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Reviews for Pleasures of Business

By : ShellBabe
  • From Inuyashalover on August 01, 2019

    Please continue it's an awesome story can't wait to see what's wrong with Kagome and to see what Inuyasha has up his sleeve with the package and laptop thing Plus dying to see who's the one that called Kagome on the phone in her apartment


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  • From ANON - Shellnet on January 27, 2017

    Good story but abandoned to bad  


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  • From arizonasiren on April 21, 2007
    I really got into your story.. I just have to know what Inuyasha is up to with his lap top and package....
    and Kagome with that phone call. I truly hope you start updating again. It would be ashame not to finish..
    I know a little thing called life does tend to get in the way... I'll keep checking back.
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on December 21, 2006
    Ohhhh, that was pure evil right there!! Update soon cause I can't wait to find out whats wrong with Kagome not to mention I want to know who that guy was that called her. PLEASE HURRY!!!!
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  • From ANON - ...!!!...!!!... on November 26, 2006
    cmon please update i love reading this story its my fave
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  • From ANON - Ari-chan on November 18, 2006
    i really like reading this fan fic and i hope you keep updating i love it. and i hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - CherrryFlavored on October 08, 2006
    Alright, so all I did was actually skim your story, the summary looked good, but when I got through the first paragraph I was not happy. I can see that you can write well, but you do not do it correctly! There are rules to writing and the simplest of them you have abused!
    When you are writing dialogue, you do not use a '. You use quotations! Like this:
    "Hey Sango!" she waved.
    Then, you skip a line because you always start a new line when ending paragraphs, and dialogue is considered a paragraph.
    I was taught this rule in 6th grade, the latest grade to be learning this would be in 7th or maybe even 8th, but that's the farthest it goes. You obviously have not finished school, and are not capable of writing a sex story, and are not even at the age to write one! If you want to read about sex so much, then read them and let the real writer's write! Sex is good, yes. But not for children!
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  • From ANON - XXX on September 15, 2006
    You should make sure and start a new paragraph each time a new person speaks. It makes the story easier to read.
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  • From ANON - chi chi on September 13, 2006
    I know this story it is similar to one that i read on Sesshomaru and rin from Chibexplosion
    but it is still good though
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  • From ANON - BastardOmega on September 13, 2006
    YESSS. u finaly updated, I was thinking that you were never going to. thank u. I loved the 3 chapters and I will be looking for your updates.

    Peace & Love BastardOmega
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  • From ANON - bastardomega on July 31, 2006
    more, want more, pleezzz update this shit is intressting

    peace & love bastardomega
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  • From ANON - Silver Hanyou on April 20, 2006
    hey ur story is great!!! u make inu and kag such a cute cupple!! it's really awesome and i love the story!! it only makes me miss my gf more, me and her are like inu/kag ^_^ we'll have 2 talk sometime if u've got aim msn or yahoo my sn is mooseman0460 ^_^ hotmail.com for msn. anyways keep up the great story i'm looking forward 2 the next chapter probably more than u r :P
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  • From ANON - jasmine on April 19, 2006
    I love this story. what is next
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  • From xxPuppyEarsxx on April 08, 2006
    This is so great! The warm and fuzzy feelings leave me feeling are squishy inside! I like how the females can change their appearance, thats a new little twist that i havent read before. Well, there isnt much to say except great job, keep writing, and i cant wait for your update! I'll be checking frequently ^_^!
    - rin.dee
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