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By : fallenangel7583

From debEdoo on January 20, 2008
I joined adultfanfiction.net just so that I could leave a review for this story. From the first sentence, you had me. I've read this story, from front to back, several times. I fall more and more in love with it every time. I wanted to say that you are an amazing writer and I look forward to reading more of this story, hint, cough, hint!

Thanks!
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From oneswish on January 12, 2008
SCORE!!!!

this one is great.. well in an another chapter and wow!! miroku in leather pants.. do u think he has the butt for that?? so far the plans seems to becoming together.. but the real question is.. are they gonna get tangled up and kinda knotty?? plus a lack of communication.. is kagome gonna atleast tell yash not to worry.. i mean it seems weird that she would stop all contact. and is her face 200% healed.. no more nasty-ness.. and since bank kinda back handed her does she sport that love shade of bluish green bean muck??

yay!! im glad that u made another one.. this is the reason for inukag.. for me to look this and one other one. yea.. i have no life.
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From jin1 on January 09, 2008
lol WOW THIS IS LIK ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ.I REALLY REALLY CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER. UPDATE SOOn!
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From weyrdkat on January 06, 2008
*sits up in her seat and puts down the cookie dough* Ahem. . . Closer and closer. . .and you updated again without telling me. . .WAHH!! :) Anyway, I'd drink and celebrate/mourn Miro's passing with them anyday. You've got a great characterization there. And as we get closer to the end, things get even more complex for everyone, even if you're explaining more. . .it's beautiful. Poor Kik. . .oh well. . .at least she's openning up and not being such a conceited bitch. . . kinda feel sorry for her. . .Congrazzles, I can't wait for the next chappy!! Hurry hurry. . . *Picks up her tube and flips back to the beginning*
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From chanda on December 25, 2007
Chapter 27. I like the plan that Inuyasha came up with...I can just imagine Miroku dressed in drag...lol! Loved the chapter, and I'm looking forward to your next couple of updates. Maybe Kagome should take her own advice and own up to her affair with Kikyou, since she suggested her cousin to fess up about the pictures. Sorry, if that didn't make sense, I'm tired and done playing Santa Claus. Well I hope you have a wonderful holiday! And thank you for the double update, it was a great read. I hope you win...good luck!

Until next time,
Chanda
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From chanda on December 25, 2007
Merry Christmas!

I'm terribly sorry I missed a couple of chapters, my computer died. Well anyway lets get on with the review. Chapter 26. I agreed with Sango and her fustration with Kagome, I probably would have done the same thing if my friend was keeping to many secrets. And Inu was listening...to bad he didn't stay long enough and find out that Kikyou now knows his and Kagome's secretive tryst! I can only imagine that the nasty blackmailer is Naraku? Interesting....

Well off to find out what happens next. Until next time,
Chanda

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From Yashalove on December 21, 2007
Short or long your chapters are always great!!! I always look forward to the updates!! Kikyo really didn't do much to keep Kagome there at the dorm like Yasha asked her too, did she?? You really have me baffled as to who Kikyo's blackmailer is. The only thing I can come up with is maybe Kouga or maybe Kikyo is just saying it isn't Naraku to throw off Kagome. I got a mental picture of the Roku would look in the getup Yasha done up for him and I thought I was going to fall over laughing!! With Roku's face it is hard to imagine him looking like that without laughing!! Will be looking for the next chapter!! Can't Wait!!! Take Care!!
Your Friend--
Yashalove
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From Lunar84 on December 20, 2007
AMAZINGLY WRITTEN! I honestly thought COTD would be the best work I'd read- I was wrong. I literally spent the day reading this fic and I must say it was absolutely wonderful. It's kind of odd but, it seems that the best inu/kag stories are A/U. You really do have such an amazing gift for telling even more amazing stories. I could sit here and gush all night about how good you are and all that jazz- but I don't want to seem like a kiss ass. So just know that you are one of the best authors I have had the privilege of coming across.

Now I know that since it is the Holiday Season that an update if probably going to be hard. Just know that your fans are looking forward to seeing more of your great work! Please update when time permits.
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From cukid9 on December 20, 2007
HA! I KNEW Souta was Kagome's! Well, I mean, I didn't KNOW, but you know what I mean. I think I might have actually almost cried in chapter 26...sheesh. At first, I thought Sango was being a little harsh, pushing too much. But I think that Kags really needed to tell someone what had happened to her (and, as the reader, it was nice to get some clarification...although, you allude to other things that were bad, so I wonder if those will be explained. NOT that I really need any more angst, because Lord knows Kags has been through enough!).

*snickers* I love Miroku's opening line in 27! Actually, I love that whole dialogue between him and Inu on the train...okay, okay, I'll just admit it: I LOVE Miroku in this story >_< He's usually only of minor interest to me when other people write him, but every time he shows up here, I find myself smiling and laughing. He brings the right amount of relief to an otherwise stressful story (thank you!).

And who is this mysterious man that is blackmailing Kikyo? Should I already know? Am I being dense? (Don't tell me!) I'll just wait and see. Oh, and YEA! She's thinking about breaking up with Inu...that will make things easier...right? RIGHT?

Hmm...what else...*glances at notes* >_< So...the final showdown is coming up, hm? The way Kagome is covering all of her bases in case something happens is making ME nervous! I can't wait to see her reaction when she finds out that Inu is Sha. She finds out, right? ARG! All of these questions that are driving me nuts...I love it!
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From darkmind on December 18, 2007
oh shit.. you are killing me!!!.. i'm desperate to read what happens in the club.... i want to know what part in the history inuyasha's brother (not sesshomaru) will play...

it's pointless to ask you to update soon... but i'll ask you to not stop because of x-mas...

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From weyrdkat on December 02, 2007
W,

Shame Shame girl. . .there you are in my friends list, and you didn't even tell me you had updated. . .tsk tsk. . .anyway. . .

Yummy yummy Inu demons. . .and looks of love. . .and pummelling. . .oh it's genius! I really like how you had Inu finally put it all together. . .and Kags and Bank know jack squat. . .oh for all his knowledge he's an idiot. . .but my Jaks. . . he can't be hurt. . .nope, uh uh. . .you can't hurt Jaks. Um. . .la di da. . .ooo. . and Kik being into the pics too. . .hmm. . .must run in the family. And a glimse of 'Jiro and more misconceptions and wrong identies. . .I would have been willing to swear that Inu knew Oberon and Bank as the same person befor this. . .I mean, I know Bank had know clue, but with their families being rivals and all. . .I guess that Inu really does stay away from business affairs and all that rot. Inu's a lot harder to place in the two places with the transformation and what not, but I guess Bank and Kags could only know so much at a time. . .while Inu pieces all the puzzle together. . .well except the whole 'oops wrong brother' scandal, which is still infinitely funny and will be hilarious once it's all laid out. . .I can't wait!!

Oh, and DAMN I knew it was Kag's kid. . . I just had this hunch! And bam! there it is. . .wow!

BTW, check your to and toos. . .I think you have a few confused, but that's just a majorly minor thing. . .in order to make it PERFECT!

Hope you feel better!!

H
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From evasal on November 11, 2007
ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

inu's older brother sounds sooo hot.... lol!

but it's going down soon! if inuyasha distracts kagome bank will only hurt her even more, won't he? and who is blackmailing kikyou!? (i still don't like her very much... lol)

it would be way cool if kagome is able to kick bank's ass... hahah
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From Yashalove on November 10, 2007
WOW!! These last two chapters were awesome and very informative!! I had gone on a little vacation back home to see my family and when I got back you had updated the two chapters. I was so happy to see them!! I hope your moving went smoothly!! This chapter really cleared up alot questions. Dang the lightbulb finally went on in Yasha's head, about time he started thinking!! LOL!!! Wonder how long it will take Kagome to put it together!! LOL!!! Kagome sure has been going through some crap in her life, huh!! I was really shocked to find out about the kid. I always thought that there had to be more to the Kikyo storyline than just her messing around. I knew it, I knew it!! Jiro is awesome!! Just that little bit with him and Yasha talking, I could tell he is gonna be a great addition to this story!! This story just gets better and better!! I was so happy to read about Yasha beating the crap out of Bank too bad he didn't get to finish it. Yasha thinks that Jiro is Rin's son's daddy but isn't it Sesshie or am I remembering that wrong? Well I will be looking for the update as soon as you can get it out!! I know it will be worth the wait!! Take Care!!!
Your Friend--
Yashalove
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From sweetkijo on November 08, 2007
Oh boy!! I smell trouble. You know, I am not really surprised that Kikyou will have a huge part in the ending. Of all the stories I have read about her, this one doesnt portray her as the beast that most stories do. Now there is room for her nasty ways to come out, but I dont quite have her figured out yet. Is it possible she will go to her father?? And what was with Naraku stating that "He already knows" Does that mean he left something for Inuyasha to find out?? Naraku is the same ol bastard he always is. Bank is also very dark, but why do I find him so captivating and so appealing...gahh I think I might be a little on the looney side. Yikes!! Ok, I am more than curious as to what is going on also between Sess and Rin. And will Sess get involved with what is happening between Inu and his father?? What is in that package??? Oh, and Kags made video's with Bank?? Damn, that is crazy.....is Bank the child's father??? Alright alright, I am gonna quit while I am ahead....lol. Thank you for the update, it is always a special blessing when you do that. Hugz!!
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From oneswish on November 08, 2007
YAY!!

this one is gettin soo much more with the plot.. wow!! man.. hurry hurry hurry.. i'm an impatient person.. but this chapterwas too cool.. really makes you think about every character that you started to make and paint different colors..

sorry i kinda figured the whole kagome and souta thing when u descibed them in like the beginning when she took him to the park.. i dunno.. maybe im just really really weird but i kinda had my suspicions.. but all the other stuff just awesome..

who can the mystery man be?? hmm.. and the envelope.. did kagome steal stuff from bank when he wasnt lookin?? hide some secret hidden camera?? im soo confused.. and yet.. i crave more like an addict..

this is by far the awesome-est read of my day.. every thing else.. crap..

you, my dear, seriously rock the whole house DOWN!!

dont ever stop writing or i will wither away and diieeeeeee....................

k, im done.
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