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Reviews for Spider Bite

By : doggieearlover
  • From ANON - koinuchan9 on May 11, 2006
    Just had to let you know that I absolutely adore your work! Blood & Tears was simply amazing!! Now Spider Bite was fun and the lemon was HOTT!! I can't wait to read what you come out with next!! You are an author to look up to! I hope my stories are one day as good as yours. Keep up the good work and I'll see you at your next story!
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  • From ANON - kim on May 10, 2006
    This story was amazing the best oneshot I have read in a long time. Please keep me on your update list. I have all 165 eps and 4 movies but I do not have an inuyasha plushie thats next on the list keep up the great stories.
    sincerely a very satisfied reader
    Kim
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  • From ANON - bluezinthos on May 10, 2006
    cute! i know, how can PWP be cute but it was! i was smiling and i giggled at the scheme kagome came up with. that totally sounds like something she would use and inuyasa woul fall for. it wasn't only a lemon, but should the kinds of things both would be going through at the time. loved it! can we expect more one shots when inspiration hits?
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  • From ANON - inu hanyou nikkie on May 10, 2006
    O.O!! Oh my.... That was Hot!!! Proceeds to fan herself off. Goes to make herself an ice cube and cold water bath to cool down. Wow!! What a one shot Literary Goddess!! It started off so tension-filled and charged. Then smoothly shifted over into a hot and steamy little love making scene. I was cheering for Kagome when she put her mind into "Seduce the Clueless Puppy" plan. I loved the little outfit she put on -from Victoria's Secret? -and laughed when she prepared herself then got Inuyasha into the room and WHAM hit him with the two by four of sensual seduction. A Bite!! lol ... and it worked!! WHoot!! WHOOT!!! You go girl!! And Go Kagome!! I take all my hats off to you!! That was great and worked out beautifully for her. Inuyasha did seem to forget that he Did promise her his protection waaaaaayyyy before Kikyou came back. How else did his sword transform into the fang. I loved it!! This was a great example of a brillant writer writing a brillant one shot!! Wow!! Are you ever awesome!! And when Inuyasha said he didn't see the bite and maybe should check again I was deliriously happy with his playfulness. I loved your wonderful use of description and capturing the characters brillantly. I can see Kagome get that flustered and irrated with the whole Kikyo dead or Dead Dead loop that she would do something anything to express herself besides using the sits. And Inuyasha reacting so true for him - being scared to be this angel called Kagome is wanting him for Who he is and not for What he can become, nervous because of inexperience and so unsure after being told all his life that he is a Nothing. Thank you for writing this delightful and ever so tasty one shot and sharing it with us!! I love your work!! Please keep up the most excellent work!! I am doing cheerleader cheers for you and your stories!!! Kudos!! Kudos!! Bravissimo!! Magnifico!!
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  • From ANON - Brittany on May 10, 2006
    All I can say is HOLY SHIT! That was good.
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