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By : ArchNemesis

From ANON - D/H on August 29, 2006
Both chapters, and i can't consider them to even be ONE chapter, at all!! Anyway, both
chapters are too short and nothing much happened..Kinda boring, to say the least..

Still say the pup should've been a boy, or at least, a pair of twin sons, or an OLDER boy
and a younger girl or something like that...
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From ANON - SP777 on August 22, 2006
*arms crossed....head turned to the side*

I'm not saying not one word about how #27 ended! Not. One. Word!
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From ANON - nette on August 22, 2006
nnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooo. i cant believe that wench did that. that....that...was just wrong. and poor dante, just gave birth, lying unconscious and his brother and ex wife are getting it on. what else could go wrong for the devil twins. and i wonder what toga will do when his family arrives and when he finds out what trish did. cant wait to read more so update soon. k. ; )
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From ANON - LadyIvy on August 22, 2006
Poor Dante -- I feel so sorry for him. Stupid Trish. I hope she's the bitch to whom Toga's referring. I hope she goes down soon because I can't stand her. Vergil's an ass, and I really, really, really hope that Dante doesn't awaken to the scene of his brother screwing his wife. Talk about messed up.

Can't wait for the rest of the Inu family to arrive. It's going to be hell, literally. Sesshomaru bows to no one, and as Inuyasha can provide him with heirs, he doesn't need a female mate. Let's just hope he's diplomatic about it (yeah right!).
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From ANON - D/H on August 15, 2006
Great story..It's sad too hear that, Inu/Sess only has a daughter..I rather wished their first would or should
have been a boy..I hope too see more pups, preferably males..

Great story..I really enjoyed this one and hope you update soon..
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From ANON - nette on August 13, 2006
is trish going to do what i think she's going to do. please tell me she will not use sesshy. omg this story is getting better every time i read it. and yes the teasers add to the excitement (though they're still cruel). and nnnnnnnnnooooooo dante can't lose the baby. nothing seems to be working out for the brothers. (sobs) please have something good come out of the next chapter, or at least having the brothers show a little ways of making up. :)
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From ANON - SP777 on August 13, 2006
about # 25...

*laughing* You know what, you got Sesshomaru's move down to the letter T WITH every 'i' dotted. :-)

Don't you just envy the way he can do a move like that AND still
be considered masculine?

Oh, and I LOVED how you had him explain about the true mating
of Demons & Devils, I felt like Trish...hit upside the head with a
sledgehammer!

*sigh* I wish I could do that...well in a way I can, but not in such a
refined, elegant, intelligent & poised way.

Hey! I guess that compliment pertains to you since YOU came up
with it. :-)
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about #26...

Yeah we are definitely in Angst Central now, if it isn't Inuyasha, it's Dante.

Hopefully Sesshomaru comes through, if it's not too late.

By the way, where IS Dante's older child? I know you said she was given to neighbors but where is she now?

Side note: I noticed you've become a regular updating machine, but you better pace yourself, nothing worse than experiencing a sudden burnout.
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From ANON - LadyIvy on August 13, 2006
Sorry I didn't review for the previous chapter--you updated too fast =). Anyway, that Vergil is really on my hit list as I like him less and less as the chapters progress. Stupid bastard thinking that the children aren't his, putting his pregnant mate through all that stress. Anyway, poor Dante. I hope the baby is ok, and if it is not, that Sesshomaru can revive it with Tenseiga. It shouldn't have to suffer for it's fathers' stupidity (and I say both fathers because although Vergil left him, Dante should have had enough sense to take better care of himself in deference to the life inside him).

Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are too funny. Inuyasha's lack of shame at feeding his child is refreshing. He shouldn't have any. hehe. If everyone else is at the dinner table eating, why can't Mizuki eat? Granted, she's breastfeeding, but who really cares (other than Miroku)? Their horniness is hilarious, btw. With the way they're going at it, I wouldn't be surprised if Inuyasha ended up pregnant very soon. At the rate they're going, it seems that we shall have an army of little dog demons.

That teaser was messed up. What the hell is Trish up to now? What did she give Vergil that would make him want her? Does anyone stop her in time? *sigh* I'll be waiting on pins and needles for this next update...
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From ANON - nette on August 12, 2006
that teaser was cruel. i wonder what happened i hoped he didn't hurt himself or the unborn baby. and having sesshy lay the ground down for trish was priceless. he was the right person to tell her off even if dante thought it was kind of harsh, she needed to know that dante was no longer hers but vergils. and what did vergil mean he was unable to produce offspring, did something happen to him to become sterile? anyway cant wait to read more and hopefully things will work out for the brothers. *crosses fingers* i hope. :)
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From ANON - SP777 on August 12, 2006
Well since I missed out on reviewing #23, I'll settle for #24...

There's something endearing about seeing ''Sesshomaru's Little Princess'' it makes you want to say, 'Awww...' :-)

But I think Kagome DESERVED that damn shock, the impulsive lil'...*grr*
It would have been sweet justice If Toga {Inutaisho] caught ALL of them & embarassed their butts into next week.

Oh, I gotta mention... Inuyasha isn't going to have breasts for long, right? O_O
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From ANON - LadyIvy on August 12, 2006
LOL. That flashback was hilarious. You would think that Kagome would learn not to barge into a room with closed doors, especially when someone tells her to wait, but oh well...The scene was great. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru were having sex all over the dining room table (that I hope was replaced), while his friends were either too shocked or voyeuristic to remove themselves. I laughed at Miroku's reaction--of course he found the whole scene incredibly hot. I'm surprised he didn't pass out. I wonder if Toga experienced the same sexual boon with Sesshomaru's mother...

Yay! Sesshomaru admits his love for his mate. I'm glad Inuyasha was awake to hear it. He deserves it, and it's about time Sesshomaru told him. Mizuki sounds precious, and it's fitting that Sesshomaru has a daughter first, so he can learn how to dote upon his child.

I really hope Vergil and Dante figure out their issues next chapter.
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From ANON - nette on August 12, 2006
ooohhh great chapter. that was freaking hilarious having inu's walk in on them having a 'private moment'. i would have luved to see their faces when they saw that, especially miroku's. lol. anyway this was a nice chapter, showing another side to sesshy which i think is him in character though we don't see it like that in the anime. they had a girl too cute. i can see her being a daddy's girl and sesshy doing anything for her. and toga being grandpop will surely do anything for her. anyway cant wait to read more. and i hope the dante/vergil make up, i would hate to see dante hurt by his brother again. :) oh and hope you feel better.
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From ANON - nette on August 08, 2006
i luv this story. sorry i didnt review last time but i am now. yeah you finally made inu/sessh parents. i can see it now, the inu household will never be the same again. and what about vergil/dante. i hope they can patch things up before its too late. oh so much drama and that trish, what is she up to. so i dont even have to say it you know the routine and keep up the great writing. :)
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From ANON - MewMew2 on August 08, 2006
Sorry for not reviewing, but I've been really busy lately and my power went out about 3 weeks ago an came on last thursday. I t Sucked. ANyways, nice update and your story seems to be running smoothing at least that's my opinion. Thank you for updating, and I paitently await the next with egear anticipation; as strange as that may look in type considering the opposites used in the sentance. May you continue to be inspired, and may your plot not get lazy!
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From ANON - LadyIvy on August 07, 2006
Damn, that Vergil's a right bastard, isn't he? He couldn't even listen to his mate before he flew off the handle. Poor Dante--he deserves better. He at least should have a mate who will listen to what he has to say before punching him, especially after he told him he was pregnant. Ass.

At least Sesshomaru got his act together. He finally has the heir he needs so that no one can contest his mating, and his brother has been able to fill somewhat the hole that was left when the first set of pups died. Toga's in awe, as are most grandparents when they meet their first grandchild. Teary-eyed Sesshomaru sounds precious, if I do say so myself. I can't wait to see more on this family bonding. The teaser looks great.
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