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By : fallenangel7583

From SultryRayn on June 11, 2007
Absolutley fantastic... I just cant help but eat it up... I love your stories.... so amazing... just wow... so much is going on... and if I were kagome i would have ripped out kikyos throat by now... and told her that he doesnt love her and then there would be this big ass fight and what not... but damn I wish kikyo would just quit with the lying and go die somewhere and not come back
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From AmaranthaRaven on June 10, 2007
Great story. It's taken me a few days to read it all thanks to work and stuff, but I really liked it. And I've got an suspicion of who the guy Kagome dated in Japan might be. Maybe. Either that or my brain's gone completly left field on that one. But yeah. I'm looking forward to the next update.

And the little trivia/quotes you throw in are fantastic. The Hitchhiker's one cracked me up.
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From LadyTsunadeSama on June 09, 2007
Yet another wonderful chapter. Gods I love Miroku he's such a clown *huggles him* It was most certainly worth the wait!
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From Yashalove on June 08, 2007
Hot Damn!!! Great chapter!! Maybe now they will start to open up to each other more as time goes on. Dang Sesshie actually trying to help out Yasha a little bit and Yasha being Yasha had to go and open his mouth. LOL!!! Maybe sometime Yasha just needs to shutup and listen but I guess that will be the day!! LOL!! That was too funny, Miroku's jumping up and down and singing about Yasha's predicament!! LMAO!!! Priceless!! I guess it would be too easy to have Kikyo take Kagome's advice and break up with Yasha. LOL!!! Just a shame that they let their Daddys hang the all mighty dollar over their head. I have been trying to figure out just who Kikyo's love interest really is. Is there a reason to keeping him secret cause it has me really thinking?? Could it be that maybe I have missed who it is in other chapters?? Cause that is not unusual for me to overlook something. LOL!! If not can I have a little hint?? PLEASE!!! LOL!!! Will be looking out for the next update!! Hope your writers block don't come back!! Take Care!!
Your Friend--
Yashalove
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From weyrdkat on May 28, 2007
Hey Wends! Sorry it's taken so long for me to get back to you. . .but everything has been hecticly crazy. Well, you already knew that the first part was awesome. . .but that citrusy lemon was absolutely delic! Made me all tingly. . .I can't wait to see how this will muck up Kagome even looking at Inu around ANYONE for umm . . .forever. And, well, vice versa. Drop me a message if you need any help on the next part!
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From SultryRayn on May 27, 2007
*Dun dun dun* Guess who's back? Wow I havent been on in a while to busy with making time with friends and my girlfriend to read this.... but hot damn you have made this into an even better story... so what is going to happen next... who is Kikiyo secretly dating... cause we all know that it was coming and when will Sango and Miroku get together... and of course when will justice be serverd? Just wow great job as always Yeah Kagome and Inuyasha finally... anyways praise you for your allmighty writing styles and imagination keep up the good work
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From wicketjax on May 23, 2007
i loved the chapter! about damn time! haha. god i hope no one finds them, or if someone does it's kikyo and not oberon! gah! write more please! this rocks the casbah!
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From cukid9 on May 22, 2007
It's been awhile since I've read/reviewed this, so this could end up being rather lengthy and may jump around a lot since I can't organize my thoughts after reading so much. Just a warning ^_^

I like Sesshomaru in this story, so far. He's still an asshole, still coldly serene, but with just enough hint of life that his character is intriguing and amusing. I especially loved the line: "No, [I served her] fucking breakfast in bed." That one sentence made me love him.

The misunderstanding between Rin and Inuyasha about who Kenren's father is amusing...and a little scary. I don't ever make predictions about what's going to happen in stories, so all I have to say is I can't wait to see where you take that.

I still can't decide whether or not to like Kikyo or not. You portray her as a bitch one minute and a caring cousin the next -and, honestly, I can't tell if the affection is real or not. Nice work with that one.

At heart, I'm a true Sango fan and mostly just kind of eh about Rin in most stories. However, so far, I'm not really that thrilled with Sango. As a friend, I really like Rin more. She's pushy in a concerned way, where Sango comes off as over-bearingly protective.

And, oh my god, my heart was in my throat during the last part of chapter 22. I kept glancing down at the bottom of the screen, skipping ahead because I was SURE that Kikyo was going to walk in on them. You can't even imagine my relief when that didn't happen. Also, I'm so glad that you gave Kagome (and Inuyasha, even) a kind of break. I still stand by my previous statement about this story being like a train-wreck that you can't look away from. It's absolutely fascinating; in all of it's suspenseful, twisted, sick glory (and I mean that in the nicest way possible ^_^).

What to say that hasn't already been said? I think I've been holding my breath while reading the last five chapters, watching the figurative thunderheads gather for the oncoming storm. I read in one of your A/N's that you like happy endings, but, truth be told, I wouldn't be surprised if someone ends up dead at the end of all this (I mean, besides Bankotsu).

As always, great work with these past chapters! I'm hooked once again.

~cu-kid
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From shin906 on May 19, 2007
This story is great and the last chap was hot.It's not often that i review so keep up the good work angel.
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From chanda on May 15, 2007
Yeah! an update! Loved the chapter, and you're right it did explain alot of the reason's why Inuyasha is the way he is... I be that way too... if I had a family like his... thank goodness that he turned out okay... unlike his brother, and (I'm not talking about Sesshomaru).

Kikyou, of course she lied again... she can't help it and sounds compulsive...lol. Look forward to the chapter when that bitch finally falls on her ass. I can't believe it was her... that prikoutsu was seeing. She's such a ho!--lol. Maybe that will happen when she walks in on the two of them on her bed...can we say "ouch!" Lmao!

Great chapter as always and of course, looking forward to the next!

Until next time,
Chanda
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From Yashalove on May 15, 2007
Muwahahah!!! So the plot thickens!! Did I read that wrong or does Yash think that Rin is talking about Jiro being Kenren's father instead of Sessh? If I did it just figures that Yash would get it wrong!! LMAO!! Don't get me wrong I don't think Yash is stupid persay, I just think he doesn't use his brain very much!! LMAO!! Can't wait to see Jiro sounds like he is the real bad ass of the family. I did get a little confused there though, does Jiro and Daddy not get along and did he have a set up marriage like the other two and didn't go through with it? Is that why he got the cut on his eye from dear ole Dad? Man, what a turn around for Miss Kikyo, huh!! Being all concerned and actually nice for once. Well I guess even the snobby ones have a heart when it comes to family,huh!! LOL!! But she did still lie so she is hiding something. I have been racking my brains about what Kikyo is up too and she is just hard to figure out. I know she is cheating but with who!! Got to give some hints as to what is up with Kikyo!! LOL!! Maybe I have missed something or just don't remember something that is important where she is concerned!! HMMMM!!! I hope she don't come back with them asleep in her bed no less!! Shit will definately hit the fan then!! LMAO!! Dang girl, I don't know how you do it but it is getting better and better!! Can't wait for the next update!! I hope I ain't boring you with my long reviews but I just have so much to say!! LMAO!!
Your Friend--
Yashalove
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From sweetkijo on May 14, 2007
Fan-fuckin-tastic...This shit rocked the house...The best Mothers day gift ever!!!! Whoot, the lemon was so flippin good. I dont know if it was the pent up sexual tension or what..but holy hell...I think I came with them. lol. But I can just feel how bad this is gonna get..lordy. Thank you so much for updating girl. You totally made my day!
Neddi
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From LadyTsunadeSama on May 14, 2007
*twicth and dies* Holy Hell that was the most graphic and the hottest thing I think I have read in a long long time. And yes Inuyasha, you just fucked Kagome (lucky bitch).... BRAVO and please please more soon!
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From wicketjax on May 08, 2007
just to let you know, this is probably one of the best inufanfics i've ever read. i bow before you oh amazing, powerful, fantastic, kickass times a billion and three writer of fantastic extent! if i could kiss the ground you walk on, i probably would. basically, my emotions are all twisted with the story, i read half of it yesterday and was totally distracted by it all day today so i had to finish the chapters (fuck yeah kag and inu! you go you sexy dogs! ow ow!) and oberon should die. painfully. and slowly. and i really want kikyo to go...like...find someone else. but that's not looking too good is it? no matter what she'll be hurt. and even if she is a fairly shallow stuck up snob, shallow stuck up snobs have feelings too. maybe she'll hook up with like... muso... or something. random, i know i know. but i always hate leaving someone without a lover. a romantic? mua? anyway... you rule. i love this story. super addicted! and i want more. pleeeeeease? pretty pretty pretty please with lots of sugar and icecream and cherries and big ol' puppy dog eyes? (try 'em before ya knock 'em. they're good with fudge). you rule. want more. i bow before your greatness.
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From weyrdkat on May 03, 2007
Sorry it's taken me so long to review. . .work has been friking crazy. This chapter does help to explain a lot of questions from the last chapter involving Rin and Miro, props for that. Jiro sounds like a lot of fun, just be careful not to let him fall into the uber-mensch catergory and make him too invincible to be plausible. Sessh has always been a fount of info, but how much would he be feasible to share with a secritary and mistress? You were questioning your entrance of Jiro. . .have you thought of a desperation call by the Ice King himself cause of problems with Daddy-dearest? Also, I liked the human-ness of Kik in this past chapter, but I wonder if it was too much to balance her attitude in earlier ones. . .falling apart seems drastic unless she thinks her money might be slipping out of her fingers along with Inu's attention. Just a thought. I'll message you when I get a chance if you want to talk more.
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