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Reviews for What the Darkness Brings

By : IAgree
  • From ANON - puppydog on September 08, 2007
    Continue plese. I`m liking it so far. When is Sesshomaru and Kagome going to "GET IT ON"? WHOOOOO BABY!!!!!!!
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  • From Chococat on August 04, 2007
    This was a very absorbing story. I really am enjoying it. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - bel_amour on July 26, 2007
    i loved it and cannot wait to see what happens next, please update soon.
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  • From Sannah on July 17, 2007
    Hey, cool story. I really like the idea of Sesshoumaru being a healer in addition to a cold blooded killer. It gives balance to his character, and makes the giving of Tenseiga instead of Tetsusaiga to Sesshoumaru have a little bit more sense than before. Now it benefits both sons instead of only the one. I can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on July 17, 2007
    How very interesting! I look forward to reading more of this tale. Great work!
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  • From ANON - AnimeKay17 on July 15, 2007
    You have an amazing talent for wards and forming images. I love the story line and I cant wait for more.

    Ja Ne

    (p.s your Kagome is a littel ooc, but in a good way, I think you might know some like her and you use them as insperation if so good job)
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  • From ANON - Lillian9 on July 14, 2007
    Wonderful job.
    Please update soon!
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  • From mousemaxwell on July 13, 2007
    Wow i am in aww of your story I like it a lot it is so good can't wait for the next part

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  • From szaugg on June 27, 2007
    I think I read this waaaaay back, and then lost sight of it. glad to find it again, all pretty and shiny new. :-) looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Pucie on June 26, 2007
    Ok, I had to leave another review about the flame from "GreenTeaLeaves". I just read it, and that review was so completely ridiculous. This is fanFICTION. . . . .HELLO! And I have to agree with you: A.This is YOUR story, you are the writer, ergo it is written the way you want it to be. B.Some ppl have this great thing called a life, it sometimes gets in the way of spending hours researching "The Entire History Of Japan and Europe and the Interactions of the people therein" and lets not forget the ever fascinating "Japanese and European Fashion Styling for the Past 1500 YEARS". If someone doesn't like a story, well let me give them a hint on how to handle this situation, DON"T READ THE STORY ANYMORE!! I swear some people can be so incredibly idiotic sometimes that it just comes off as pathetic. Anyway, I will end by saying once again that I love this fic. I read it when it was first posted before the rewrite, and I like it both ways. But I have to admit, I really like the new direction you're taking it in. Kudos to you!
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  • From ANON - Pucie on June 26, 2007
    I like the way you've redone this one. This is a fabulous story, and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - TeaLeavesGreen on June 25, 2007
    ummm... I think you need a little bit of a history lesson. Inuyasha takes place around, what, 1500? The first westerners to step on Japanese soil were a few Portuguese adventurers aboard a Chinese ship that landed at Tanegashima in 1543. Excepting what the Inu-tachi might have learned from Kagome herself, no one in Japan knows the west even EXISTS. Naraku would have no way of knowing about England. Christopher Columbus, heartless prick though he was, died in 1506, if that gives you any perspective on the timeline. Da Vinci finished the Mona Lisa around that time, too. This is BEFORE the Spanish subjugate Mexico, before Martin Luther gets his Reformation on, before the really dire parts of the Inquisition, before the Ottoman's attempt siege on Vienna, and before King Henry the Eight and all of his wives. This is really freaking long ago. Much of the world was unknown, even to the "civilized" nations of the West.

    Furthermore, I think you'll find that European fashion at the turn of the 16th century was quite different from what you have described.

    If you had a really good plot device that accounted appropriately for the total lack of ANY lingua franca, massive culture shock on both sides, her likely refusal to eat Japanese food, Naraku's aspirations upon realizing that the world exists outside of feudal Japan and coastal China, and so forth, it could be interesting. However, you don't. There are a variety of books and online resources cataloging how the Japanese regarded the westerners, and vice versa, upon first encounter. When the first Japanese to ever set foot in America did so, in the very early meiji period, they had many hilarious and often unkind things to say about the ugly white people with their silly mannerisms and indecent women. You include none of this. (As We Saw Them is an amazing historical analysis of this trip.) Feudal era Japanese people would be even more bewildered. On the flipside, the Westerners had their own disparaging opinions of the Japanese for quite a while, though Japan gained popularity during the Rennaisance because Marco Polo lied and made them out to be incredibly wealthy.

    History is important, yo. It SERIOUSLY fucks up your story that you have an Englishwoman in Japan before any European nation ever landed there.

    /history rant
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  • From ANON - Tiffinie on June 21, 2007
    Oh, this was getting good to. I always new Inu had a softer side, he just doesn't show it enough. Can't wait til you update.
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  • From cocoke5 on June 21, 2007
    yes that chapter was good and i can not wait for the next chapter of the story and see what happen next to kagome and see if she get his arm for him . up date soon.
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  • From bluemoon175 on June 21, 2007
    :( I was sad that's all I could read for now, but I can't wait for the next update so I hope you udpate asap please.
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