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Reviews for So Beautiful

By : jessicashae2005
  • From ANON - inifite silence on June 02, 2006
    Hey, I really like your story and i appologize for whomever has cussed you out. in all honesty I just don't read the reviews that i get when i write. which you'll find out isn't under this name. i hope that every thing is going well with your story and i hope that you do update soon
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  • From ANON - QueenRuby on June 02, 2006
    Love the story. And the chishier(SP) cat was too cool. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - i swear i didn\'t do it, i was one the moon, with...uhm...Rikku! yeah! on June 02, 2006
    I love it, but you need a few more periods. There's alot of run on sentances in it, so that's kind of confusing. i end up having to put them in myself. other than that, i really love this story. Sesshy isn't completely enraptured with her at first sight, which is amazingly rare.
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  • From ANON - Kai on June 01, 2006
    really awesome, please keep going on it.
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  • From ANON - shadows on May 31, 2006
    your doing a great job. I really like your writing. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - labelle on May 31, 2006
    keep up the good work i can't waite untill all the fluffy stuff happens
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  • From ANON - Melissa on May 30, 2006
    That sounds like my friend Jessica's problems. I'm getting scared for her, but I know she's very strong. I'm wishing you all the best and a swift recovery. Your story is very nice, please continue when you feel better.
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  • From ANON - amber on May 29, 2006
    love your story hope u feel better
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  • From ANON - Kawaii-Kirara on May 25, 2006
    It's fine wit me allthough I am a little ticked that this is an AN: and not a chapter but than I guess that you are a tad bit busy, right?
    Well when you have the time up-date, but take your time on this one, and give ALOT of details.

    TTFN;
    megan
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  • From ANON - Vyncent on May 25, 2006
    This story is very good, and has excellent potential. Your plot seems to be well thought out and even your presentation is captivating and offers intrigue. A strong suggestion, however, to improve it more. You should really proof you chapters and cut down on the run on sentences. Many of them are actually multiple sentences all run together. See the example below:

    "“So you have finally decided to wake up I’m glad to see my potion did its job, it makes you sleep till its purged all of the poison from your body, you must have had quite a bit in your system oh where are my manners I am Kaili my grandson who I am sure you know rescued you.”"

    This would read better and be easier to follow like this:

    "So you have finally decided to wake up. I'm glad to see that my potion did its job. It makes you sleep till its purged all of the poison from your body. You must had quite a bit in your system. Oh, where are my manners? I am Kaili. My grandson, who I am sure you know, rescued you."
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  • From ANON - Kawaii-Kirara on May 22, 2006
    Okay I have a few words to say that you might find usefull...LONGER CHPATERS!
    Me, myself, and I love long chpaters!
    Long chapters are gooooood!
    NEways UP-SOON! PLEASE!!??

    TTFN;
    megan
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  • From ANON - tash on May 20, 2006
    i love it continue
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  • From ANON - Amanda_chan on May 20, 2006
    I LOVE IT!!!! PLEASE JUST TELL THAT STUPID FUCKER TO SHUT UP!!! IT'S A FANFIC!!! DERRRR!!!! GAHHH!!! I JUST LOE THIS FIC SO FAR, PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! 10/10
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  • From ANON - labelle on May 19, 2006
    i love this stroy! please continue!
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  • From ANON - lynn on May 19, 2006
    I still hate this pairing but so far it is a very good story keep up the good work.
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