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Reviews for Scars - Alternate Ending

By : Avarwen
  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2008
    i read all four of these stories, and i have to tell you that nothing i've ever read before has made me feel this much. these may be dark works, but they are the most amazingly emotional pieces that i've ever seen. the talent that you possess is unfathomable to my mind.

    from your bio page, you haven't been active on this site since november of 2006. that's almost 2 years! i can only hope that you are still writing. wheather it's fan fiction or what, you have a gift that the world needs to share. any author that can make their readers feel the raw and refined emotions as you have done, need to continue with their craft.

    i would have sent a much longer e-mail, but your address is hidden. i would just like to say thank you for giving us this much, and i hope you never stop writing.
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  • From ANON - angel_chick on September 30, 2006
    i hated the ending, it was too sad for me i liked the ending of the original story. well I liked all your other stories. they were awesome.you should make a sequel of scars ,the original one not the one where everybody dies in the end
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  • From ANON - zaza on July 25, 2006
    Ahhh! shit I'm crying.. so sad!
    but it is better than the original version.. really happy/sad well both ^^"" that you wrote this version
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  • From ANON - Michelle on June 27, 2006
    That is the most deepressing things I've ever read... I like that it lasted longer, but jeez, not the happiest of happy endings. I'd say this is the saddest of happy endings. Kinda reminds me of the story of Romeo and Juliet for whatever reason. I really can't decide which ending I like better... This one was right up my ally, but the other was pleasing in a different sort of way. Hmmm... There's one thing I don't get. Why would you make a deal about Sesshomaru having no gash across his abdomen, however small a fact it would be? I mean, it makes me have a false-sense of hope for a second, then BAM! All hope lost. *wipes tears from eyes* Truly a very moving peice of love shadowed with death. I just hope Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are at peace in the after life... Real bummer about the Tenseiga, by the way. Ja ne.
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  • From ANON - kresua on June 11, 2006
    OMG!!!!! This is the saddest story I've ever read....*SOB* Please write an epilogue.....please let Inuyasha be with his mate again......
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  • From ANON - sess-koi on May 09, 2006
    It was presumptuous for me to assume that Inutaisho would die, but I am glad you did not disappoint. It’s the fairy tale heart in me that says the villain, no matter who he may be, must die. And despite warnings, I read the alternate ending. It was sad but more realistic given the way the characters were headed. And after all, could Inu and Sessy really over power The Great Dog Lord of the Western Lands. I am very happy with both versions. Can’t wait to find your next story. Cheers are Applause!
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  • From ANON - ???? on May 08, 2006
    BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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  • From ANON - TsunamiBlade on May 07, 2006
    this ending was so sad yet in some weird way happy. that was so wrong inutaisho told sesshomaru that inuyasha died.
    i glad he died in this story too. i really enjoyed reading this fic and i hope you write an epilogue.
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