal of her passage of time are unique but make absolute sense (I kinda gota a creepy Lestat moldering under the house feeling too lol). Her thoughts about her own existance really hit home to how I personally saw her, and of course your fire-life comparison was wonderfully written and well thought out. I have to say that Al and Max's reactions to the "dead" body are great! The adjusting of robes when she stood made me giggle. I really enjoying your work.
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  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on December 29, 2006
    As usual, the only thing I didn't like about the chapter was the fact that it's ended! I thought the kikyou/max/kikyou viewpoint change was interesting, and i liked how we don't realize some of kikyou's influence until after they talk with her. It definitely gave a nice 'woah, wait a second, what the helll?' feeling to the chapter, in my opinion. Looking forward to more. Have a good new year,

    Oh, I believe all my favorite line's are from Max

    Holy FUCKING Republic of Ecuador
    and
    this is several flavours of creepy.

    were two of the ones that really stuck in my head and gave me a nice chuckle.
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  • From ANON - DrkLazarus on December 28, 2006
    *Attempts to recover from being blinded with a heaping helping of awesome.*

    *Fails miserably.*

    Ah well. I'm gonna go sleep off this blindness. After I bookmark your story.

    Great job, and keep it up!

    ~Laz
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2006
    Im still in chap. 8 ... well 9 now.. but...

    Inuyasha is MAX huh.

    I think i've figured this out.

    i knew it was sessh. what an ass.
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  • From ANON - Snake of Medusa on December 15, 2006
    This is one of the better fics I've read on aff, most have horrible grammar, spelling, and no discernable plotline. I'm happy to say that this story is my #1 fic for aff because none of these things are present--you've got no huge spelling errors and I love the storyline! Can't wait to read more, just wanted to let you know how much I appreiciate your story. ^_^
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  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on December 14, 2006
    Eeeek, blinded by the awesome!
    :-)
    I liked this chapter quite a bit. The dialogue flowed nicely, seemed in character, and did very well for what y ou would expect out of these characters in this situation. I didn't think it dragged at all...I was just wishing there was more of it! Oh, and great last moment to end the chapter on, especially the girly screaming. Honestly, wouldn't anyone scream their ass off in that situation? Freaky in the extreme.

    I can hardly wait for the next chapter. This just gets better and better.
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  • From ANON - Sacred_Sagittarius on November 26, 2006
    OMFG That was the best yet! I was totally able to picture everything, your awesome! Kagome lives?!? eeek! Seriously the whole time from the point Max burst I felt the expectant tension build in my chest, was like having a music score build-up only without the music. I find this pretty funny considering you touched on something similar with the horror movie. I'm still all antsy thinking "What next! What next!" Ahhhrgh! I don't care how short your chapters are as long as you keep em comin :D
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  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on November 21, 2006
    yeaaaah, so happy to see another chapter. Like the flashbacks...and I can't even say why, I just liked 'em. For some reason, the granpa/conning the customer bit made me laugh my ass off. very, very curious to see what happens next!!!!

    Oh, and thanks for not offing Souta, I would have been just too sad.
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  • From ANON - MetsukiKaraTen on November 21, 2006
    OMG OMG OMG!!! What a RIDE!! That was just...*whew* fantastic... Though something about that Capt.Kangaroo reference really threw me for a loop. DAMN! someone actually remembers him?? Doesn't that kind of... date you? Oh gawd, I just dated myself... crap... ok ok I'll admit it... no, on second thought I won't. Who the heck is Capt. Kagaroo??? *sweat drop*

    I have to say that I am falling more and more for Max. What an amazing character!! And I will admit I suspected that Al might be one who closeted special powers, due to her ability to see Max's true form from the get-go, but I am even more deeply intrigued now that Souta has reported his 'discovery' to his mother. That killed one plot progression I was expecting. And that is the thing, you have done an amazing job of leading us along with only small pieces of the puzzle, keeping the mystery. The timing of the small revelations has been, frankly, seductive ... and I have become insatiable!! More please??

    Metsuki-babaa
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