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Reviews for Shades of Gray

By : fallenangel7583
  • From cukid9 on November 07, 2006
    I'm pretty sure that I haven't reviewed this since I read the first chapter. Unfortunately, after reading the last three or so, I've completely forgotten specifically what I wanted to say *sigh* I guess I'll just generalize...

    I love your dialogue, especially between Inuyasha and Kagome, but the exchange of insults between Miroku and Kikyou are really funny too.

    I really like, too, these multi-faceted characters you are building and intertwinging with each other. The only one I have complaints about is Miroku, who seems to be a little flat when compared to the rest. But, as I always do, I won't make any real descisions about him until you write more -I always trust that the author knows what he/she is doing. I like how everyone has a past, everyone has problems that they hide behind a sarcastically smiling facade.

    I love the interactions between Inuyasha and Kagome's alter egos at the club. Those scenes are the ones that truly make me crave more of this story.

    Hmmm...I can't remember anything else that I wanted to say. Oh, I REALLY liked the end of the last chapter where Rin pretty much tells Inuyasha about himself and Inu sucks on Kags finger...that was GREAT ^_^

    Can't wait for the next installment -I'm bookmarking your author page so I don't miss it again!
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  • From ANON - TapTheMemoryBank on November 02, 2006
    Another great chapter! The future for those two is looking sexier every day! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
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  • From ANON - kerya on November 01, 2006
    WOW. the move inuyasha just made was...like wow. ive got to see what happens next! i want to know what happens when they finally find out that they know eachother...form the club!! please update as soon as you can!!!
    -kerya ^_^
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  • From ANON - TapTheMemoryBank on October 25, 2006
    WONDERFUL!!! Your story is well thought out and brillant!! Please continue as soon as possible! This story is mysterious, romantic, classy, and just overall GENIOUS! All I can say is great job and this is a story i'll be checking back to read everytime i'm on. Thanks for writing something so beautiful.
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  • From ANON - chanda on October 19, 2006
    Again, another great chapter. I wonder who Oberon is? I thought for sure it was Sesshomaru aslo...and it's definelty not Naraku. Hmmm...whoever he is...what an asshole. *Clapping hands* I'm glad you're back...you have such talent with the way you write.

    Until your next update,
    Chanda
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  • From ANON - celest on October 19, 2006
    Continue. Is Inuyasha ever gonna get his wish to do Kagome? Is he gonna get rid of Kinky-hoe? Hope so. Love the story so far. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - chanda on October 12, 2006
    I'm glad you're writing again. I just loved this chapter. Update soon.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - chanda on October 07, 2006
    Hello, it's been a while. I loved the first chapter...very hot!! I hope you update this story soon. It's been really good. I look forward to the chapter where they find out their duel personalities. The Shakesperian, twist was nice also.

    Look forward to your update,
    Chanda
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  • From InuGrrrl on October 01, 2006
    I have much fun with your fics -you know this! ^_^
    I had to come up in here and review, even though I
    made my mark at the other site. You're one of my
    faves (and trust me, the list is small) because you
    create excellent scenarios and dialogue. Brilliant,
    Ms. Dragon! *applauds*
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  • From ANON - Celest on September 27, 2006
    I like it so far. It's a good story. I really, really don't like kikyo, but it is your story and I'm loving it so far. Please continue soon, or I'll cry.
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  • From ANON - Ari on September 27, 2006
    You. Win. The internet. Please continue.
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  • From on July 18, 2006
    that wuz wonderful. I like it. Are you gonna continue updating, or are u finish for good?? It would be nice if you continue ^.^
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  • From ANON - cu_kid on February 09, 2006
    I looove a Kagome that is sexy and full of spunk and has that "I don't give a damn" attitude while still being submissive. Good start...veerry hot! I was reading this at work and I think my mouth was hanging open while I was reading it *laughs* As always, you do a phenominal job at creating a dark air about everything. You are definitely one of the best writers on this site and I'm so happy that you've started, not one new story, but two.

    Can't wait for the update! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kid ^_^ on January 30, 2006
    The thing is, I don’t really like the typical "girl goes to get away from it and whores herself out" scenario. I still think you did a good job. This could be because I am quite a tolerant person... Oh, and the dirty talk between Kagome and "Sha" was pretty funny, I thought. Like it wasn't meant to be funny, but to the person reading it, it is. Probably because it sounds strange. Anyways...
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  • From ANON - Kid ^_^ on January 30, 2006
    This is fantastic! I am entralled by this story. I adore how you've twisted Shakespeare in there. You've actually got me reading some Shakespeare now (It's about time I started. I think I've been putting it off.). :) Seriously, I am so moved by just this One chapter. God help me when you start posting more.

    There was One line that made me guess who "Oberon" might be. "His eyes dug into her and for a moment, she was sure she was drowning in a Caribbean sea." I thought at first that it might be Miroku, and then Kouga came to mind. I think I thought of Kouga as well when "Sha" was chased away from Kagome by "Oberon". I Could see it being Naraku, but I have a feeling that it is not.

    I love where you are going with this story. It's so magnificently breathtaking. I actually like how Kagome dresses too. It just fits. I love how she is incorperated into this world, and I think "Oberon" is simply fascinating. Oh, the Shakespeare! :) I adore it all. Every last bit. These are the stories I write dedicated reviews for. Please, don't plan on stopping now.

    Until my next review...
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