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By : ArchNemesis

From ANON - SP777 on August 06, 2006
Hey! Is it just me or was that a....FILLER episode! *big smile* *BIG smile* ;-]

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From ANON - LadyIvy on August 06, 2006
Poor Inuyasha--you'd think he'd remember the signs of his first pregnancy. Oh well...I hope that he is happy to be pregnant and that this pregnancy does not have the problems of the first one. I don't know who I think is nastier--Naraku or Muso. Naraku for obvious reasons, but Muso was a surprise. Did he really think Toga was that dumb? I know the demon lord likes to joke around and stuff, but come on, he's not an idiot and he would have to be one to get with Muso *shivers in disgust*

I feel really bad for Dante. Things just can't be easy for him, it seems. Here he is, newly reconciled with his brother and pregnant as well. Trish won't give him a divorce, and Vergil is suspicious. *sigh* He can't catch a break, can he? The teaser looks good (I think you've hooked me into the story more with the teasers--they always give me ideas and anything that lets my imagination run wild is a good thing...)
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From ANON - SP777 on August 04, 2006
Sorry I was so long responding, but working overnight at the job has turned me into...the walking dead. Fear me ya'll.

1. I'll be checking out that site soon...this week in other words.

2. PLEASE don't turn it into a tail!!!!

I don't know WHY some authors out there want to turn Sesshomaru's fur pelt into a tail of ALL things! I mean Good Lord..
doesn't ANYONE watch the series closely. Can't they see it isn't
attached to his butt?!?! Plus a few authors, I have seen, who aren't familiar with the series actually go by that, IF they don't do their
homework.

I've read good stories that ruin it for me when they have Sesshomaru..and EVEN Inuyasha with..a..tail.

*sigh* I just don't understand it.

I'm sorry..I just gotta protest.

3. Oh yeah...that word Cuirass, I was SO tempted to say 'Cure-ass'. But I know better. :-)

4. I want to thank you for that LOVELY line 'where a gooey path was flowing.' in chapter 20, of all the yaoi I've read and I've read
plenty [..and I thought hell would freeze over before I would..] I have never seen such a 'description'.

I was torn between laughing & being quite baffled. O_o

..and it's going to stay with me all day.

5. About Dante being a 'bearer of life', if folks don't get THAT by now in a Inuyasha/Sesshomaru section, then all hope is lost.
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From ANON - nette on August 03, 2006
darn you nemesis. i hate it when you do that but then i dont cuz it keeps be coming back to read more. darn i wanted to know more but that whole bearer of life, i like that. so it seems dante is like inu and can only bear children not really conceive them. ok. but again with the teaser, i wonder what happened to inu, did he get sick or is he pregnant or something. oh the suspense is killing me, please hurry and update. :)
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From ANON - LadyIvy on August 03, 2006
Vergil was so mean to Trish, but it was funny. I loved his smug expressions. It's too bad that Trish didn't listen to his earlier warning--Dante is clearly his. She's hurt, I can understand, but I hope she won't push the idea of Dante being under a spell of some sort because I can't see that turning out well. Wonder what will happen when Dante awakens? Wonder if he'll be randy in the middle of the night and have sex with his brother not knowning Trish is in the other bed? That would be awesome! Anyway, loved the chapter and can't wait for the new one. That teaser has me worried--my poor Inu *sniffles*
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From ANON - nette on July 31, 2006
another good chapter with some brotherly luv from inu/sesshy thank you. dag i hope kouga's all right but he had it coming to him and wat will happen when inu turns human. oh cant wait ti read about the demon brothers and their confrontation with trish. :D oh and nice one for inu wat a way to make your brother forget. :D
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From ANON - LadyIvy on July 31, 2006
Hot InuSex! Woo hoo! Maybe it's just me, but I get the feeling that this is the first time the brothers have had sex since the loss of their pups. If that's the case, it's as much a reaffirmation of their bond (due to Koga's attempted mating--ugh!) as it is an expulsion of grief (due to the lost pups). Or, I could be reading too much into it. Wouldn't be the first time.

I love Toga. He's so funny in this story. I loved how he's fine with his sons as mates, but he's grossed out at the fact that he might have walked in on them mating. I guess it's just natural, though--a father not wanting to see his sons doing something like that. I do hope Sesshomaru's actions don't start a war, although I think he was justified. I'm glad we're going to see Vergil and Dante next chapter because I'm anxious for that confrontation. Good work, Nemesis!
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From ANON - SP777 on July 28, 2006
1. I can only guess it was the little woman 'who walked in on a very yummy Vergil and undercover Dante'

2. Where exactly is Devil May Cry???

3. I tried looking at a couple of websites to see how the twins looked like, unfortunately too many graphics make my old computer
go 'poof'. But I was able to see one with a broad sword on his back, no telling who it was.
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From ANON - nette on July 25, 2006
again another great chapter. i liked the little background you put in there to show how Vergil changed a little adn the moment he and his brother shared was too kawaii. ok i'm going to make a guess to who walked in the room......trish. ok cant wait to read more and update soon :D
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From ANON - LadyIvy on July 25, 2006
Mmmm--Hot, steamy shower sex. I love it! It was a great chapter featuring the twins. Good to get the info about what drove Vergil to stay in the Underworld. The shower sex didn't hurt of course =). I'll bet anything that was Trish at the door-it's going to suck for her because as much as she may love Dante, I don't see him giving up his brother. Anyway, the teaser as always has me wondering what our other favorite brothers were doing before their father entered...hopefully they *made up* hehe. Great chapter!
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From ANON - LadyIvy on July 25, 2006
Loved it, as usual. I can't tell you how much I laughed at the scene where Sesshomaru is sniffing Inuyasha's privates to make sure that nothing happened between him and Koga. Freaking hilarious. Toga seemed to agree with me, as he was smug throughout the whole thing. I think it's cute how Inuyasha and Sesshomaru fell asleep together, although I can imagine a headache in the morning. As usual--I can't wait for the new update!
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From ANON - nette on July 24, 2006
ooohhhh, that cliffy. i wonder what vergil meant by 'I win', does that connect to his mating with his brother? i also liked the fact u had sesshy stay in his dog form to check nu, that was funny even though inu didn't think so. :) i hope u update soon its really getting good.
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From ANON - nette on July 20, 2006
i'm glad u didn't kill kouga but i am happy u taught him his lesson. shame on kouga. sesshy saves the day but i want to know if he will forgive inu or will he go after kouga again anyway despite wat inu said. i how the twins come back soon i want to know wat happens when dante tell trisha about his mating. ok enough of my ranting. u know the drill. :)
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From ANON - LadyIvy on July 19, 2006
Glad you had fun -- sucks being the DD (I should know--I always am). Anyway, I loved this chapter. The Koga beatdown was well done, and frankly, I thought he got exactly what he deserved. When you think about it, Koga's a real ass in this one. I know he's in his heat and it's demanding a mate, but there are several problems with his choice. 1) Inuyasha's already mated. 2) He's mated to the heir of the Western Lands, a very dominant and possessive dog demon. 3) He's coming for Inuyasha after a very traumatic event. I know he's in heat and can't help himself to a degree, but I can't help feeling that he's taking advantage of Inuyasha's weakened mental state. *sigh* Anyway, I think you handled it well. I would ask what you meant by Inuyasha being weird and Sesshomaru not realizing what was wrong until it's too late, but I don't want to spoil the surprise of whatever you have planned. Great update, and as always, the teaser has me intrigued.
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From ANON - Birdie_Blythe on July 18, 2006
WOOHOO! I'm soooo happy. Your chapters rock! even if they are a little short :P
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