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Reviews for Moonlight Whispers

By : northstar
  • From ANON - fvsf on February 03, 2016
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  • From peppysmama on August 09, 2008
    YUMMY!
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  • From midnightsweet on August 06, 2007
    your lemons are great. they can get anyone all hot and wanting them selfs. looking forward to the morning after.
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  • From ANON - tm on April 14, 2007
    the vs 1 was better!
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  • From ANON - Ndvdual3 on February 10, 2007
    I actually created a LiveJournal just so I could continually tell you how much your writing ROCKS!!!!! Some people have no business putting a pen to paper and creating stories but you could do it for a living! Complete and utter props your way! I know you only seem to do Sess/Rin stories but if you ever got bored out of your mind do ya think you could try a Sess/Kikyo story? I always wanted to see one and I can't seem to find one anywhere and if anyone could actually write one worth reading it would be you!!!!! Signed, Your new stalker lol
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  • From ANON - Mmoirai on January 08, 2007
    I really like the re-write! The first version was very well written, but the second is my choice. It has a darker passion that is fascinating and very arousing. Very good.
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  • From ANON - ashiya on January 01, 2007
    I have to say, I am really impressed with your writting, specially vocabulary. It's just... wow... how I wish I could write like you someday. Great story.
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  • From ANON - gss on December 28, 2006
    interesting take on their story. it's more original than most of their "interactions". very long, but a good story nonetheless.
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  • From ANON - Amazed on December 11, 2006
    THAT WAS AMAZING! I think you really got sesshomaru's character down to a T, the ending was my fav part i'm so glad you had him say he loves her! yay :)
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  • From ANON - tomoe on November 07, 2006
    You weren't kidding when you said you rewrote this, wow.

    I like both versions, but for different reasons. I did like the first because it was unyielding in its brutality and didn't go off that course. It stayed true through the beginning to end. And I liked that. Most if not all fics that start out in a similar manner start out non-conish and then up in full consent and alot into WAFF >< I can't stand that and I was glad to have finally found someone who kept it non-con but didn't go into full blown rape or go do a 180 into WAFF land. It is so rare to find well written dark rough sex, and in Sess/Rin fandom... nearly impossible.

    I enjoyed this version though, the lemon aspect of it was definitely more detailed and intense than in the previous version. Was it more IC though? My inkling is yes, although I do hold a deep love for a rough brutal Sesshomaru that doesn't back down. But even so, I am more likely to believe he would stop as soon as he realized he was in fact hurting her to the degree he was. So I think all in all, this version is more IC for Sesshomaru's character.

    I've blathered long enough. I thoroughly enjoy your writing in all 3 stories you have posted here and it made my year as soon as I read that you are considering continuing this into more lemony goodness, not to mention working on your others. You are officially my favorite Sess/Rin writer and I will shamelessly fangirl you.
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  • From ANON - Indomitable Spirit on November 01, 2006
    Holy mackerel!!! Hands down the second version is my choice! Not only it is wonderfully LUSTIER than the 1st version (which is FABULOUS as well!)...*fanning my flushed cheeks here* but the EMOTIONS, my god, the EMOTIONS are so much richer, so layered and textured and as exactly as I would envision Sesshomaru to behave. (Poor puppy! He's paradoxically torn between his lofty stature as "top dog" and yet that image is ironically and so easily humbled by a mere slip of a human girl...FANTASTIC wordsmithing !!)

    I can only bow to your greatness and patiently wait if ever the "wake-up love" session and the "waterplay" come to fruition! Fine writing, like fine wine, is worth the wait.

    You ought to submit this to Tomoe-chan's website Moonlight Flower - it's completely devote to S/R fanatics. A contest is going on and I know this will WOW them !!!

    One last thought and I DO mean to nag you - what about "RED STRINGS" !!???!!! I want you to continue this fic, PLEASE!!!!


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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on November 01, 2006
    I didn't think anything was wrong was your first version.....and, I still love it....if anyone was bad mouthing your story...Please let me know...I have a couple of friends who would be more than happy to have a talk to them....keep it up!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Merely Truth on November 01, 2006
    The ancient one is perhaps more "characters like", but I prefer the other one, more romantic...Sesshomaru with guilt !°!°! In all cases, thank you very much, I love how you wrote these stories, and I would like to read a sequel : when she awakes, how he would take care of her because she is certainly sore, and how it would be going when they return at the castle and she is known to bee the Lady of the West, mate of Sesshoumaru ! I'm very hungry for that !!!!

    A french reader,
    merci beaucoup !

    Merely Truth
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  • From ANON - Christina on October 24, 2006
    hmmmm *happy smile* loved it!!! sequel?
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  • From ANON - darkgodess64 on October 22, 2006
    Wow!!! That was Beautiful, I have aways love Sesshoumaru and Rin as a pairing.
    Sesshoumaru Sin as lovers, I have alway thought they great to together, the fanfic is just so beautfiul it shows, the lust love and desirer that they have for one another , it is a beautiful thnig, well done!!!!!!
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