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Reviews for What the Darkness Brings

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  • From ANON - krystal on February 28, 2008
    I love your story and hope you update soon!
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  • From WalterKraken101 on February 20, 2008
    Yay! Finally another chapter is up for this story. As for people wanting sex immediatly, well don't listen to them, then can wait or go hunting around for one shots in other stories. Just continue at your own pace and please don't feel rush by reviewers looking for immediate smut. This is a very interesting story so far and I would like to see it continue as such.
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  • From marcia on February 19, 2008
    I would rather read a slow build up to sex then read something unrealistic. She has been wounded most of this after all. Why would they have wounded person sex? Doesn't sound fun. Not to mention the not exactly ally part. You're doing good so don't worry about people telling you to speed it up. I've post 6ch's to my newest story and sess/kag still haven't met face to face. Hell they've only talked once. Slow and easy is better for a more reviting story.
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  • From Hirakotsu on January 20, 2008
    lovd it
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  • From MourningRaven on January 19, 2008
    OOHHHH!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!! WHEN ARE KAGOME AND SESSHOUMARU GOING TO HOOK UP?
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  • From ANON - puppydog on January 14, 2008
    Please continue. I like the story.

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  • From Goldeneyesofinu on December 21, 2007
    I love this story... Please update soon!
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  • From SaiyanPrincessKiara on December 07, 2007
    I'm most deffinately pleased with the update :p
    I understand you lead a busy life, I myself know exactly what it is,
    I'm currently writing two fanfics on my own but have so little time
    to work on them which actually saddens me cause I love writing. You
    most likely feel about the same way otherwise you wouldn't be writing huh ;)

    I hope your other fans understand and will continue to have faith in you, I for
    one do and will continue to read this amazing story :) Keep up the good work.

    Greetings, Kiara
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 25, 2007
    I have long been keeping up on this story and yes... I like Nezumi as well and never really cared for Kikyo though I understand her anger. Bravo on the story and please update soon. Will you e-mail me when you get it updated? Thanks!!
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  • From WalterKraken101 on November 24, 2007
    Nice story, very nice story. I am looking forward to reading more of your own work.
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  • From WhiteDemoness on November 21, 2007
    *sighs*
    I seriously want to read more of this. This is a beautifully done story, you hit everyone so well. Kagome injured is almost stronger then when whole, her possible schizo type of voices hearing is an enchanting idea that I want to hear more of. And i LOVE seeing someone else portraying Sesshomaru as the subtle bishie we all know and love.
    That doesn't mean I don't want more scenes between them right away. But I realize that many things, good things, are worth the wait. Please update once more soon, I will be waiting and watching.

    ~WD
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  • From ANON - puppydog on November 16, 2007
    Please continue the story.

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  • From ANON - Danielle on November 11, 2007
    you are not a selfish bitch to want a good critique of your work. Having asked for a good critique shows that you are willing to learn from other and mistakes that they could show you, and a writer like that is something i look forward to. I personally love your idea of a line of demons who study medicine not merely to heal, but more for a great thirst for knowledge. I love your depiction of Sesshoumaru (I've been subjected to some horrible OOC sessh's, it can get really bad). I'm interested to see what you are going to do with the Shikon and Kagome since they seem to be connecting more each time they are mentioned, patiently waiting for chapter 11 and of course the rest.
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  • From SaiyanPrincessKiara on November 05, 2007
    Heya,

    I'm absolutely loving this story. I've started reading quite a while ago and don't think I've ever left a review *blushes* shame on me. It's just that I'm so badly addicted that I move from one story to the next so quickly I simply forget to leave reviews *blushes again*

    Anyway I love how you keep the characters in character, I know that's not easy to do and I admire you for being able to do so. I also enjoy the original ideas and the way you drag scenes out, even those that involve Naraku. You don't try to rush things but take it slowly, leaving as little as possible out. I very much enjoy that.

    What saddens me however is the few updates, I understand you most likely have a life outside of all this and all. But it's always sad to love a story so much and have to wait so long for updates. I hope you'll be able to find the time and update more often, and at the very least finish this story (as that's always my greatest fear).

    Please do keep up your work, you're doing a great job :)

    Much love, Kiara
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  • From ANON - miribella on November 01, 2007
    More please?
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