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  • From lara5170 on June 18, 2014
    I just found this story and tried to read the 1st chapter but I could barely understand anything I read. There isn't a single complete sentence in the entire chapter, it's basically a jumbled collection of words. I tried to decipher Ch.1 and I think I figured out the basic idea of what's going on- Kagome goes to the future, her mom tells her that she was found in the well, she's not really human & she has a sister. Her sister is the angel of life and Kagome's the angel of death. Kagome freaks out, runs from her mom, jumps in the well & when she enters the past, she's changed into the angel of death. She starts running because she doesn't want her friends to see her but she runs into Keade. Keade tells her she's always known she was the angel of death because Kagome's dad told her. She tells Kagome that she needs to find Sessh because he's supposed to be her protector. She runs off in a blind panic, again, and this time runs into Sessh. The rest is just a complicated jumble of words that are basically her fighting with everyone & trying to escape. For some reason (that is never explained, because it's impossible to understand who is saying what) she doesn't want Sessh's help or protection, she doesn't want anything to do with anyone. It seems like she just wants to run & keep running. She runs away from Sessh's castle naked & runs into Naraku who wants to kill her but when he sees her naked, he decides to rape her instead. Now, somehow she's able to just touch Sessh & freeze him in place long enough to escape but when she runs into (yes, for the 4th or 5th time now she's run into the person she doesn't want to see: Keade, Sessh, Inu, Miroku, & Naraku?) Naraku, she's completely helpless at his mercy while he's molesting her & she screams for help....calling-Sessh.
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