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From ANON - Neko on December 03, 2006
hello. . .again ^^ I completely forget, but....! *drum roll* kag/sess/youko ^^ that would be cool, but in time of hardship, either pairing is good, though kag/youko looks better in this fic to be honest ^^ tada! my words of wisdom will carry generation's to come ^^ (gah! i'm hyper now)

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From ANON - Neko on December 03, 2006
Okay, i'm glad the whole Geisha thing is sorted out, and good to know an author can accept their mistakes from time to time *some can't, for random reasons i will never understand* however *and please don't take this the wrong way* but your response to Kei's comments, in some ways, were over the top. For all you know Kei may have found your original description highly insulting *due to personal reasons maybe?) and though this doesn't warrant the type of review they left, you should think carefully before responding with such comments as they can go and kill themselves.
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From ANON - me on October 30, 2006
wow... you rock!^-^ I hope Kagome ends up with Kurama, that'll mean the story is longer too! I wonder if she'll believe that Kurama is youko... Will she be depressed when she has to go back home? WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN? PDATE SOON PLEASE!
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From ANON - Lucarna on October 24, 2006
Update Please please please
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From ANON - Nana-chan on September 12, 2006
As I was beginning to read the second chapter, I decided to click on your profile to check if you have more stories uploaded. You don't so I clicked on the reviews for this story instead. What met me were people bitching at you for the geisha thing and using a spellchecker and I just want to say: WHAT THE FUCK?

I too was slightly offended at your wrong definition of a geisha, winced your inaccurate Japanese translations and cringed at your spelling mistakes, but I don't think you deserve the bitchy reviews that you got. If you want to revise your mistakes then good. If you don't, whatever. It's your choice. THIS IS ONLY FANFICTION, PEOPLE. If the author SELLS her stuff and makes money off of this, then bitch all you want but IT'S NOT.

SO WHAT if the author has fallen into the all-powerful Kagome trap that most authors in the Inuyasha fandom has overused? You don't like it? Then DON'T FUCKING READ IT! DON'T FUCKING REVIEW AND PUT THE AUTHOR DOWN. DON'T RUIN IT FOR THE AUTHOR AND THE REST OF US WHO ENJOY READING THIS!

I have this pet peeve about spelling and you spelled DEFINITELY wrong, but I won't bite your head off for it. Yes, I agree with some of the flamers when they said that your Korean heritage doesn't have anything to do with anything Japanese (except for the fact that yes, some Asian countries especially Korea are still sore about the Japanese invasion - I know my grandparents are), but I also believe in NOT BEING RUDE.

If a person is misinformed, you should just tell her what she thought/did wrong, not flame her for it! THIS IS ONLY FANFICTION! And you, author, you should get your facts straight before posting them, especially your little notes or opinions, because as you are well aware of now, some people who know the truth are rude bitches. I speak Chinese, Malay and a little Japanese but I never claim to be an expert online because I don't want to be flamed by bitches who have nothing else to do. The internet is full of them. My advice to you is just to ignore them.

Take the high road. Apologize for your mistakes and try not to repeat the same pattern. Yes people make mistakes, so try not to contribute to the misinformation please. You don't have to use Japanese words if you're not sure about them. Giving out an incorrect definition will only give the flamers things to bitch about. I found this story on FF.net and you mis-defined Okinawa (not a fruit bat, it's one of the Japanese islands, far south of Honshu), Kitsune (not a "fox demon", but only "fox"), koumori (not a "bat demon", but only "bat"), Soramiru (There isn't such a word. Sora = sky; miru = to see, to watch), fuchui (??? Careless = nonki, uwasuberi, zonzai, nonki, boyaboya but I've never heard of "fuchui" before), kakkera (if you want "shards" or "fragments", it's spelled as "kakera")... just to name a few.

I didn't mean to give you an impromptu lesson, and I don't mean to sound all-knowing, but it really is frustrating when people give out false information. I just don't think that I should be rude about telling you you're wrong.

That aside, I'll be posting this on your FF story as well, so you're sure to read it.

As a closing point, I'd like to say that I like your story. I don't care if Kagome is super powered and I'm even willing to ignore the mistakes. It's a good story nonetheless and I hope you continue it.

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From ANON - Eternal Miko Saiya-jin Taijiya Inu Ryuu Kitsune on August 19, 2006
While what Fred may say may be true don't assume he's right about the Shina thing I know in what context you mean that it means virtuous. You mean in the context of a given name such as Shina Himura(Think Kenshin Himura)
or Kikyou Which means bellflower. Am I right? Anyways got to go. Byez.

Sayonara,

Sakura Seijiro Son Takahashi Minamino
"AKA"
TaiYokai Meiinu Inuraku Hiisho Ryuu Takahashi

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From ANON - Eternal Miko Saiya-jin Taijiya Inu Ryuu Kitsune on August 19, 2006
While you did make a mistake about the meaning of the word Geisha, I think people should learn to let bygones be bygones. The ama who wrote you such a rude review should learn that if she can't keep her mouth shut about something that's already been corrected then don't say nothin' at all. I'm sorry but people like that just piss me off to no end, Yes I can be a bitch at times but I try to be as nice as possible when writing a review. I always try to give the author advice that hasn't ben given before and at the least boost their spirits with a helpful comment or two. I sn't that what reviewing startedout as anyway? Besides I'm probably one of the few people who will admit(then again maybe not) that I even thought a Geisha was a type of whore. Whore's were generally found in Brothels from what I understand. I know now that they aren't a type of whore and that they are respected more than that, but at one point in time I didn't. As For my vote on the pairings I think that in a crossover like this the Kurama(Youko/Suichi)/Kagome pairing is prefered. I was just wondering something, though, you do know that Youko and Suichi are two seperate souls in one body and thus they have in a way merged personalities to create Kurama and as thus cannot be seperated at all. From what I understan Kurams is a Kitsune Avatar which is a being I'm still not to sure about but as I said Before he harbors two souls in one body. Also from what I understand Youko's soul will eventually become one with Suichi's. At least that's what I keep hearing from everyone that I talk to and I've also seen it stated in some fanfictions and even on some YYH websites, so I 'm not sure if it's true or not but you can always surf the web to find out, ne? Anyways I've got to go. My dinner is about to burn I think. Byez.

Sayonara,

Sakura Seijiro Son Takahashi Minamino
"AKA"
TaiYokai Meiinu Inuraku Hiisho Ryuu Takahashi

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From ANON - Dark topaz on July 27, 2006
Can't wait for more
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From ANON - Chantally on June 30, 2006
I really, REALLY love your story! It's so entertaining, and I can't help but laugh out loud at some parts! It's just so funny! I was just wondering if i can vote for Kagome getting more than one mate. Not that I want to make her into a slut, or anything, but it would be really interesting to see what sort of situations would accur, because of jealousy! But, then again, that's just what I think! Keep on writing, I can't wait to read more!
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From ANON - Jax on June 17, 2006
hey, i love your story! its great! usually i dont reveiw but i couldnt help it! anyway, i feel sorry for kagome! i bet she'll be pissed next chapter. i cant wait to find out...i still think she should end up with youko...with lots of lemons and future kits. ^.^ update soon!
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From ANON - Airy on June 13, 2006
Some people have absolutely no way with words i swear...if u want i can kick Kei's ass for ya *grins and cracks knuckles*. Hehehe anywayz i am absolutely loving your story its simply amazing and i can't wait for you to update some more. *dances around in happiness* Simply marvelous, simply amazing...IT WAS F'in AWESOME. *blushes* When you get the chance If it's not to much of and effort could you please email me to let me know you updated, THANKS. Ja Mata Airy
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From ANON - Mikonally on June 13, 2006
I really enjoy your story. I do hope you post again soon.
As far as the flames go I believe completely with what my friend once said, "They're all flamin' moron's that were probally hurt at some point and in thier idiocy feel the need to hurt others rather than end the cycle of flaming abuse."
My friend writes as well and believes whole heartedly in CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. I'm sorry you had to receive contact from a moron who has not learned kindness.

Your story is very amusing to me and a few errors is human, do not let them stop you.
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From ANON - Chiisa on June 10, 2006
Eh, I feel bad for poor Inuyasha. Oh and Kagome is a WEE bit to powerful. The story is okay but the fact that Inuyasha is VERY much out of char. it kinda killed my reading. I happen to like Inuyasha even though I like Kagome and Youko Kuruma.

Poor Inuyasha......
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From ANON - The Pink Fuzzy Elephant on June 08, 2006
WOW!! I'm glad no one like has reviewed for my one story on ff.net. So, anyway I loved your story so far and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! ^__^
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From ANON - Victoria G. on June 08, 2006
I love your story so far. I also don't blame you for your misconseption of the term Geisha. Although you didn't look for the info at the beginning you didn't insult them on purpose. You simply used your resources at hand to aid your story in it's culture and text. Many others have made that mistake if not everyone at at least one time in their life. Don't listen to them. They are hipocrits. I am at fault myself on my own level though I try not to be. Now back to your story. It's very well written and I love the way you give each character their own sense of depth. It's an amazing ability showing that not only are you a skilled writer but you accually take time to hone and use your skills correctly instead of just sending in slop. Consider this reader impressed.
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