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Reviews for Shades of Gray

By : fallenangel7583
  • From 4inukag4 on March 07, 2007
    Beautiful, I like how you made them connect and hate doing so. This was a true work of art, sorry for not being more eloquent but I am bowled over and deeply moved at this point. I loved the shift in focus from the whole bank/kag to inu/kag, and how he was so noncommital in answering questions about his relationship with Kikyo. I can't wait to see where you're going with this.

    *bakes you sugar cookies in the shape of puppies*

    With respect to your busy schedule, Please update soon. And stop by my story Call Center Romance.

    Holly S
    "I must leave, for there they go and I am their leader."

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  • From Yashalove on March 06, 2007
    It is really going to be interesting to find out how those two figure out who the other is. I see that you said Inuyasha can't put it all together cause he is right in the middle of it but if he would take off that limiter he would be able to smell her and put it together. Well I think that Inuyasha being Inuyasha that it may even take more than the smell for him to put it together. Sometimes I think you really need to slap him and put it all out in terms for him to understand it all cause I agree with you when you say he is about a couple fries short of a happy meal!! LOL!!! I really do love this story!! It is one of those that you just keep looking for the updates!!! Oh I do have a question though, has something happened to Songo to make her so untrustful of people? Dang did she go after Inuyasha!! She seems to think noone is capable of concern and compassion for Kagome but her and she hasn't even been around for years. Makes you think of what has happened to her, you know!! Will be looking for the next update, hope its soon!!!
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  • From on March 06, 2007
    Im fricken speechless so I'll say only one thing.............you fricken ROCK! :)
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  • From chanda on March 06, 2007
    Well that chapter was a bittersweet symphony. To have what you cannot have...but I'm sure you'll come up with something to get these two together...lol.

    Loved the chapter. Congrats with winning...I think that's great and you so deserve it!

    Well until your next update.

    Chanda
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on March 06, 2007
    another wonderful chapter and I was so happy to see it updated! Great job and please please update soon!
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  • From shatterwing on March 04, 2007
    I've read all of your posted stories and I have to say I really do love your writing, It is so much better then the majority of the fanfiction that I end up reading.(I really do have a serious addiction to the stuff.)
    I just wanted to let you know that I genuinely enjoyed reading all of your posted work.

    Thank you!!

    Shatterwing

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  • From on February 26, 2007
    Oh yes things are starting to come together and I'm FRICKEN LOVING IT! I love how Miroku and Sango are getting sneaky. Wonderful as usual. I'm very happy to see that Inuyasha and Kagome are starting to come together little by little. It's very well paced and nicely written. I'm so looking forward to more chapters, especially the one where Bankotsu is going to get his ass handed to him......YAY I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! EVERYTHING YOU WRITE COMES TO LIFE! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVEEEESSSSSSSS IIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTT! THANKS AGAIN FOR ANOTHER WONDERFUL CHAPTER!
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  • From chanda on February 25, 2007
    Oh, I absolutely loved this chapter...Isn't Miroku the clever one. Like always...the chapter was brilliant.

    Until next time,
    Chanda
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  • From sweetkijo on February 25, 2007
    Wow, the drama unfolds....That Miroku and Sango are pretty smart ne? What will Inuyasha do once he finds out who did this to Kags? And when will he come to terms with choosing between her and Kinky-ho? Hmmm...lol..thanks for the update. I love it when I am kept on my toes.
    Neddi
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  • From weyrdkat on February 24, 2007
    Hey! *do. . .do. . .doo . . .does a mini happy dance, looking around for an audience before she embarrasses herself* AHEM! So now that that's done, congrats on the new chapter. Interesting that Miroku puts Kags and Bank together, but Inu never makes the connection. . . .I do like the way you use the concealment spells though. I thought about how a half-demon (usually no ears where they belong) would be handled in a modern setting without making them a commonplace, and that's an interesting way. I thought about ears with latex and spirit gum like movies and then just covering the real ears. . .But I like the rings. . .

    So, a character from COTD? Is is Ryen?? Yum yum. . .hot older inu guys!

    I was also twisting my brain around the revealing of Inu's "other half," and I was thinking that it would be funny that in the throes of passion, she couldn't pronounce the "inuya" and just blurted out "oh, Sha. . ." That would make a few things click for him. . .even though, she'd probably still be in the dark. Cruel, but funny.

    Okay, I'm done with the subliminal coersion. Can't wait for more!! Maybe I'll start writing more while waiting. :)
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  • From Yashalove on February 24, 2007
    This is one of my favorite stories!! Huge Kudos for the plot!! Can't wait to find out when Inuyasha and Kagome will find out they really know each other in more than one way!! I think Bank works really well in the character you have him in. I still wonder about Naraku. Just can't figure out what he is up too. Well just wanted to let you know your story is great and can't wait for the update!! Hope it is soon!! Yashalove
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  • From SultryRayn on February 24, 2007
    YaY!!! you know what they say revenge is a dish best served cold "Kill Bill Vol.1" best movie ever anwyays....you updated so excited... cant wait till your next chapter it is just getting jucier and jucier....muhahahahahaha.....no one besides Sueric can keep me interested like you do*sigh* just wow... Inuyasha and Kagome so Kawaii awwwww.... I love them.... keep up the good work,...yaya!!! ummmmm....*drops to knees and bows humbly* please post again soon fo I will stay this way until you do...by the way my spidey senses were tingling lol
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  • From flamingangel on February 24, 2007
    wow! I was so glad to see that you updated another chapter! I love this story!
    It's amazing that Sango (well, mostly Miroku) seem to have figured out that Inuyasha and Kagome may know eachother from the club before they figured it out... only question: Why wouldn't Inuyasha have figured out that she's Titania by her scent? (Especially with the physical closeness they've had lately)
    I can't wait to read more! Update soon!

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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on February 24, 2007
    Forgive me for getting personal here but its 3am and Ive had a drink or 2 so I'm just gonna say it. InuYasha reminds me of my ex-boyfreind, his voice and use of colorful vocabulary are almost identical as well, although visually he probably looked more like Naraku... Come to think of it, our relationship was similiar to he and Kagome's-- tense, shaky, unclear, volatile, prone to violent outbursts(where were those beads when I needed 'em eh?)--and much like my ex was about me-- even if Inuyasha didn't want Kagome he's ready to rip Kouga's throat out for even looking at her! That said, this chapter is almost like a page out of my life and I had to read it three times over cause it's just that good. You really have a grasp on the characters, and you make them so real even in an AU setting. Yeah, this brought back a few memories for me that made me smile!

    GREAT JOB!! Update soon :) Can hardly wait to see the frisky hanyou in action! I wanna see what he does with that whip in his backpack.......
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  • From kookookitty on February 24, 2007
    great story!

    i am curious however that inuyasha hadn't smelt kagome on his clothing or furnature when she stayed over after they got drunk together... he couldn't have worn the inhibiter all of the time, even in his room if he locked the door he could take it off... i would do that if my sense of smell was like a second sight and i liked someone, it would allow me to get to know them better and would help ingrain them into memory.

    thank you,
    ginny
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