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Reviews for Naraku's Dildo Dreams: Cosas Random

By : MaroKuiitu
  • From ANON - Kursk on June 02, 2006

    I love irreverent humor. I love Aqua Teen Hunger Force, Family Guy, and Monty Python and I love the ridiculous situations and riotous writing and the random BS that goes on in them. Unfortunately, such irreverent humor simply cannot be delivered through written words on a computer monitor and therefore, you are doomed to fail by trying to be funny through this story. I doubt that even the best writers on this website could succeed in that endeavor, because it just. Doesn't. Work. This impass, combined with your poor grammar, inexplicable usage of Spanish, and unfortunate affinity for slang and Internet jargon, makes this thing an absolutely terrible read.



    This is the third draft I have written for this review. The wrong-headed concept, atrocious grammar, and the fundamental injustice that pervades this whole fucking thing are interfering with my ability to form complete and logical sentences. I find myself infuriated, disgusted, and saddened by it, because it is an insult to writing as an art form, it is going to cause our European friends to point and laugh at us, the apparently braindead United States of America, and is making AFF, sorely devoid of regular updates from the best writers among us for nearly three months, look like a God-damned circus.



    This is the second time you've posted this. Please do not post it again.


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  • From ANON - kitsunechan on June 01, 2006
    i have almost no idea whats going on but its seems to me very funny
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