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Reviews for Shades of Gray

By : fallenangel7583

From Yashalove on March 29, 2007
Thanks for sending me back to chapter 7 for a refresher course on my memory!! Sometimes I think my memory goes into a lapse or something and I forget what I have already read. LOL!! Thank you for the encouraging words for a writing talent maybe sometime I will try my hand at writing something. I really enjoy reading your story it is one of the best I have read and it just seems to get better with every update!! I am actually very proud of Yasha for taking Miroku's advice and talking to Sesshie!! I ain't very often you see him doing that unless it is for Kagome!! Update as soon as you can, I will be waiting!! By the way I can't draw either!! LOL!!!
Your Friend--
Yashalove
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From chanda on March 29, 2007
Loved it...no that wasn't what I expected...lol. Have to love the occ-ness. Can't wait for another chapter.

Until next time,
Chanda
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From LadyTsunadeSama on March 29, 2007
ahh yes.... wow Sesshy had some fairly good come back here. Clothes or large amounts of ilegal substances? hahahahaha that was classic-- next time someone asks me what in my purse....

Great story and please update soon!!
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From katome on March 27, 2007
Girl, you are killing me here!!!! I was wondering when Sesshomaru would make his appearence, Perfect timing. Oh my god, will Kagome and InuYasha ever figure out who they really are!! Don't keep us all waiting too long for the next update, K? This story rocks!
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From Yashalove on March 22, 2007
Another great chapter!! The plot thickens with Rins child. I thought when you first mentioned Rins kid that there would be something more to that. It makes me wonder even more why Rin didn't tell Sesshie that he has a child. This story just keeps you on the edge of seat wondering what will happen next. Poor Yash just keeps getting blamed for what happened to Kagome. Can't wait for the next chapter!! I have to tell you that you are doing an execellent job on this story and I wish I had just a little bit of your talent.
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From SultryRayn on March 22, 2007
*DUN DUN DUN* So the plot thickens... and Daddy comes to visit... What does he have to say? Is Inuyasha going to get his butt kicked because he knows whats going on? hmmmm so many questions so little time... Totally enjoying this I wait for you to update all of the time and here you have so... Whoowho... OMGodzilla the morning after was definently akward well I mean why wouldnt it be... kagome just slept with her cousin Kikyo's boy toy and after what happened it may have been to soon... but if you ask me Kikyo should just disappear and never come back is she were real I would poke out her eyes and make her eat them... i mean... what!?... ummm so yeah keep up the fantastic work...*grabs hand and places a kiss on your palm* Until we meet again Dearest...
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From chanda on March 22, 2007
Well...you did it again another great chapter. I loved the awkwardness between the two. It was very realistic like always.lol. Oh, no Inuyasha just found out he's an uncle and what luck...Dear brother came for a visit.

Well until next time,
Chanda
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From weyrdkat on March 22, 2007
*does a little happy dance before returning to her poptarts* Yay! *stops chewing and looks up. . .* Want one? Hehe. . .I really liked the title to this chapter. There are moments when you are just so worried about the last thing you've done or said that the only thing you can think of to break the awkward silence is even more awkward. I really felt that when you put them together on the way to school. . .and the sxplosions. . .masterful. He knows he's on edge. . .hell, the whole world knows it, and yet he still can't suppress his reactions. A very good character definition. I had the feeling it would be Sessh paying a visit and not his father. . .seemed too out there for his father yet. . .but ironic twists are wonderful. (well, at least "speak of the devil." :) I really liked your summation of Miro as well. . .It is often easier to create your own persona rather than hope others get somewhere close.
Surprises are good. . .very good. Soon as needed, no rushing natural flow. Awww. .. who would ever not want to read about the HAWTness of another Inudemon? Of well. . .maybe this fic isn't right for him to come barging in on. . .I think it would offset the balance a little much. Specially since you've worked up Naraku as a decent guy so far. Oh, and with the bad days happening recently, I'm uber-looking forward to that FIELD DAY. I'm sure it will be yummy and a half. Cheers!
Ja ne,
Weyrd Kat
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From LadyTsunadeSama on March 22, 2007
Mmmm Im still laughing at Mirouku. "I dont swing that way unless Im sloshed." PRICLESS!!

I love it. Please please keep it up! Ill send you an email soon myself!
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From aphroditiewicca on March 20, 2007
Hi,
WONDERFULL story. Ive been reading it for the past month, but now I'm anxious.... Whens the nest chapter comming up? Please, please, please, tell me the answer is soon! Keep on writing!
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From Darkstarr on March 13, 2007
Wow I LOVED this chapter, in fact i love where the whole story is going. But i MUST point something out (Not bad x]). Have you ever heard of a band called Waking Ashland? Well it turns out they have a song called "Shades Of Grey" I was wondering if you ever heard of them? I'm not quite sure if it fits the story, I'll leave that for you to decide http://youtube.com/watch?v=AjwMlmvq-_o It's not quite the full song but you'll get the main idea. Well ANYHOO, great chapter, great story.. you've got me hooked and you'll be glad to know you're top on my favroites. :]

Sincerely Yours,
Addicted Reader
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From sweetkijo on March 10, 2007
First and formost...let me thank you for the extra long chapter. Sometimes even if it takes a little bit longer for an update...it is better to read a long chapter than to read two or three small ones. Why you ask? It is because I hate being in the middle of something so deep and so steamy only to have an author say....until next time. I find myself engulfed in stories, especially ones by you. You are very talented and this lil lemon was very hawt. Now these two at the moment are telling themselves that this was it..no more fluff...but really..the sexual want and desires these two are sharing is so intense....how are they gonna make it? Hmmm..I shall be waiting to see..Oh and just when is our smart houshi gonna spill his theory to the hanyou? Or will Kags finally admit to what happened to Yash? So much drama....thanks for the update. Take care until next time!
Neddi
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From shatterwing on March 08, 2007
::giggles excitedly::
Yay! Finally!
Bankotsu must be really pissed at this point... wouldn't know where to find his pet. For some reason I have a feeling he's gonna show up sometime soon. And What's Kikyo gonna have to say about Kagome staying with Inuyasha.

OH! btw, Is there gonna be an side story for Rin and her baby?
can't wait for the new chapter.

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From SultryRayn on March 08, 2007
I dont know I think I may be coming over to the dark side... I have never been a fan of the bdsm or anthing in that nature... but I am starting to think it is pretty hot... maybe I dont know it just doesnt sound as dirty when you write about it if that makes sense.... so no I wasnt disgusted and I am so happy that they finally got together and FYI I think Sango is a total bitch but thats ok because if this were real time she probrably would be a feminist lesbian... lol... anyways I am so glad that you updated great chapter and for some odd reason I felt the need to cry.... i dont know why I have just been super emotional over everything lately things I read movies, music blah blah blah now I am rambling...but yeah this chapter was totally SExy... sometihng I havent seen in a long time keep up the good work. *REVIEW from YOUR FRIENDLY NEIGHBOORHOOD SPIDER WOMAN*
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From weyrdkat on March 07, 2007
Hey! I know how bad it is when your stuff gets deleted, thanks for rewriting some comments. I usually end up on the same wavelength with a lot of the writers I read. . .maybe it's because I understand that the characters take up a life of their own and can't really be forced to do anything that's not part of their character. I understand why Inu doesn't see it, and I also understand that it has to be getting harder to make it seem feasible. Although I'll buy the fact that he's a little (okay maybe a lot) out of it and in his own issues. :)

Well, we all know who Rin's kid is for, so it's not fair to say a character from COTD will make an appearance when he's that obvious, so I figured it's him or the Panthers. . . and since they haven't shown on campus yet... i can't wait to read your original one. It sounds like you could do a lot with it. . .My Inu story will soon get a facelift and become a wholey original instead of a fan fic and see what I can do with it.

Calling to Sha would just put the cap on the fact that she's so enamoured of him and would open up a whole world of fun for Inu to mess with her. That wavelength just floats the same way, huh? Okay, well. Another great chapter, and a very very sweet lemon. . .lots of sugar and some ice cold realizations (lemonade anyone?) I do like the fact that she realizes how well she was 'trained' and that he can read her reaction as well. . . very skillfully done. Okay, I'll shut up now. *MWAH*
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