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Reviews for Rivals in love

By : rinflowers1986
  • From ANON - Missy on February 07, 2008
    OMG!! *Is freaking out* I really want to see what happens... I think Sesshy should be in it more ^_^ lol just my opinion. Kagome o_o... I never liked her. I always thought Inu should end up with Kouga :D. I cant wait to see what happens!!!
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  • From mamarita on February 06, 2008
    I think that chapter 9 couldn't really be better. Please don't do too much to it. As for the others, I think the rape scene is pretty graphic right now. It left nothing to the imagination. I like the reworked 1st 2 chapters, but don't think too much more is needed past that. Just my opinion... Thanks Rin for a great story. DLS
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  • From ANON - jazzy on February 03, 2008
    There are still some spelling errors but other than that I think the rewrite is definitely good. I like this story and am glad to see it getting written and made better. ^_^
    Keep up the good job. looking forward to further updates.
    sincerely,
    jazzy
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  • From wolfluv on February 03, 2008
    YEA!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! YOUR BACK!!!! I AM SOOOOOOO HAPPY!!!!

    You by far are one of thee best Kouga/Inu writers I have ever had the pleasure to read!!!! I am thrilled to see you back and better then before if that is even possible! You cleaned the first two chapters beautifully not that they really needed all that much.

    I look forward to seeing any and all of your revisions to this story! I hope and pray that you will continue your other storys as well if you can. I'm not trying to rush you at all! From what your friend wrote you seemed like you needed time away to maybe get things in life taken care of I hope all is well with you and I truly look forward to re-reading a lot of your storys. THANK YOU FOR COMING BACK!!!
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  • From Darkestfairyqueen on February 03, 2008
    i really like Rivals in love.. i started reading them though at like 4 am my time... finished at like 6 just cause i took a break to each somehting.... but none the less it held my attention... i do hope you will continue this story...
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  • From ANON - Andi on January 31, 2008
    Hot.I've read the story before. I was browsing and chapter 1 was different. :D I Like it better. Gruesome fight scenes are awesome. Update the rest asap~
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  • From pontaloon on January 23, 2008
    dude yuo're writting is the shit! you super conveyed the characters emotions and the descriptions are awesome!!! dont ever stop writting!!!
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  • From solitare1 on November 26, 2007
    YES Rin! I'll be glad when you get back. Miss ya much!
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  • From szaugg on November 07, 2007
    Just saying a few things:
    1. I enjoy the hell out of this story and so was re-reading it again. I hope that someday just the right mood hits you to finish this. It's a sad thing that so many good Kouga fics don't get much attention just because they aren't Sessh/Inu. I thought this was fun and angsty and enjoy it a lot.
    2. So sorry to hear about your loss. It is a curious combination to be able to laugh and enjoy aspects of our lives and deaths, even while each loss is still painful, but if I read the last A/N right, it seems that you andyour friends have found a way to do that, so I'm glad that the joy over things is still there mixed in with the sadness. Take care.
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  • From ANON - ladytokyo aka shivonne on October 24, 2007
    awe sesshy cares. ok well I read all of this . please tell me that Inuyasha isn't going to end up with the wolf!
    Kagome that's all she does is run away. they never get anywhere, she could have said that stuff to the wimp wolf rapist a long time ago. keh! and that collor so needs to go. I had that he's her slave inu. it's not right, she loves him but tries to change him to be what she deem ok. can anybody say kikyou! Him now why would Sesshomaru revive his little brother and what was he feeling? maybe he should take him away to stay and train with him hn. ok I'm not going to keep ranting so whenever plz update sometime we all miss you. *!* (^_^)

    ladytokyo
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  • From mamarita on October 14, 2007
    wonderful story- so, Sesshomaru saved his little brother. Interesting.. Sorry to hear about your friend's passing, but hopefully, you will all recover soon. If this story is to be continued, I look forward to any updates. Peace and love to you all!
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  • From solitare1 on October 09, 2007
    Please continue this story I have to know the end!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2007
    i hope you update this soon. the story and emotions were well done. so far neither is alpha. i want to see how you work through it.
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  • From ANON - jade on January 06, 2007
    gahhhh i need more of this story.. gahhhhh.
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  • From ANON - jacob on August 26, 2006
    dammit update iv been waiting 4 months ahhhhhhh dammit do it
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