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By : ArchNemesis

From ANON - LadyIvy on June 29, 2006
This chapter was so sad, but well done. I think you captured Inuyasha's feelings after learning of the loss of his children, and Sesshomaru was well-written. I'm glad he admitted his true feelings to his brother because at a time like that, Inuyasha needed to hear and know that his mate loved him and wouldn't leave him. So sad that they lost all three of their children, but there will be other times. I'm wondering--did Inuyasha's intense desire to provide heirs for his brother (and thus enable him to remain with his mate) have any bearing on the ability to have children? Or was it the mating? The teaser, as always, leaves me rather impatient for the next chapter. Great update!
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From ANON - Birdie on June 27, 2006
Wow...i've never really been one for crossovers but I really like this. I can't wait for your next update. Good luck writting with two kids. I know how hard it is( I have 3 all under 5), so close to impossible.
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From on June 24, 2006
Nice one... I like... Update again when you have the chance...
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From nika1280 on June 22, 2006
Oh, it's getting good now. Those two brothers are some horny devils (bad pun intended). I'm glad that Vergil was successfully able to get his brother's thoughts off his dream and onto more pleasurable activities. Their sex is a little, violent, but since they're devils, I guess that is to be expected.

Sango, Miroku and Kagome overhearing them was just funny. Having heard people having sex many times (one of the perils of dorm living), I can sympathize; however, I didn't find it as disgusting as they did. I laughed at it because they were mortified when they found out we heard all their business (they shouldn't have screamed like banshees if they didn't want anyone to hear).

Kagome seems to be treading on dangerous ground. I know she loves Inuyasha, but she doesn't own him. If she doesn't watch out, she'll find herself on the business end of Sesshomaru's claws, and I won't feel sorry for her. She gives Inuyasha too little credit in his ability to make decisions for himself, something that she often does in the anime. It's as if she forgets that he's lived on his own for decades before he encountered either her or Kikyo. And since she knows him so well, she should know that Sesshomaru can't force Inuyasha into anything. If they're mates, it's because both of them wanted it.

I feel sorry for Sesshomaru and Inuyasha next chapter, if that teaser means anything. It's time for the truth, and it's most likely going to crush poor Inuyasha. Anyway, great update as usual!
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From ANON - nette on June 22, 2006
luv this chapter. damn those sons of sparda luv making a mess in bed and kagome needs to get over it and leave inu/sessh and verge/dante alone before she ends up getting killed or worse. anyway i have a question that's been bugging me. will inu have another child, or will it be dante and verge? okay enough of my rambling good chapter and can't wait to read more.
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From OriginalSinner on June 19, 2006
Oh my gawd I almost peed my pants with excitement when I saw this story! Hell yeah sweetpea... you must continue! Well of course you have but I've only just read Chapter One and I'm such a very happy little hentai at the moment I just had to review. Dante and Virgil *gurgles on drool* and S-E-S-S-H-O-U-M-A-R-U in a story together *kwor!* Give me a sec while I pull myself together *picks self up off floor....* I have so wanted to do a crossover such as this, but I'm a het writer who adores yaoi but just haven't got the confidence to give it a go. So Kudo's to you sweetpea. *clapping hands together in hentai'd delight* k.... gotta go and read the next chapter now.... gotta say I'm not sure about the male pregnancy thing though, but hey, each to their own... you keep writing, I'll keep reading... I'm open to new things (especially since this is the first Devil May Cry/Inuasha crossover I've ever read.) Besides, it's not that the male pregnancy thing offends me or anything... it's just that I'm a girl with a 14 month old so the concept of a man having a baby kind of cracks me up... my partner hit the floor in a pale, twitching heap while I was giving birth, so the idea of a male going through the whole sordid, gross ordeal if indeed comical...well, for me anyways... Looking forward to see what you come up with my sinful friend.

Peace ~_^

Sinner
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From ANON - LadyIvy on June 19, 2006
I know I reviewed you on ff.net, but I had to add some comments here. First, have I told you how much I like the twins? They're funny and mean, a perfect combination. Second, I'm glad that Toga involved Inuyasha's friends in the discussion of Inuyasha's condition because, even though Kagome is not pleased with Inuyasha's choice, they need to know what happened so they will be sensitive to his feelings. Third, I can't wait until the fallout from this latest bombshell occurs. I do hope Kagome learns how to accept Inuyasha's choice and that she doesn't make things to hard for him. He's just lost children that he didn't even know he had--the last thing he needs is a misguided friend trying to "save" him from Sesshomaru. Now's not the time for that. Anyway--great chapter as always and I look forward to the next update.
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From ANON - nette on June 19, 2006
the explanation helped and the fact that kagome still can't get past that is really annoying. i wonder wat will become of the twins relationship and that of inu/sessh. update soon.
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From ANON - dead_love on June 15, 2006
This is really good i hope u update soon. By the way does Kagome get hooked up with anybody? I feel real sorry for her that she cant be with the man she loved.
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From ANON - LadyIvy on June 10, 2006
Yay! I got a special thanks. I feel special :-). Anyway, this new chapter was really hot! I loved it. Since I don't know anything about Devil May Cry (other than what I've read in this story), I didn't mind the fact that Inu and Sess weren't in it. The background information was good, and the lemon was *explosive*. I can't wait for the next chapter--seems that the explanations will start coming. I also feel sorry for Sesshomaru cause he has to tell Inuyasha that he was pregnant but miscarried. I wonder if Sess is going to beat the hell out of the devil twins...I wouldn't blame him. Great update!
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From ANON - nette on June 07, 2006
poor inu and sessh lost their pups :(, i can't wait for the next chapter to find out exactly wat roles the twins play, keep the story coming
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From ANON - LadyIvy on June 07, 2006
Wow. Oh, just wow. First off--I'm glad that you answered some of my questions (makes me feel special :-). Don't worry about the chapter lengths--I only commented on them because I love the story and I can't wait to read more :-). The scene where Sesshomaru claims Inuyasha was impressive. I'm trying to imagine them having sex in their dog forms and it makes me laugh, but somehow, you made it sensuous. Sesshomaru really must have been stressed to attack Kagome like that-- I can see him not liking her and hating the fact that she confessed her love to his mate, but to attack her in such a way suggested (to me) that he was tired, stressed and at the end of his rope. Poor Toga--he comes home thinking he's gonna rest and relax with his boys only to find his sons mated to each other with the younger pregnant then losing his children. It's enough to make anyone faint, and I thought you got Sesshomaru dead on for that one. I wonder what your explanation will be for the twins knowing what was wrong with Inuyasha--did they perhaps sire children themselves? LOL. Great update, and I look forward to reading more from you.
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From ANON - LadyIvy on June 03, 2006
Yay! You updated! This chapter was really intense--Toga's pissed (and rightly so), Sesshomaru's defiant (gotta love it), and the demon twins are crazy (are they always like this?). Oh well, Daddy Inu should know about choosing a mate for your child--it doesn't always work out the way you want it. Wonder who the Northern Lord is and if he will have any bearing on this story. It was a little too short for my liking, but that's just because I enjoy reading this story so much and the interaction between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha was so good. So, are you gonna keep teasing us with the scent of death upon Inuyasha or are you gonna tell us what is wrong with him soon? Is it a baby? Is it Inuyasha? I hope he and Sesshomaru do have a child together--so cute. Love the suspense--your pacing is pretty good as well. Eagerly anticipating your next update!
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From ANON - LadyIvy on May 26, 2006
Oooh, what a place to end it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Sesshomaru smells death on Inuyasha--is it the baby? Is it Inuyasha? I know he has a broken arm, but something else could be wrong. Does Kagome like Inuyasha in this fic? You mentioned something about her seeing the passion between them and not liking it so I was wondering if she had feelings for our favorite halfling. Good update!
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From ANON - Tryst on May 21, 2006
Yowza!!!! There's trouble... And Virgil isn't far behind. Hehehehehe...

Pants- Hakama

Shirt- I'm still working out that term myself.

The red fire rat coat- Kimono or Haori

And then there's a Yukuta...

I'm not to clear on anything else but I hope that helps...

Please update soon. I think things will be getting interseting. Wow.

Tryst
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